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Dear Santa: Bring Me a Twinkle Star - Part 3


English is my passion, I’m in love with this language since my childhood.Only way to write perfectly is to read, read and yet read again.




Isabella's excitement was on its peak this December as she asked Santa to bring her 'A Bright Twinkle Star' from the sky.She always admired stars in the sky all the time and wanted to look at the stars more closely. But this Christmas her dream was coming true as Santa was bringing her a shining star to brighten up her Christmas tree.

She was chuckling with joy as she decorated the Christmas tree and it was lightening up with red and gold lights.She was so excited that she danced and danced while singing a song from her school play 'Snow Queen' this year.

Soon she was tired and fell asleep.She woke up with laughing sounds of her friends and her eyes were dazzling with the bright light coming from downstairs.Isabella ran to see what was happening and was pleasantly surprised to see Santa Claus sitting on large red chair besides the Christmas tree and all the kids were around him.

Santa Claus was wearing big red hat with a dazzling shiny star on it.Isabella loved the star so much and ran to Santa with excitement.On Approaching there, she thanked father Christmas for visiting her house and hugged him so warmly with joy.

It was a best big hug a daughter could give to her father.

Continuing to Part 3

"Anything for you my little cute Isabella, your father Christmas loves ya so much," Santa Claus Replied with warm affectionate voice.

"Oh, I don't have any words to explain, how happy I am to see you here my dear Santa," Isabella giggled with delight.

Saying this she looked into Santa's eyes which were so bright and beaming with the warmth of love and affection for Isabella.Soon her eyes chased their way towards that big red hat of Santa.Isabella looked at the bright star on it and kept looking for sometime.

"What a sparkling and glaring twinkle star it is, I wish, I could have it," Isabella longed in her mind.

"What are you thinking my dear Isabella?" Santa Claus asked with curious eyes.

"mmmm, I mean, I love this very shining star on your hat," Isabella answered thoughtfully.

What happened next, Isabella couldn't believe as Santa Claus plucked out that Big star from his hat and dropped it on Isabella's right palm.She was so excited to have actually that star on her hand.She was not expecting that her wish would come true just like that.

"Aww thank you so much Dear Santa for giving me this star, it's so sparkly and shiny, I just can't believe on my eyes that I have it now," Isabella screamed with joy.

As she said this, tears were paddling in her eyes, somewhere were trying to come out of her beautiful deep eyes' ocean.And one of the tears came out rolling down on her left pinkish cheek.

Those were tears of joy and happiness which came out at the most exciting moment of her life.Isabella even couldn't figure out why there were tears in her eyes, but she was sure that the tears had some deep connection with fulfilment of her dream somehow.

"This is your gift my dear Isabella, my little child, God Bless you, it's your Christmas gift for this Christmas to make it very special for ya," Santa Claus replied wiping the tears out of her cheek.

Isabella's gift

Isabella's gift

"I was sure you'd give me what I asked for in my letter, and look Dear Santa, my wish has been granted, this Christmas is gonna be my best one ever," Isabella said with a big thankful smile.

"Of course, my dear princess, your Santa can give you anything you ask for, but there is one rule you need to follow to get your choice of gifts, and the rule is,

Always Listen to your parents and teachers, no matter what happens,"

Santa told Isabella and all the kids around meaningfully.

Isabella and other kids nodded their heads in form of yes which made Santa so happy.Father Christmas gave the gifts to the other children and there was a special one for Adam as well.Isabella and her friends were so excited to get their Christmas gifts that they started dancing together in circle, all were singing their favourite Christmas song, the lines were like:

"Dashing through the snow, in a one-horse open sleigh.

O'er the fields we go, laughing all the way....ha ha ha!

Bells on Bobtails ring, making spirits bright.

What fun is it to ride and sing a sleighing song tonight.

Oh! Jingle bells, jingle bells, jingle all the way.

Oh what fun it is to ride in a one-horse open sleigh.

