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Fragile Identity Poem

Updated on July 23, 2017
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Rhyming Poems that I hope you enjoy reading, as much as I enjoy writing! I love to rhyme words, and it keeps me awake at night, sometimes!

Identity Crisis

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Identity Crisis

We all have changing moods, now and then. Some personalities can seem more fragile than others, though. This is my humorous take on a Fragile Personality which I have been known to have due to my ongoing Identity Crisis. I must say, however, my identity has become stronger over these last few years!

Center of Attention


I am extremely

shy, when

I am not

the center

of attention,

Introvert


And, I do not

have much to say,

when I do not have

a thousand

things to mention!

Down to Earth



I am generally

down-to-earth,

when I am not

floating on

a cloud,

Extrovert


And, I tiptoe

all around,

when I am not

being clumsy,

and so loud!

Epic



I am rather

subdued,

when I am not

telling everyone,

(and their brother),

my epic Life's Story,

Clumsy!


And, I like

watching musicals,

when I am not

watching something

gory!

The Lord



I bow down

before The Lord,

but in His Victory,

I stand forever tall;

Strange


I am really so

many things,

you see,

but I am also

nothing much at all!

Lloyd Price- Personality

Personality Changes

Acceptance

Personality Style

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© 2017 Tamara Yancosky

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      Tamara Yancosky 6 weeks ago from No Idea Where

      Thank you, Casey, very much :-)

      Hugs,

      Tamara

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      Mike and Dorothy McKenney 6 weeks ago from United States

      Very cute; love the anime pictures. You're a talent for sure.

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      Tamara Yancosky 2 months ago from No Idea Where

      I think normalcy is a cross between being sort of crazy, and being sort of reasonable. LOL...

      Love,

      Tamara

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      manatita44 2 months ago from london

      Nice and self-explanatory. A noble effort. Well done!

      Yes. What is 'normal?' Don't know really. Much Peace.

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      Tamara Yancosky 3 months ago from No Idea Where

      La La La....I like to sing songs, and write them :-) Thank you so much for your comments!

      Hugs,

      Tamara

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      Brent Williams 3 months ago

      Had to laugh at the picture of the young lady falling. Very creative writing. Your poems are fun to read almost like singing a song.

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      Tamara Yancosky 5 months ago from No Idea Where

      I just wrote you a long reply, and they only allowed my "thank you" to you! Strange

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      Tamara Yancosky 5 months ago from No Idea Where

      Awwe, thank you

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      Luke Holm 5 months ago

      Nice! It looks much better and the images seem more relevant. HubPages likes full sized images, so expand them to full size whenever possible. Also, be sure to use royalty free images as much as possible (to avoid copyright issues), especially if you want to monetize your site later on. To find royalty free images, go to advanced search for Google images. Click usage rights and choose free to share, even commercially.

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      Tamara Yancosky 5 months ago from No Idea Where

      I see... so, I added some images before I got this next reply of yours, and I didn't know how to move the pictures around before, but now I do! I have to run some errands, but when I return, I will practice and try some of these ideas that you mentioned! I would like to try making text boxes.

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      Luke Holm 5 months ago

      So, when you are typing the text, that is a text box. You can add more text boxes, creating the potential for breaks (and then pictures) within the poetry/stanzas. You can also add polls, videos, charts, etc. You'll figure it out. It took me a few days to get it down too.

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      Tamara Yancosky 5 months ago from No Idea Where

      Hey Luke, thank you for your lovely comment. Yes, ABCD Poem- not sure about EFGD..lol. I will attempt to do as you suggested and breaking up the stanzas into different text boxes, and putting pics in between the stanzas :-) I am not sure what it means to put them into different "text boxes", though. I am new on Hub. I really, really appreciate your feedback and advice more than I can say

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      Luke Holm 5 months ago

      Tamara, nice poem! I thought it flowed well and especially liked the end rhymes for each coupled stanza. Is this an ABCA poem? It looks more like an ABCD EFGD poem. Might I suggest breaking up your stanzas into different text boxes? That way you can put pictures in between stanzas if you'd like. When using pictures, I think you get a higher score if the pictures relate to the hub/words. Regardless, your poem was great! Keep up the good work!