Dear Santa: Bring me A Twinkle Star - Part 1

Updated on November 22, 2017
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English is my passion, I’m in love with this language since my childhood.Only way to write perfectly is to read, read and yet read again.



It is totally fiction story of a six years old little girl Isabella who was decorating her Christmas tree with her Mummy and little brother Adam.However, this Christmas, she wanted something new to make it best ever.So she wrote a letter to Christmas father, 'Santa Claus' to bring her 'A Twinkling Star from the Sky'.She wanted to hang this star on top of Christmas tree to make the tree more brighter and shiner.

Its a little innocent story of making a wish and learning of fulfilling other children's wishes as well, because Christmas is not all about decorating a tree,its much more an event of learning to open up your heart and make others happy.Only then you will get 'A twinkle Star' on Christmas which will not only brighten up your house but will shine at others' houses too.

With this idea, please join me as we enter into the world of Isabella who was preparing to make her Christmas very special.


Dear Santa: Bring me 'A Twinkle Star'.

"Adam,Adam,where are you?" Isabella screamed while standing at back door of her house.

But Adam didn't come,she came out in her garden and headed towards their doll's house at the very end of the garden, to have some fun with toys and was on some secret mission as well.Isabella approached her writing table straight away as she went in.

She took out her precious writing diary from the drawer.Her diary was a very precious thing to her, which she only used for some important letters.

Letters to her favourite Teacher Ms Perry,

Letters to her Mummy sometimes,

Letters to her best friends,

Letters to North pole in previous years.

And this time, she was writing another very important letter to Santa Claus.She had been writing letters before as well in Christmas, asking Santa Claus for chocolates, a winter Snowman, a roller coaster, and much more.But this time, she wanted something more valued.

She always admired twinkle stars on the sky.They looked so dazzling and sparkly.She just wanted to hold stars in her hand, to touch their light, to feel their warmth.The stars looked like little diamonds on dark sky, so magical to see, their brightness was so sparkling.

She loved singing this rhyme all the time.

"Twinkle Twinkle little star,

how I wonder what you are,

Up above the world so high,

Like a diamond in the sky,

Twinkle Twinkle little star,

how I wonder what you are."

"How a twinkle star shines so brightly?" , was always a mystery to Isabella.Sometimes, she thought, may be its a star's job to shine brighter, or may be, God has given it some special powers.She tried many times to ask her mummy who always used to explain to her that every star once was a human being like us.

"Whoever does good deeds in this world,becomes a dazzling star to shine on the sky after he dies," Isabella's Mummy always told her.

"Well, I do good to my friends, I listen to my Mummy and Dada,I am very helpful to my teachers. So I would be a bright star," Isabella used to say with flashing light in her eyes.

"Oh, yes, of course darling, you are a little bright star, and Mummy loves you so much," Isabella's mother admired her on this all the time.

She always dreamed for a star fairy to come, and to take her far away in the sky, where she could see and touch those shining stars closely.Christmas was a best time for her dream to come true.She knew Christmas father can get Isabella anything she wanted.

"What about 'A Twinkle Star' this time," Isabella thought and smiled.


With this idea,she sat one her little wooden chair and started writing her letter to Santa Claus.

"Hello Dear Santa,

My name is Isabella William.

I am six years old.I live quite far from North Pole.

You already know my house.I have been good all year.

Whatever bad I did,my brother made me doing.

So I am really sorry.I hope you understand.

I have been thinking of what I would like this Christmas.

And I've decided that on this Christmas, I want a very special gift, Please must bring me.

I promise, I will be nice in coming year. But I want this gift.

Please bring 'A Twinkle Star' of sky.I'll be very thankful to ya.

I am very excited for 'A Twinkle Star' on Christmas Eve.

Please don't disappoint, I know you won't.

Mummy says,"Santa can get you anything."

I am looking forward for you visit on Christmas Eve and I'll leave some cookies for you and your reindeer near Christmas tree, I hope you'd love cookies.

You are my best friend ever and I love ya so much.

Thank you so much.

With Love,"

Isabella William.

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After finishing her letter,Isabella took out an envelope, slipped the letter inside, and sealed it with a red sticker on.She heard her mummy's voice calling for her.So, she quickly placed the letter inside the drawer of her table and hurried back to her mom.

It was dinner time, Adam was already there.Isabella washed her hands and sat for supper.

"Where were you Isabella?" mummy asked.

"Ammmmm, I was in my doll's house mummy," Isabella replied.

"What were you doing there for so long?" her mummy asked in angry sound.

"I was writing a letter to Santa Claus for my gift on this Christmas," Isabella's eyes sparkled with her answer.

"Oh okay,sounds exciting, what do you want this time my little princess?" her mummy asked in relaxing tone.

"Well something very precious,I am not going to tell ya mom, you will see on Christmas Eve," Isabella replied with smiley face.

"Very well dear,I am sure, Santa will get ya whatever you have asked for," her mummy assured Isabella.

Next day, Isabella went to buy Christmas tree with her mummy.Kids were very excited when they placed the tree in their living room.They were going to decorate it in coming days.

Though Isabella kept on thinking about Twinkle Star all the time.She couldn't wait for the day when she would see 'A Bright Twinkle Star' on her Christmas tree which would shine all her house up.

"Isabella was so eager to see 'A bright shining Star' on top of her Christmas tree.

"Santa Claus can get you anything, she was sure."

Dear Santa:Bring me A Twinkle Star - Part 2

Few days later, Isabella went to American Red Cross with her mummy to give Christmas gifts to the poor children.She also went to church on Sunday morning with her mummy where Isabella learnt the actual message of Christmas.

