Caribbean Story Part 1: Light the Lamp

Updated on April 26, 2018
CaribTales profile image

Caribbean Story shares memories of a Caribbean writer, including bits on parenting and other lifestyle aspects influenced by the culture.

Caribbean Story features the nurture and influence of Miranda Davis' grand-mothers. In this first episode, they learn of her conception in a round about way.

No Room for the Baby

Caribbean folks feel cold when the temperature drops to seventy degrees. So on that October evening when Janie Davis walked in on her daughter Lulu Davis wrapping herself in a sheet, she took it for granted that her seventeen-year old daughter was seeking warmth. Truth is, the sheet was closer than the nightgown when Lulu heard her mother's footsteps approaching the bedroom they shared.

Lulu couldn’t be sure, but just in case Janie noticed, she offered an explanation for what she thought was a bulging stomach. “I’m pregnant Mamma, but it’s not my fault.”

“Good Lord! Janie hollered, walking away from the half-naked Lulu into the other room. She returned a moment later with the kerosene lamp.

Photo by Chronophobos
Photo by Chronophobos | Source

Grandmother-to-Be Goes Visiting

That conversation took place on Monday night, and by late afternoon the next day, when mother and daughter came home from their labourer’s tasks on the Seaside Sugar Estate, Janie set out to do what most mothers in that predicament would have done in the 1940s.

“Good afternoon, Mrs. Spooner,” she shouted from outside the gate. “A word with you, please.”

Mrs. Spooner, pot spoon in hand, and smelling like well-seasoned steamed fish, came hurrying to let her in. “Come in, Miss Janie” and she turned around swiftly. “You could talk to me while I stir my sauce?”

“Yes, Ma’am, and I don’t mean to take much of your time.” Janie followed and continued to speak as soon as Mrs. Spooner positioned herself to stir. “That smell good, eh? Anyway, I come to let you know that you son Manny put my daughter in the family way.”

Photo by Tekesha
Photo by Tekesha | Source

Questions

Manny and Janie passed each other as she was leaving and he was entering Tamarind Alley. They exchanged "good afternoon" greetings but neither one acknowledged the other. Still, Manny's question to his mother proved that he recognized her.

“Mom, was that Miss Janie from Seaside Village going up the alley?”

“Don’t pretend that you don’t know Miss Janie,” his five-foot plump mother scolded, with both hands on her hips and her neck stretched as far as it could to facilitate him looking into her angry face. “You put her daughter Lulu in the family way, and now you forget who she is? Did you do it, Manny? ”

And so it was that the conception of Miranda Davis became known. Her mother Lulu Davis informed her maternal grandmother Janie Davis, who approached her paternal grandmother Mattie Spooner, who questioned her father Manny Spooner. There is no evidence that Lulu and Manny ever discussed their baby before she was born. Miranda’s care before and after her birth would henceforth be supervised by her grandmothers.

The House

Lulu Davis lived with her mother Janie in one room of the two-room house Janie’s mother had left for her and her sister. Janie divided her room into two. She created a living area and a bedroom, partitioned by a fabric curtain.

The economic status of the grandmother-to-be was illustrated in her bedroom. Her excuse for a bed sported four wooden boxes for the legs; a frame completed with four pieces of board pulled from the estate’s discarded junk heap; a mattress, if it could be called that, comprised of course flour bags (in which flour was imported) sewn together and stuffed with dried grass. One side of the bed was jammed to the “wall” of the thatched house; on the partition side, there was enough room to get in and out. Janie slept on the open side, Lulu slept in the corner.

There were two pieces of furniture in the living area. A plain wooden settee without cushion doubled as a nighttime bed for Lulu’s fourteen-year old sister Josie, and the daytime seating space. Taking all the available space that was left, the all-purpose table stood nearby. Henry, Lulu’s twelve-year old brother made his bed under the table, after he pushed away the tin of cassava starch and everything else toward the door.

There was no room for a baby, and Janie was dealing with that reality as she headed home from Mattie Spooner’s house. By the time she arrived, her daughters and son had finished their evening meal. They had also bathed in the kitchen, a shabby little shed constructed in the yard, with the left corner at the back designated for the bath pan. For bathing, they filled the pan with water from the public standpipe.

Fetching Water at a Public Standpipe

Photo by Emily Mutai, SUWASA
Photo by Emily Mutai, SUWASA | Source

Mental Preparation

Janie could hear laughter as she approached the door. Josie, seated on the settee and Henry on the floor were engaged in one of their stories about folks in the village they had nicknamed, so that only they knew whom they talked about. Lulu lay supine on her side of the bed, gazing at the thatched roof, which she could barely see, since the kerosene lamp was unlit again.

Janie entered, and straightway lit the lamp on the table. “What if I didn’t come home? You all would stay like this in the dark? I wish everybody would always wait on me to tell them what to do.”

