Caribbean Story Part 1: Light the Lamp

Updated on March 7, 2018
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Caribbean Story shares memories of a Caribbean writer, including bits on parenting and other lifestyle aspects influenced by the culture.

Caribbean Story features the nurture and influence of Miranda Davis' grand-mothers. In this first episode, they learn of her conception in a round about way.

No Room for the Baby

Caribbean folks feel cold when the temperature drops to seventy degrees. So on that October evening when Janie Davis walked in on her daughter Lulu Davis wrapping herself in a sheet, she took it for granted that her seventeen-year old daughter was seeking warmth. Truth is, the sheet was closer than the nightgown when Lulu heard her mother's footsteps approaching the bedroom they shared.

Lulu couldn’t be sure, but just in case Janie noticed, she offered an explanation for what she thought was a bulging stomach. “I’m pregnant Mamma, but it’s not my fault.”

“Good Lord! Janie hollered, walking away from the half-naked Lulu into the other room. She returned a moment later with the kerosene lamp.

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Photo by Chronophobos | Source

Grandmother-to-Be Goes Visiting

That conversation took place on Monday night, and by late afternoon the next day, when mother and daughter came home from their labourer’s tasks on the Seaside Sugar Estate, Janie set out to do what most mothers in that predicament would have done in the 1940s.

“Good afternoon, Mrs. Spooner,” she shouted from outside the gate. “A word with you, please.”

Mrs. Spooner, pot spoon in hand, and smelling like well-seasoned steamed fish, came hurrying to let her in. “Come in, Miss Janie” and she turned around hurriedly. “You could talk to me while I stir my sauce?”

“Yes, Ma’am, and I don’t mean to take much of your time.” Janie followed and continued to speak as soon as Mrs. Spooner positioned herself to stir. “That surely smells good. Anyway, I came to let you know that your son Manny put my daughter in the family way.”

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Manny and Janie passed each other as she was leaving and he was entering Tamarind Alley. They exchanged "good afternoon" greetings but neither one acknowledged the other. Still, Manny's question to his mother proved that he recognized her.

“Mom, was that Miss Janie from Seaside Village going up the alley?”

“Don’t pretend that you don’t know Miss Janie,” his five-foot plump mother scolded, with both hands on her hips and her neck stretched as far as it could to facilitate him looking into her angry face. “You put her daughter Lulu in the family way, and now you forget who she is? Did you do it, Manny? ”

And so it was that the conception of Miranda Davis became known. Her mother Lulu Davis informed her maternal grandmother Janie Davis, who approached her paternal grandmother Mattie Spooner, who questioned her father Manny Spooner. There is no evidence that Lulu and Manny ever discussed their baby or ever spoke to each other since that day. Miranda’s care before and after her birth would henceforth be supervised by her grandmothers.

The House

Lulu Davis lived with her mother Janie in one room of the two-room house Janie’s mother had left for her and her sister. Janie divided her room into a living area and a bedroom, partitioned by a fabric curtain.

The economic status of the grandmother-to-be was illustrated in her bedroom. Her excuse for a bed sported four wooden boxes for the legs; a frame completed with four pieces of board pulled from the estate’s discarded junk heap; a mattress, if it could be called that, comprised of course flour bags (in which flour was imported) sewn together and stuffed with dried grass. One side of the bed was jammed to the “wall” of the thatched house; on the partition side, there was enough room to get in and out. Janie slept on the open side, Lulu slept in the corner.

There were two pieces of furniture in the living area. A plain wooden settee without cushion doubled as a nighttime bed for Lulu’s fourteen-year old sister Josie, and the daytime seating space. Taking all the available space that was left, the all-purpose table stood nearby. Henry, Lulu’s twelve-year old brother made his bed under the table, after he pushed away the tin of cassava starch and everything else toward the door.

There was no room for a baby, and Janie was dealing with that reality as she headed home from Mattie Spooner’s house. By the time she arrived, her daughters and son had finished their evening meal. They had also bathed in the kitchen, a shabby little shed constructed in the yard, where the left corner at the back was designated for the bath pan to be filled with water from the public standpipe.

