Caribbean Story Part 3: Change Happens

Updated on February 14, 2018
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Caribbean Story shares memories of a Caribbean writer, including bits on parenting and other lifestyle aspects influenced by the culture.

Caribbean Story features the nurture and influence of Miranda Davis' grand-mothers. Part 1 introduces her conception in a disadvantaged household. In Part 2, an adult Miranda recalls events that transpired before she was born, as told to her by her mother and grandmothers. In this episode, baby Miranda is born and another significant change happens.

Characters In Order of Appearance

Role / Relation to the Baby
Mattie Spooner
Paternal grandmother
Myra and Mona Spooner
Mattie's daughters, baby's aunts
Manny Spooner
Mattie's son, baby's father
Janie Davis
Mother to the baby's mother, Lulu
Henry and Josie Davis
Lulu's siblings, the baby's aunts

The Spooner's Household

Caribbean folks do not force an adult child out of the house, except he begins to “play man” or she begins to “play woman” in disregard of the parent’s authority. As long as the young adults abide by the rules of the house and cooperate with the family agenda, they can remain at home until they get married, migrate or make their own decisions to leave.

It is not surprising then, that Mattie Spooner’s three adult children still lived with her. Myra, age twenty-five, worked as a housemaid for the City Bank manager from England. Mona, twenty-one cared for the children of a City Grammar School teacher, also from England. Manny, age nineteen worked as a general laborer at the City Sugar Factory. Mattie was married, but soon after Manny was born, her dark-skinned husband migrated to another island convinced that the infant was too light-skinned to be his child. He never wrote to Mattie, but his daughters occasionally received letters with dollar bills included.

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Credit: Epack Polymers Pvt. Ltd. | Source

The Spooners of Tamarind Alley were better off than the Davises of Seaside Village, and were considered a class above them. Their house, made from lumber, was painted inside and out, and sported a verandah. Their living room had ample seating accommodation and their dining room had a table, around which they actually sat to eat. Matronly Mattie had her own bedroom and the handsome, popular Manny had his. Her two glamorous daughters shared a room.

Manny’s level of luxury compared with Lulu’s stifling living arrangements (described in Part 1), and his light complexion compared with Lulu’s dark skin were enough to render him too good for her. In the absence of racism, classism could be almost as dangerous.

Easter Tidings

The first Sunday in April, 1947 (April 6) Mattie Spooner and her children were seated for their Easter Sunday breakfast when they heard a knock at the door. Mona reluctantly pulled away from the sight and scent of fried johnny cake and stewed saltfish to answer the visitor.

It was Janie Davis. “Good Morning, Miss Mona. Please tell you all mother that I’m going to get the midwife for Lulu.” She left.

Mona called after her. “Tell Mamma, or tell Manny?”

“Child, don’t bother me. Tell whoever want to know.” Janie would apologize later for her brash response.

Mattie pushed away from the table to run after Janie. Manny also left, but not even he knew where he was going. Myra and Mona were not vested enough to forsake their food.

Credit:  Jehan Can Cook
Credit: Jehan Can Cook | Source

“Tell me why Manny went down to Seaside Village.” Mona managed between chews.

“To see Lulu?” Myra laughed out loud and eventually choked.

Mona was serious. “He could choose from so many girls in Sandy Town (general area including Tamarind Alley, Seaside Village and other small vicinities), and so many of them like him. Lulu doesn’t even talk to us.”

“I bet she talked to Manny.” Myra was still giggling.

“This is not funny, Myra. Will you go down to Seaside Village to see Manny’s child?”

“It’s an Easter baby. That might be significant even if the birth place isn't."

The Main Event

Janie and Mattie walked together down the dusty dirt road toward the thatched house where their grandchild would be born. Janie expressed her disappointment that the new housing program launched by the Worker’s League did not place her in the first batch to be moved into a government prefab home.

"You know, Miss Mattie, the social worker tell me that they had cases in Seaside Village worse than mine. She talk about a family with ten children. The oldest boy used to kneel down to sleep; he didn't have anywhere to lay down. She make me to believe that it could be four more years before my turn come."

"You'll survive. Don't worry."

Immediately on arrival, Janie gave her orders: “Henry, go see how the goats doing and move them around. Josie, go help him keep them together.”

There was only room for the midwife around the bed, so Janie and Mattie stayed outdoors not wanting to be too close. They talked on and on about what the baby would need, and how they would contribute.