“Mama, we don't want to waste matches. Only you could light de lamp wid one scratch."

“Speak properly, Henry. Come out here, Lulu.” Obedience was an applied virtue in Janie’s house.

She continued when Lulu made her appearance. “When you all pray tonight, beg God to make a way for us to get through the problems we already have, and plead with Him not to add anymore right now. Lulu, we will talk tomorrow when we come home from work. Josie, never leave this house unless I know where you going. Same for you, Henry. And don’t ever let it get dark in here again. We may be poor, but we can afford light."

What aspect of this Caribbean story is most unfamiliar to you?

See results

Questions & Answers

    © 2018 Dora Weithers

    Comments

      0 of 8192 characters used
      Post Comment

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        4 months ago from The Caribbean

        Thanks, Devika. Happy that you approve my story.

      • profile image

        DDE 

        4 months ago

        Sounds like your adventures continue to great aspects of life. Well done!

      • Natalie Frank profile image

        Natalie Frank 

        4 months ago from Chicago, IL

        I'm sure I will.

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        4 months ago from The Caribbean

        Thanks, Natalie, for finding and reading this first chapter. Hope you like the others just as well.

      • Natalie Frank profile image

        Natalie Frank 

        4 months ago from Chicago, IL

        Dora - I'm so glad I found this story! I can't wait to read more. The Caribbean is an area I know almost nothing about. Your story presents cultural aspects in the content of a fiction story which makes it fascinating to learn. Thanks for writing this.

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        5 months ago from The Caribbean

        Thank you, Michael. Your kind comment is encouraging.

      • Michael-Duncan profile image

        Michael-Duncan 

        5 months ago from Spain

        Well-written story right from the start.

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        5 months ago from The Caribbean

        Thanks Audrey. I'm encouraged by your kind comment.

      • vocalcoach profile image

        Audrey Hunt 

        5 months ago from Idyllwild Ca.

        Thanks for sharing the first part of a very interesting story. I'll be reading more.

      • profile image

        Sam 

        5 months ago

        Great start for an interesting story. How fast can you go?

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        5 months ago from The Caribbean

        Thanks, Dream. I appreciate your interest in the story and pray to write something satisfying and inspiring.

      • DREAM ON profile image

        DREAM ON 

        5 months ago

        It has been a few days I want to get back into the story. I think many of the same struggles still exist. We just glorify them to be a lot different than they really are. Taking care of a baby and all the responsibility is life changing. Thank you for giving me a birds eye view. Sweet days ahead.

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        5 months ago from The Caribbean

        Thanks, Jack. Trying my best to entertain you.

      • jgshorebird profile image

        Jack Shorebird 

        5 months ago from Southeastern U.S.

        Engaging. Interesting style. Has it's own taste. Brings you into another world -- someone's home -- as a guest. I will be reading.

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        5 months ago from The Caribbean

        Thanks, Chris. Eating the fish head is a Caribbean trademark.

      • cam8510 profile image

        Chris Mills 

        5 months ago from Missoula, Montana through August 2018

        I love this story from far away about a lifestyle that is so foreign to me. Fish heads? I bury them. Never thought of cooking them. Good story, Dora.

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        5 months ago from The Caribbean

        Thanks, Elaine. Glad to entertain you. Will continue trying to please kind readers like you.

      • neelia_lyn profile image

        Elaine PN 

        5 months ago from Philippines

        Wow, you write a good story. I'd like to read more of it. Thank you.

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        5 months ago from The Caribbean

        Dream, thanks for reading. The struggles are different, but now as then, they serve to keep us focused.

      • DREAM ON profile image

        DREAM ON 

        5 months ago

        I was born in 1964. To look at the struggles people face then compared to the problems of today. I can easily get wrapped up in all the characters and their life. You have me thinking what is going to happen now? Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift. Have a great day.

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        5 months ago from The Caribbean

        Thanks, Nell. I'm hopeful about this new venture.

      • Nell Rose profile image

        Nell Rose 

        5 months ago from England

        Hi Dora, I didn't realise you had started this, what a great beginning to the story!

      • profile image

        Frank Atanacio from Shelton 

        6 months ago

        MsDora, just had to read this again so the next part worked better for me... :)

      • profile image

        William Kovacic from Pleasant Gap, PA 

        6 months ago

        Wow, Dora! This is great! You did a great job of setting the stage for things to come. I'm impressed and waiting for Part 2.

      • profile image

        DDE 

        6 months ago

        A unique story and I admire your style of writing. The food look delicious!! An amazing story and the people are too.

      • profile image

        Lori Colbo from Pacific Northwest 

        6 months ago

        Oh Dora, I'm so proud of you for delving into fiction. It seems recently I heard in one of your comments to someone that you felt you couldn't do fiction. You are sorely mistaken. This is great stuff and I can't wait to hear the next chapter.

      • profile image

        April from Columbus,Ga 

        6 months ago

        Amazing good story. I became instantly engaged in this story by first glance, I love it.

