Dear Ellie - Part 20

Updated on November 16, 2017
Photographs by Valerie: Used by permission
Photographs by Valerie: Used by permission


This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.


We last left Ellie dreading Scott's return from prison. Her feelings for him had changed. His release brought both fear and anxiety.

The moment Ellie feared most was the moment Scott would re-enter her life. That moment was fast approaching. And as the moments passed, the fear grew. Ellie was not the same person she was before Scott entered the correctional facility. No doubt, Scott was not the same person either. Of course, she had to admit their marriage was falling apart before Scott was sentenced.

For three months Ellie had lived on her own. She was getting used to the quiet, the freedom of not having Scott around. Her love for him had turned cold although she attempted to believe otherwise. The truth was, she didn't want him back. He was the reason Carrie went missing. He was the reason she ended up as a patient at Allegheny General. In her eyes, he was the reason for the whole mess. She was already choking on forgiveness, and Scott would be home in less than 24 hours.


Something was wrong - terribly wrong, but Scott couldn't put his finger on it. Ellie refused to bring him home from the jail, and he didn't know why. Other arrangements had to be made. His world turned cold.

Ellie's fear now belonged to Scott. He hesitated before ringing his own doorbell. The door was locked. Ellie peeked through the curtain. Guilt-ridden, she opened the door, and Scott burst in with a huge smile. Before he could give Ellie his usual bear hug, her hands shot up defensively, as if to say, "Stand back, you're not welcomed here."

She turned and slowly walked toward the couch. With her back to Scott, she said, "Sit down. We have to talk."

Scott knew the drill. When Ellie addressed him that way he knew there was something deeply bothering her, and most often, it was not something good. He sat back in the recliner to await the bad news. Then she spoke.

"Scott, I don't love you anymore. I want a divorce."

Scott's heart sank to its deepest depths. He knew it would be bad, but he wasn't prepared for this. He couldn't speak. He just stared at the floor.

Ellie continued. "Scott, I don't know who you are anymore. You've changed."

Scott could only think, "I've been away for three months. How do you know if I've changed?"

"Okay, I probably have. Jail does crazy things to people, but what do you see? How have I changed?"

Ellie began to answer when the doorbell rang.

"I'll get it, Babe. Just hold that thought."

Two strangers stood before him. "Hello, my name is Jane Watson, and this is Evelyn Harrington. We're from Grace Community Church just down the street. Is the lady of the house available?"

Grace Community Church? They had Scott's attention.

Scott said half jokingly and half seriously, "We were just discussing our divorce plans. Won't you come in?"

Ellie stood. "Oh, uh, Scott. This is Jane and Evelyn. I'll be attending their church this Sunday."

Without a moment's hesitation, Scott mumbled, "And you think I've changed!"

"Yeah, Sure. Have a seat."

Although Scott was glad to hear someone from the church had been visiting Ellie, he didn't like the forwardness of Jane. He was blunt, and yes, sarcastic, too, but didn't she hear they were discussing their divorce plans?

Jane continued to press. "So, Ellie, what's going on. Your husband says you're getting a divorce."

Emotionally overrun, Ellie continued. "I think that was just Scott's way of saying he doesn't want to be bothered right now, but I do want to be bothered. He doesn't understand. He doesn't get it!"

"Doesn't get what, Honey?"

Ellie thought to herself before answering, "There she goes again. She sounds like Stella. Honey this - Honey that. I must admit she brings comfort."

For the next hour and a half, Ellie poured out her heart to Jane and Evelyn. Scott didn't say a word. He just listened as 'Ellie told them the whole story. Then Evelyn turned to Scott. "Mr. Branson, how do you feel about this?"

Scott felt relieved. He could finally tell his part of the story, but instead of going on for another hour and a half he summed it up in a few sentences. "I love my wife. Always have, always will. I love my daughter, and I'll do whatever I have to, to bring her home. I know I'm the prime suspect, but that doesn't mean I'm guilty."

Ellie was fuming by this time. "My daughter is missing. He's spent the last ninety days in jails. We're behind on our bills. If he cared so much, why? Why is life like this if he cares so much?"