“So you think Manny will ever come to see Lulu?” Janie's curiosity could hold out not longer.

“Don’t worry about Manny, Miss Janie. The baby will do fine."

“The devil himself” Janie squinted and pointed toward Manny approaching them on his bicycle.

“Good day, Miss Janie,” he said coyly, and the next sound was that of the baby screaming.

Credit: Sander van der Wel
Credit: Sander van der Wel | Source

Mattie and Janie collided in the doorway, on their way to the bedroom. With a smile and a look of satisfaction, she motioned them to retreat. “The father gets the first view.”

While Janie fussed at the preference he received, and Mattie tried to quiet her, citing that she got her wish, Manny instantly became a father.

“Hush baby girl, your Papa’s got you in his arms and he loves you. You're so beautiful like Miranda (and the name stuck). I'll do whatever it takes to care for you.”

“What about the mother?” Janie tried to interrupt, but Manny was lost to every sight and sound except the bundle in his arms.

“You’ll come often to see the baby?” the midwife inquired as she took the baby from him.

“I wish she could remember me holding her.”


Manny rode off on his bicycle and the grandmothers got their chances to cuddle the baby. Janie and Lulu already knew that the only available space for the newcomer to sleep was between them on the makeshift bed. Mattie inquired and Lulu said she felt fine. The baby lay in a beautiful, peaceful bundle beside her.

Suddenly, shattering the peace, came a piercing holler from someone on the outside: "Miss Mattie, come quick, come quick. Manny get in a accident. He laying flat out on de street. They call de ambulance."

© 2018 Dora Weithers


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      Dora Weithers 9 days ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks Sam, for reading and commenting. I appreciate your humorous comments.

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      Sam 9 days ago

      Sorry for Manny. The accident took the taste of the johnny cake and saltfish out of my mouth.

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      Dora Weithers 3 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Mary, thanks for following through. The mothers in this story are powerfully focused. They know what's important so their children fall in line.

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      Mary Norton 3 weeks ago from Ontario, Canada

      Oh on my way to the fourth part and excited to know what happened. I like the way the Manny and the grandmothers took this event with no regard for scandal.

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      Dora Weithers 4 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Yes, Bill. An unforgettable birth date. Thanks for affirming my table of characters. Sure, try it.

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      Dora Weithers 4 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      GlenR, thanks for your question and for following, of course. These anecdotes are mostly true. This one about the boy sleeping on his knees is totally true. I know him, now an elderly man.

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      William Kovacic 4 weeks ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

      So we have an Easter baby. That's exciting! I'm waiting to see how this all turns out. On another note, Dora, I like the way you list the characters and their relationship to the story. I might have to try that on mine. I do believe it's helpful. Thanks again, for another great episode.

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      GlenR 4 weeks ago from UK

      Dora, is it actually the case that in the past some homes were so crowded that people knelt down to sleep? Or was the social worker exaggerating?

      The food in the image looks enticing. I wish you had described what the family was eating. Perhaps we will learn about Caribbean foods later in the story?

      I look forward to finding out the outcome of Manny’s collision.

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      Dora Weithers 4 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks, Frank. I appreciate you pinpointing what you like. Please don't be shy to say what you don't like.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 weeks ago from Shelton

      I like the plot and how you playlist the characters in order Ms Dora... elegantly lucid read...

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      Dora Weithers 4 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks, Eric. I appreciate your following and commenting.

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      Eric Dierker 4 weeks ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Well I am in love with these families. I like passionate people. Man o Man do I hope Manny will be OK.

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      Dora Weithers 4 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks, Kari, for asking. My intention is to post a new episode every Wednesday. You encourage me to keep up.

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      Dora Weithers 4 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks Peggy for following. Isn't that the pits when negative stuff happens? Hope they'll find a way to cope.

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      Dora Weithers 4 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks Flourish. It takes much effort to write outside my comfort zone, but I'm beginning to enjoy it.

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      Kari Poulsen 4 weeks ago from Ohio

      When do you think the next installment will be out? I'm caught up in this story.

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      Peg Cole 4 weeks ago from Dallas, Texas

      Sweet and touching events surrounding the birth of the baby and now that Manny is finally interested, oh, no! Waiting on Chapter 4 to see what's next.

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      FlourishAnyway 4 weeks ago from USA

      Beautiful, bittersweet and authentically communicated and felt.