      • profile image

        Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada 

        6 months ago

        This looks like it's going to be a great story, Dora. It's already engaging! I love your descriptions.

      • profile image

        GlenR from UK 

        6 months ago

        I found your depiction of life in the Caribbean during the 1940s fascinating Ms. Dora and look forward to reading more.

      • profile image

        Tim Truzy from U.S.A. 

        6 months ago

        From what I've read, Ms. Dora, I'm captivated. You have a beautiful style of presenting plot and leaving tantalizing "cliff-hangers." I can almost feel myself being there with these people.

        I've had friends from the Caribbean, everything you said sounded like all the descriptions, hope, tenderness, and trust in God they displayed throughout our friendship. If I didn't know better: it seemed like I was chatting with them as I read.

        Thank you.

        I'll keep tuning in to this story.

        Sincerely,

        Tim

      • profile image

        Kari Poulsen from Ohio 

        6 months ago

        Well, you caught me. I can't wait to see what happens. :)

      • profile image

        Peg Cole from Dallas, Texas 

        6 months ago

        Such an engaging story right from the first paragraph. I love it, MsDora and can't wait to read more about this family.

      • profile image

        Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. 

        6 months ago

        The first three times trying I saw a "this page does exist".

        I am glad I gave it another shot.

        You are just a fine writer. Whatever you do is worth reading.

      • profile image

        Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India 

        6 months ago

        An absorbing first chapter, of what sounds like a good story, quite close to reality. Looking forward to the next.

        How much struggle is faced by such people, who ‘don’t have.’

        Thanks for sharing this!

      • profile image

        FlourishAnyway from USA 

        6 months ago

        Oh, Dora, you are a beautiful writer and must do more. I feel such empathy for the people involved here. You have a way of describing exactly what they are feeling and experiencing.

      • profile image

        Yvette Stupart PhD from Jamaica 

        6 months ago

        Hi Ms Dora, this is great! Your story sounds very much like some of my experiences growing up in rural Jamaica.

      • profile image

        Jackie Lynnley from The Beautiful South 

        6 months ago

        Something a little different from you, Dora, but top notch as always. I love it. Was halfway through it when I got called away and couldn't wait to get back!

        I will be here for the rest!

      • profile image

        Ioannis Arvanitis from Greece, Almyros 

        6 months ago

        "We may be poor, but we can afford light!" My dear Dora,

        I am so happy to know you through your writings and receiving some of your light.

        I have never been in the Caribbean but I love it, so I am looking forward to the next part. Thank you for this one.

      • profile image

        Manatita44 from London 

        6 months ago

        A new but typical Caribbean approach. We like a good story and if you have come from a village like me, then tales spread fast!

        Let’s see how this family copes.

      • profile image

        Mary Norton from Ontario, Canada 

        6 months ago

        What a start to a promising story. Love the local colour.

      • profile image

        Shauna L Bowling from Central Florida 

        6 months ago

        Dora, this is a side of your talent I haven't seen. I look forward to more of this story. So many questions left unanswered about the conception.

        I love the last two sentences. The message is clear and beholding to what I've come to know of you.

        Nice job, Dora!

      • profile image

        Bill Holland from Olympia, WA 

        6 months ago

        This is the kind of "real" story I can sink my teeth into. I have great faith in the strength of a good woman. Looking forward to more chapters, Dora!

      • profile image

        Frank Atanacio from Shelton 

        6 months ago

        troubling sad in a way, but poverty is what they know and they can handle it the best way they can.. then to add another mouth to feed makes this tug at my heart.. A well crafted story ...

      • profile image

        Sally Gulbrandsen from Norfolk 

        6 months ago

        Having been born in Africa all the questions are familiar to me. The strength of women never ceases to amaze me.

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        6 months ago from The Caribbean

        Caribbean Story Part 1 was previously posted on another page, and following (upward) are the original comments.

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        6 months ago from The Caribbean

        Franks, thanks for your encouraging remark. I really making an effort.

      • Frank Atanacio profile image

        Frank Atanacio 

        6 months ago from Shelton

        my goodness this was indeed gripping..

      • CaribTales profile imageAUTHOR

        Dora Weithers 

        6 months ago from The Caribbean

        Thanks for following, Kari. The story is mostly true. It is based on real people with a few minor misleads here and there for obvious reasons.

      • k@ri profile image

        Kari Poulsen 

        6 months ago from Ohio

        This is an interesting story. Is it based on a real person?

      working

      This website uses cookies

      As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, letterpile.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

      For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://letterpile.com/privacy-policy#gdpr

      Show Details
      Necessary
      HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
      LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
      Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
      AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
      HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
      HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
      Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
      CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
      Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
      Features
      Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
      Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
      Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
      Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
      Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
      VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
      PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
      Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
      MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
      Marketing
      Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
      Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
      Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
      Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
      Statistics
      Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
      ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
      Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)