Scott shot back. "It's like this because I broke into an empty building trying to find our daughter - trying to do what's right!"

Jane stepped in. "Mr. Branson, do you want this marriage to work?"

"Of course, I do. I just told you I love my wife - and I love our daughter. I'll fight for both of them."

Then she turned to Ellie. "Honey, is this really what you want - a divorce? Don't you think you need some time to really think this through? Ellie, I'm glad you're coming to church on Sunday. Scott, would you join her?" Ellie's lip turned down.

"I already told you. I'll do whatever it takes. I'll be there."

Ellie began to protest but was cut off by Jane. "Honey, this is Friday. Take the rest of today and tomorrow and do some heart-searching. Don't throw in the towel just yet. Two days, that's all I ask, and we'll see you Sunday morning."

"Okay, but I don't see things changing much between now and then. Thank you for stopping . . ." The phone interrupted Ellie's statement. "Scott, it's for you. It's the school."

The ladies shared some last minute pleasantries while Scott stepped into another room to take the call. Joseph Webber, the West Mifflin High principal was on the other end. "Scott, because of the situation, we have to let you go."

Scott's heart sank again. He knew what was happening but needed some clarification. "What do you mean, let me go - as in - I'm fired?"

"Scott, you've been a good teacher and coach. If the decision was based solely on performance, we'd keep you in a heartbeat, but it's not that simple. Parents are seeing you as a threat to their children, and frankly Scott, we can't take the chance of someone being hurt. Look, I don't think you took Carrie, but you are under suspicion, and the school board has made its decision. We knew, and you knew, it would come down to this. Scott, I'm sorry."

Without saying a word, Scott hung up the phone. By the time he re-entered the room, the ladies had left. He stood with his chin to his chest, motionless from the numbness that was again his.

"Scott, what's going on?"

"I've been fired. I have no job."

Ellie was off on another rant of anger and frustration. Scott sat as calmly as he could. He knew to be quiet and let Ellie spout. Then he'd have his turn. Finally, she settled down, and Scott was able to speak.

"What have I done, Someone, please tell me what have I done? I leave a football game and come home to have our baby girl stolen away. Yes, I broke into the Brownsville Nursing Home, but I was trying to find our child. Ellie, if I didn't care, I would have never done those things."

"You just don't get it. You really just do not get it, Scott." My daughter is gone. You plant phony notes about a child-traffic ring to get the suspicion off you. You're out running to the nursing home in the middle of the night to make filthy deals. Then you get arrested. You disappear out of my life for three months. And let's not forget, I had to bail you out or you would have been arrested for breaking into your own house. And then you expect me to trust you completely? You just don't get it."

"How can you possibly justify what you're saying, Elaine." The handwriting on the note was found to be inconclusive. I did not go to Brownsville to make a filthy deal. I went to find our daughter. I didn't choose to be away for three months. That was the result of trying to find Carrie. And breaking into my own home? That wasn't me.

"Ellie, I'm going to find Carrie if it kills me, and whoever took her will pay the price. I promise."

"Thank you for saying that. You just proved you really don't get it. Whoever took her will pay the price? Scott, I'm paying the price!"

Questions & Answers

    © 2017 William Kovacic


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      • renee21 profile image

        Tori Leumas 

        6 months ago

        Thank you. I will.

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        William Kovacic 

        6 months ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        You have a couple of months, Tori. God can do miracles. I'll be praying. Keep me posted.

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        Tori Leumas 

        6 months ago

        Wow. This scene at the end of the chapter is so painful. I'm in the middle of a very painful thing right now in my marriage, so this really hit me in the gut. My husband abused me verbally and emotionally, I left temporarily to clear my head, and he ghosted me and sent me divorce papers. He has not responded to any of my frequent messages in the last 51 days. I will keep reading. I hope they can figure it out. Marriage is sacred. I hope my husband can realize that before the court date in December...

      • lifegate profile imageAUTHOR

        William Kovacic 

        2 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        I must have missed this one somewhere along the line, Lawrence. I do think Ellie is harsh and totally absorbed with herself at this point. Glad you were able to stop by!