Hey! Jingle bells, jingle bells, jingle all the way.

Oh what fun it is to ride in a one-horse open sleigh."

After having fun with dancing and singing, Santa was ready to go as he had to give the presents to some other kids too.Isabella's gift of twinkle star was now shining on top of her Christmas tree.The shining of that star was so glittery that it was seeming as diamond was sparkling on top and her whole house was glowing with that shine.

Isabella looked around her house and her face was flashing too with joy and amusement.She ran to Santa and kissed him saying good bye till next Christmas.All other kids were saying good bye too and were thanking the father Christmas for their gifts.

"I am so thankful to you for coming to my house, and giving me this precious gift, I will miss you whole year Dear Santa as I won't be able to see you till next Christmas," Isabella sighed sorrowfully and whispered in Santa's ear.

"You don't need to wait till next one dear Isabella, as I listen whenever you ask for something, though I can't come from North Pole because of my busy schedule, but I can promise you one thing, you would get whatever you will ask for.So I am always with ya my little cutie pie, as I love ya so much my dear," Santa Claus answered passionately.

"Ahh, thanks you so much my dear Santa, Isabella loves you so much too," Isabella replied with chuckling sound.

Santa Claus got up, Isabella ran out and opened the door, and she was surprised to see there was heavy snow outside.There was a wonderful smile and glow on her face seeing the snow falling.

"Look everyone, it's snowing heavily outside," Isabella screamed with eagerness.

Santa Claus looked at Isabella and smiled while coming out of her house.His reindeer was ready to take him to his other destination.Santa sat on his Sleigh and looked at Isabella who was ready to enjoy snow with her friends and family.

"Well this comes free with one gift, A white Christmas this December for ya my sweet little Isabella, and for all my kids who Believe," Santa said loudly while flying his Sleigh to the sky.

Dear Santa Bring me A Twinkle Star Part - 4

Isabella went to American Red Cross to distribute Christmas gifts to the poor children and she also went to Church for morning sermon where she found out the true meaning of Christmas festive.

Writer's Corner

Well I am so honoured that everyone liked my story of Isabella so much.When I started writing it, just had some idea, I didn't know I could write this long and as the story continued, I started feeling Isabella alive wishing and dancing around Christmas tree.

So Isabella is very fascinating character which has spelled its magic on me and I can't stop thinking about her chuckles and her innocent wish of twinkle star.

I am very thankful to everyone who has read this story and liked Isabella so much.I am truly grateful for coming along with Isabella and for supporting her.

Many Blessings everyone.

© 2017 Nikki Khan


Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 04, 2019:

Yup, Christmas and festive season has commenced. Get prepared for lots of joyful time, Luis. Bells have begun ringing louder.

Thanks for your visit.

Blessings to you!

Luis G Asuncion from City of San Jose Del Monte, Bulacan, Philippines on December 03, 2019:

Although, this hub was written last yet. As I found it, I remember, today, it is already Dec 3, 2019 in my country. Christmas is coming.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on February 14, 2018:

Thanks again Harsh for coming to this part and admiring my story.

Final part would be published soon as was bit busy in other things.

I hope you would enjoy that too.

God Bless you.

Harish Mamgain from New Delhi , India on February 14, 2018:

Great storytelling. Nikki, I enjoyed raeding the story till the third part. Looking forward to read the next part. Thanks for sharing little Isabela 's lovely tale.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 20, 2017:

Thanks Tim Wilson for commenting and appreciating Isabella.

Many Blessings.

Tim Wilson on December 20, 2017:

A beautiful Christmas story at this time of year.Loved the character of Isabella.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 18, 2017:

Thanks Micheal William for liking Isabella’s story and for reading it.

And Merry Christmas to you too dear.

Have a good one.

Micheal William on December 18, 2017:

A supurb story of Christmas season Nikki.I loved reading it.Merry Christmas to you.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 18, 2017:

Thanks Gypsy Rose Lee for stopping by and for admiration.Much Appreciated.