© 2017 Nikki Khan


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      Nikki Khan 4 days ago from London

      Thanks for appreciation dear,,you’ll see in part 3.I hope you would like the ending.

      Have a great weekend.

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      RoadMonkey 4 days ago

      That's a very novel idea for a Christmas present. Waiting to see how you sort this one out!

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      Nikki Khan 5 days ago from London

      Thanks a lot for following up my story Sarah.Part 3 will be up soon.

      Have a good weekend.

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      Sarah William 6 days ago

      Very well organised and wonderful Christmas story Nikki,,would be waiting for part 3 anxiously.

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      Nikki Khan 6 days ago from London

      Thanks Jo Miller for enjoying the story,,I love all these type of stories too as I have little girl hiding somewhere inside me as well.

      Part 2 is published as well, so if you find some time then please give a read dear and let me know how you felt about it.

      Many thanks for stopping by.

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      Jo Miller 6 days ago from Tennessee

      Little girls and Christmas and twinkle stars. What a lovely story. Looking forward to reading Part 2.

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      Nikki Khan 7 days ago from London

      Thanks a lot for reading and liking it Frank, much appreciated.I hope you'll enjoy chapter two as well.

      Thanks for coming along.

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      Frank Atanacio 7 days ago from Shelton

      this was a fun read.. really.. now to bounce to chapter two.. although I saw chapter two first.. but didn't read it until I checked this one out first...:)

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      Nikki Khan 9 days ago from London

      Part 2 is coming in one day.Smile.

      Happy Christmas shopping everyone.

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      Nikki Khan 12 days ago from London

      Thanks Jackie,,oh good to know you had pleasant surprise today.My daughter brought me a birthday cake saying "happy birthday Mum" on it.Really enjoyed the moment she was clapping and saying happy birthday mummy.Smile.

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      Nikki Khan 12 days ago from London

      Thanks Peg for visiting and appreciating it.I am trying my best to make this story full of childhood magics and dreams.Lets see how successful I'll be in making it full of pleasant fairy dreams.

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      Jackie Lynnley 12 days ago from The Beautiful South

      That is fine, no hurry. Will watch for it. I know about busy. Had two test appointments this morning and the second one lasted 2 hours but they let my husband sit with me and we watched a movie and something I dreaded for weeks turned into a pretty terrific day! A pleasant surprise.

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      Peg Cole 12 days ago from Dallas, Texas

      It's both delightful and magical, the wonderment of a child. You're off to a good start with this charming story.

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      Nikki Khan 13 days ago from London

      Thanks darling,will upload soon,bit busy with shopping for Christmas.Thanks for stopping by.

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      FlourishAnyway 13 days ago from USA

      A sweet story of such innocence. I look forward to reading Part 2.

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      Nikki Khan 13 days ago from London

      Very soon,,bit busy with life these days.Thanks Jackie darling.

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      Jackie Lynnley 13 days ago from The Beautiful South

      Yes, I will be anxious to see in Part 2!

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      Nikki Khan 2 weeks ago from London

      Thanks for stopping by William,I loved this lie too when was writing.Part 2 will be up in two days.Many Blessings.

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      William Kovacic 2 weeks ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

      A fun tale, Nikki. I loved this lie from Isabella's letter, "Whatever bad I did,my brother made me doing." Looking forward to Part Two

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      Nikki Khan 2 weeks ago from London

      No probs,,I am glad you stopped by.thanks for appreciating.I am pleased it made you smile.Well,Let’s see,Isabella gets a star or not.

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      Jackie Lynnley 2 weeks ago from The Beautiful South

      So sorry Nikki, didn't get a notice of this so had no idea you had something new. Glad I stopped by and caught it.

      Just love your children's story, it would make anyone smile and wish for Isabella's wish to come true!

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      Nikki Khan 2 weeks ago from London

      Many thanks for such a beautiful appreciation Bill,,I have read your story on letters from war.I must say who can be best storyteller than you are.Brilliant work.I am so honoured with your comment.Many Blessings.

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      Bill Holland 2 weeks ago from Olympia, WA

      Any story about a little child with hope, or a pet, is instantly one of my favorites, and this one is no exception. It is the season of hope and eternal happiness, and who better to deliver the message than a little child? Well done!

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      Nikki Khan 2 weeks ago from London

      Thanks for coming along, I hope you enjoyed reading it.Have a great weekend.

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      Nikki Khan 3 weeks ago from London

      Many thanks Linda for stopping by,,much appreciated.Yes, of course,Christmas is near and its a time to get ready to shine through this Christmas.

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      Nikki Khan 3 weeks ago from London

      Of course Chris,,Christmas brings your wishes and emotions to surface.Its a season of opening your heart for love and hope for good.Everyone enjoys it a lot.

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      Linda Crampton 3 weeks ago from British Columbia, Canada

      This is a charming introduction to your story. It's very enjoyable to read it at this time of year.

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      Chris Mills 3 weeks ago from Missoula, Montana at least until March 2018

      The beautiful heart of a child came shining through. Christmas brings out the shining star in children and even in adults if we let it happen.

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      Nikki Khan 3 weeks ago from London

      And yes dreams and hope are so important to succeed in life and to play your best part on stage drama of this world.

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      Nikki Khan 3 weeks ago from London

      Many thanks for appreciation,,it is a little effort to see Christmas season with a little ones' eyes.I am happy,you commented first.

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      manatita44 3 weeks ago from london

      Well, it is a great season and you reminded me of its childlike nature. Hope and dreams are very necessary for human life. Good effort.