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        Lawrence Hebb 

        2 years ago from Hamilton, New Zealand


        This will sound harsh, but I think it's Ellie who's 'not getting it'

        Scott's done everything a father would do, and he's been 'kicked in the guts' but when he needs her most, Ellie 'kicked him again'

        Yes, Ellie is in a lot of pain, but so is Scott, and the only reason he went to jail is because in situations like they faced, the police always look to the 'Father' first, and yes he did a few dumb things, but the only cop who's actually listening is Stella.

        When they should be 'pulling together', they're being torn apart, so like real life.

        Totally absorbing.

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        Nikki Khan 

        2 years ago from London

        That's absolutely fine.

      • lifegate profile imageAUTHOR

        William Kovacic 

        2 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        Sorry about misspelling your name, Nikki. I hit the wrong key.

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        William Kovacic 

        2 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        Thank you, Nilli. I'm glad you're able to follow along.

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        Nikki Khan 

        2 years ago from London

        Great work,,and your style of creating tension between characters is awesome.Have read other parts as well,,amazing story and characters weaving is so good.

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        William Kovacic 

        2 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        Hi, Dora. In my mind, I know what's going to happen. It's just not the time to reveal it yet. The relationship issues do play a part in the final outcome. Glad you stopped by!

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        Dora Weithers 

        2 years ago from The Caribbean

        Another set of relationship issues to deal with. This adds delay to the solution of the main plot. I wonder if you have already solved it, or still following where the characters lead.

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        William Kovacic 

        2 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        Hi again, Lori. This is only my rough draft. I'm sure there will be a lot of rewriting before I can finally say it's done. As always, thanks for being here.

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        William Kovacic 

        2 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        Thanks, Jackie. I'm not sure what my reaction might be if this actually happened to me or my wife. I guess that's why they call it fiction.

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        Lori Colbo 

        2 years ago from Pacific Northwest

        No need for rewrites Bill. My mind is slow. Everyone else understood Ellie. It was excellent writing.

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        Jackie Lynnley 

        2 years ago from the beautiful south

        I can imagine losing a child could make Ellie believe anything! I am sure the mind would never rest from an event like this and could go anywhere!

        Great job.

      • lifegate profile imageAUTHOR

        William Kovacic 

        2 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        I guess we'll have to see what Sunday brings, Eric. Some other things are going to happen first though. See you then!

      • lifegate profile imageAUTHOR

        William Kovacic 

        2 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        Thanks, Bill. That's what I was trying to get across.

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        Eric Dierker 

        2 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

        This was great. It reminds me very much about preaching and counseling. There is a place for brimstone but far more often our faith should compel us to listening in a loving way.

        Maybe hope is all they get from Sunday.

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        Bill Holland 

        2 years ago from Olympia, WA

        That just oozed pain. So many times fiction mirrors reality. That same scene is happening across the country as we read this. Humans are complicated and life can be painful...excellent chapter.

      • lifegate profile imageAUTHOR

        William Kovacic 

        2 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        You make some good points, Tamara. Her daughter is the focal point - and yes, there will be more. Thanks for following.

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        William Kovacic 

        2 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        Hi, Lori. I think Ellie's point is coming from fear of another disappointment. Rather than be traumatized twice, she already accepts the fact that Scott is guilty although there is nothing that points to that. Her insecurities are magnified through the lens of Carrie's disappearance. Thanks for making that point. I may need to rewrite some so that it's better understood. And I hope my explanation makes sense.

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        Tamara BBYCGN 

        2 years ago from Uninhabited Regions

        I understand what Ellie is saying, I think. It’s not so much about “Who” took Carrie, but that Carrie is GONE.

        For the abducter to “pay the price” just doesn’t matter, anymore, because Ellie’s heart is so crushed, and butchered over the fact that she is not with her daughter, and this is all that matters- her daughter.

        Will there be more, Bill?

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        Lori Colbo 

        2 years ago from Pacific Northwest

        Oh my, what a painful scene. You did it well. I'm not sure I get Ellie's point either. I hope they make it work.


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