God Bless you.

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on December 18, 2017:

A most delightful story. Enjoyed.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 17, 2017:

Thanks Nell for stopping by.I am glad you liked Isabella’s story.Many Thanks.

God Bless you.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 17, 2017:

Thank you so much William for coming along and enjoying Isabella's stroy.Much Appreciated.Yes,,next part would be coming near Christmas,I hope you would have fun with that as well.

God Bless you.

Nell Rose from England on December 17, 2017:

Hi Nikki, yes I loved it very much! what a great story!

William Kovacic from Pleasant Gap, PA on December 17, 2017:

What a delightful story, Nikki. I'm enjoying this one. Keep it up!

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 16, 2017:

Thanks Madan for passing by and for liking my story.

Well credit goes to Isabella I think who tied my mind so hard around her character and forced me to write about her fascinating character and about her love for Santa and her believe on him.

God Bless you.

Have a goood weekend.

MG Singh emge from Singapore on December 16, 2017:

A fine story for Xmas. You have created the proper atmosphere. All credit to you

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 16, 2017:

Thanks Sarah Nicholas for stopping by and admiring Isabella and her love for Santa Claus.Much Appreciated.

Next part would come on Christmas to make it a very special one.I hope you’d enjoy that one a lot.

Many Blessings.

Sarah Nicholas on December 16, 2017:

What a wonderful character Isabella is.I just fell in love with her passion for Santa.All the story is described in an awesome way.Great story on this Christmas occasion.I'll wait for the next part.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 16, 2017:

Thanks Linda for coming along,,yes,,I am so happy too that Isabella found her twinkle star and Santa is such an amazing personality.

If he would be real,,I am sure he would be this much kind as this Santa is.

Thanks you so much for liking Isabella and her story and Santa Claus.

God Bless you.

Have a great weekend.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 16, 2017:

Thanks Eric for stopping by.I appreciate your comment.

Many Blessings.

Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on December 15, 2017:

It's lovely to see that Isabella is so happy. I'm glad she found her shiny star. Santa Claus is such a kind character in this story.

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on December 15, 2017:

A peaceful wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it with me.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 15, 2017:

Thanks Manatita for coming along and for Appreciating Isabella and the whole story.Your comments are always best and I admire those a lot.

God Bless you always.Have a great weekend.

manatita44 from london on December 15, 2017:

Nice! You have captured the spirit of christmas and included some gems as well, including morals for children.

The pictures are Christmas friendly and Isabella's character is great!!

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 15, 2017:

Thanks FlourishAnyway for coming along,, and thanks for admiring Isabella’s story.

There is some interesting bit is still behind to come.

Hopefully you would enjoy the ending on Christmas.

Bless you.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 15, 2017:

Thanks Bill for coming along and for appreciation.

Merry Christmas to you and your family too.

Have a great holiday.

God Bless you.

FlourishAnyway from USA on December 15, 2017:

This was a joyous wholesome story, sweetly told.

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on December 15, 2017:

Many blessings to you for a wonderful "feel good" story. Merry Christmas to you and yours.

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 15, 2017:

Thanks Frank.Smile.

Bless you too.

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on December 15, 2017:

Nikki that reply to my reply makes sense.. bless you

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 15, 2017:

Thanks dear for appreciation,,but still there is some left till the ending, I am sure you’d enjoy it.

Many Blessings.

Thanks for stopping by.

RoadMonkey on December 15, 2017:

Nice ending to the twinkle wish story

Nikki Khan (author) from London on December 15, 2017:

Thanks Frank for admiration, I am not Christian as well but Christmas is everyone’s, it’s the spirit of love and sacrifice which everyone can feel on this festive time.

Thanks for commenting first as always.

God Bless you.

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on December 15, 2017:

Nikki I'm not Christian but this story does put that Christian feel in me.. I actually am enjoying it.. Bless you big time girl

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