Fetching Water at a Public Standpipe

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Photo by Emily Mutai, SUWASA | Source

Mental Preparation

Janie could hear laughter as she approached the door. Josie, seated on the settee and Henry on the floor were engaged in one of their stories about folks in the village they had nicknamed, so that only they knew whom they talked about. Lulu lay supine on her side of the bed, gazing at the thatched roof, which she could barely see, since the kerosene lamp was still unlit.

Janie entered, and straightway lit the lamp on the table. “What if I didn’t come home? You all would stay like this in the dark? I wish everybody would always wait on me to tell them what to do.”

“Mama, we don't want to waste things. Only you could light de lamp wid one scratch o’ de match. ” Henry was usually the self-appointed spokesperson.

“Speak properly, Henry. Come out here, Lulu.” Obedience was an applied virtue in Janie’s house.

She continued when Lulu made her appearance. “When you all pray tonight, beg God to make a way for us to get through the problems we already have, and plead with Him not to add anymore right now. Lulu, we will talk tomorrow when we come home from work. Josie, never leave this house unless I know where you going. Same for you, Henry. And don’t ever let it get dark in here again. We may be poor, but we can afford light. Lord knows how much I need His light.”

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      Natalie Frank 24 hours ago from Chicago, IL

      I'm sure I will.

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      Dora Weithers 25 hours ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks, Natalie, for finding and reading this first chapter. Hope you like the others just as well.

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      Natalie Frank 27 hours ago from Chicago, IL

      Dora - I'm so glad I found this story! I can't wait to read more. The Caribbean is an area I know almost nothing about. Your story presents cultural aspects in the content of a fiction story which makes it fascinating to learn. Thanks for writing this.

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      Dora Weithers 3 days ago from The Caribbean

      Thank you, Michael. Your kind comment is encouraging.

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      Michael-Duncan 4 days ago from Spain

      Well-written story right from the start.

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      Dora Weithers 5 days ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks Audrey. I'm encouraged by your kind comment.

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      Audrey Hunt 5 days ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      Thanks for sharing the first part of a very interesting story. I'll be reading more.

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      Sam 2 weeks ago

      Great start for an interesting story. How fast can you go?

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      Dora Weithers 2 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks, Dream. I appreciate your interest in the story and pray to write something satisfying and inspiring.

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      DREAM ON 2 weeks ago

      It has been a few days I want to get back into the story. I think many of the same struggles still exist. We just glorify them to be a lot different than they really are. Taking care of a baby and all the responsibility is life changing. Thank you for giving me a birds eye view. Sweet days ahead.

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      Dora Weithers 2 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks, Jack. Trying my best to entertain you.

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      Jack Shorebird 2 weeks ago from Southeastern U.S.

      Engaging. Interesting style. Has it's own taste. Brings you into another world -- someone's home -- as a guest. I will be reading.

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      Dora Weithers 2 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks, Chris. Eating the fish head is a Caribbean trademark.

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      Chris Mills 2 weeks ago from Missoula, Montana at least until March 2018

      I love this story from far away about a lifestyle that is so foreign to me. Fish heads? I bury them. Never thought of cooking them. Good story, Dora.

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      Dora Weithers 3 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks, Elaine. Glad to entertain you. Will continue trying to please kind readers like you.

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      Elaine PN 3 weeks ago from Philippines

      Wow, you write a good story. I'd like to read more of it. Thank you.

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      Dora Weithers 3 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Dream, thanks for reading. The struggles are different, but now as then, they serve to keep us focused.

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      DREAM ON 3 weeks ago

      I was born in 1964. To look at the struggles people face then compared to the problems of today. I can easily get wrapped up in all the characters and their life. You have me thinking what is going to happen now? Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift. Have a great day.

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      Dora Weithers 4 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks, Nell. I'm hopeful about this new venture.

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      Nell Rose 4 weeks ago from England

      Hi Dora, I didn't realise you had started this, what a great beginning to the story!

