How to Write Flash Fiction and Tell a Story in a Few Words
What is Flash Fiction?
Flash Fiction is the modern term applied to a very short story; usually one under 400 words in length. There is no generally accepted definition and some argue the term only applies to stories of less than 300 words and others say that any story under 1,000 words qualifies as flash fiction. Whatever the agreed length of flash fiction, it should still contain all the elements that you would expect to find in a longer story.
Flash fiction must have a beginning, middle and an end. For the story to have resonance there must be some change in action or motivation of the protagonist. The reader needs to feel that there is some kind of plot resolution by the end of the story.
Many people say that writing to such a tight brief is difficult. It is certainly a different skill to that of writing a novel. Flash fiction requires brevity. An author must convey character and plot in a succinct manner and make every word count.
For sale: baby shoes, never worn.— Ernest Hemingway
One of the most famous examples of flash fiction is a six word story usually attributed to Ernest Hemingway (although some say it predates him).
“For sale: baby shoes, never worn.”
He is said to have penned this six word short story in response to a bet. It may have been inspired by news published in The Spokane Press on May 16th 1910 entitled "Tragedy of Baby's Death Revealed in Sale of Clothes."
The words “For sale: baby shoes, never worn” engages your emotions because of the sadness implicit behind the final words. You are left wondering why a person had to sell the baby's shoes. Perhaps a baby was still-born or maybe a woman had an abortion after a rape? There are endless possibilities once you start to think about it.
I find the discipline of writing very short fiction requires me to concentrate on the heart of the story in order to reduce it to its bare bones. I wrote the flash fiction story “Coffee Break” (below) when I was trying to resolve a problem I had at work. I wanted to persuade my employer that they would benefit by allowing me to reduce my working hours. I chose to limit this flash fiction story to 350 words.
"Coffee Break" (A story about wanting to reduce working hours)
The foam from the coffee made a frothy moustache on her upper lip. Susie looked around the café feeling embarrassed and wiped it away quickly. Her green eyes met those of the elderly gentleman sitting at the next table.
“I’m always doing that” she said. Then she wondered why she had bothered to make a comment about something so insignificant.
He nodded in sympathy. “Be thankful you haven’t got a beard like me. My Louise is always nagging me to remove the odd crumb or drip of soup that’s got lodged there.” A small grin passed over his tired face as he thought about his long suffering wife.
Susie smiled back at him and then picked up her pen and notepad once more. This coffee break was just an excuse to take her mind off her immediate problem of not enough hours in each day.
How could she get her boss to agree to her going part-time? She stirred her spoon round the half empty mug and scooped up the foam that was still clinging to its sides. “Mm I love the smell of fresh cappuccino”.
The old man stood up to go. Before he left he leant over and said “Thank you for brightening my day”. Susie was surprised. She’d been so engrossed in her own thoughts that she had forgotten all about the other customers. She had made her plan and was keen to go straight to her boss to try it out.
“Employ me in short bursts and like a cappuccino I will be exciting and refreshing. If I have to work long hours I become like a leftover cup of coffee, stale and uninteresting. Shorter hours will help me give you a quality performance rather than a greater quantity of mediocre work.”
Janice, her boss, started to smile. “I’ve got to hand it to you. You have a wonderful way of getting me to see your point of view. I’ll get back to you on it, but I’m pretty sure we can work something out to suit both of us.”
Have you ever changed your working hours?
Asking Awkward Questions
There are many occasions where it is necessary to ask a difficult or awkward question. The workplace situation in my story is a common one for serious questions to arise that need to be asked (and answered). There are also lighter scenarios in which it can be just as difficult to broach the question. The YouTube video below is one such lighthearted example.
When was the last time you asked someone if they would mind holding your balloon for a moment? What was the result (or what do you think the result would have been)? This may be a daft example, but it illustrates the awkwardness of asking a difficult question when the recipient cannot immediately see any benefit to them of granting your request. It is also exactly the kind of interaction that makes a great topic for flash fiction. The interaction has a start, a middle and an outcome. It can be funny, whimsical, frightening or informative; it’s your choice.
Asking People to Hold a Balloon
Try Writing Some Flash Fiction
Once you have a go at writing flash fiction, be warned, it can be difficult to stop! Many novice writers use the discipline of writing these short stories as way of training themselves to make every word count. You can also use writing one as an exercise to get over writer’s block.
Don’t be fooled into thinking that it requires less effort than a longer piece of fiction. With flash fiction every word must be meticulously chosen. No word can be wasted; there must be no padding in your story.
Flash Fiction Writing Exercise
Here are some quick questions to ask yourself to get you writing great flash fiction. For this exercise keep your story below 100 words and limit the time you write on each one to just 10 minutes.
1. Write about a cat who doesn’t want to get wet.
2. Write about a mole that is digging a burrow.
3. Write about the boot a child lost.
4. Write about the letter that didn’t arrive.
5. Write about the flooded cellar.
Don’t forget to include the essential elements needed for flash fiction.
If you would like to share your thoughts on this article, please add some comments at the end. I’d love to know how you got on with your first attempt at writing flash fiction.
The Essential Elements of Flash Fiction
1. Length of story
Short; can be as brief as 6 words, or as long as 1,000.
2. Character development
The character must engage the reader's emotions.
3. Surprise or Twist
The ending should be unexpected and not predictable.
4. Change or Ephipany
Either a physical change or a change of decision.