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      Frank Atanacio from Shelton 4 weeks ago

      MsDora, just had to read this again so the next part worked better for me... :)

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      William Kovacic from Pleasant Gap, PA 4 weeks ago

      Wow, Dora! This is great! You did a great job of setting the stage for things to come. I'm impressed and waiting for Part 2.

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      DDE 4 weeks ago

      A unique story and I admire your style of writing. The food look delicious!! An amazing story and the people are too.

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      Lori Colbo from Pacific Northwest 4 weeks ago

      Oh Dora, I'm so proud of you for delving into fiction. It seems recently I heard in one of your comments to someone that you felt you couldn't do fiction. You are sorely mistaken. This is great stuff and I can't wait to hear the next chapter.

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      April from Columbus,Ga 4 weeks ago

      Amazing good story. I became instantly engaged in this story by first glance, I love it.

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      Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada 4 weeks ago

      This looks like it's going to be a great story, Dora. It's already engaging! I love your descriptions.

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      GlenR from UK 4 weeks ago

      I found your depiction of life in the Caribbean during the 1940s fascinating Ms. Dora and look forward to reading more.

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      Tim Truzy from U.S.A. 4 weeks ago

      From what I've read, Ms. Dora, I'm captivated. You have a beautiful style of presenting plot and leaving tantalizing "cliff-hangers." I can almost feel myself being there with these people.

      I've had friends from the Caribbean, everything you said sounded like all the descriptions, hope, tenderness, and trust in God they displayed throughout our friendship. If I didn't know better: it seemed like I was chatting with them as I read.

      Thank you.

      I'll keep tuning in to this story.



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      Kari Poulsen from Ohio 4 weeks ago

      Well, you caught me. I can't wait to see what happens. :)

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      Peg Cole from Dallas, Texas 4 weeks ago

      Such an engaging story right from the first paragraph. I love it, MsDora and can't wait to read more about this family.

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      Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. 4 weeks ago

      The first three times trying I saw a "this page does exist".

      I am glad I gave it another shot.

      You are just a fine writer. Whatever you do is worth reading.

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      Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India 4 weeks ago

      An absorbing first chapter, of what sounds like a good story, quite close to reality. Looking forward to the next.

      How much struggle is faced by such people, who ‘don’t have.’

      Thanks for sharing this!

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      FlourishAnyway from USA 4 weeks ago

      Oh, Dora, you are a beautiful writer and must do more. I feel such empathy for the people involved here. You have a way of describing exactly what they are feeling and experiencing.

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      Yvette Stupart PhD from Jamaica 4 weeks ago

      Hi Ms Dora, this is great! Your story sounds very much like some of my experiences growing up in rural Jamaica.

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      Jackie Lynnley from The Beautiful South 4 weeks ago

      Something a little different from you, Dora, but top notch as always. I love it. Was halfway through it when I got called away and couldn't wait to get back!

      I will be here for the rest!

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      Ioannis Arvanitis from Greece, Almyros 4 weeks ago

      "We may be poor, but we can afford light!" My dear Dora,

      I am so happy to know you through your writings and receiving some of your light.

      I have never been in the Caribbean but I love it, so I am looking forward to the next part. Thank you for this one.

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      Manatita44 from London 4 weeks ago

      A new but typical Caribbean approach. We like a good story and if you have come from a village like me, then tales spread fast!

      Let’s see how this family copes.

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      Mary Norton from Ontario, Canada 4 weeks ago

      What a start to a promising story. Love the local colour.

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      Shauna L Bowling from Central Florida 4 weeks ago

      Dora, this is a side of your talent I haven't seen. I look forward to more of this story. So many questions left unanswered about the conception.

      I love the last two sentences. The message is clear and beholding to what I've come to know of you.

      Nice job, Dora!

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      Bill Holland from Olympia, WA 4 weeks ago

      This is the kind of "real" story I can sink my teeth into. I have great faith in the strength of a good woman. Looking forward to more chapters, Dora!

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      Frank Atanacio from Shelton 4 weeks ago

      troubling sad in a way, but poverty is what they know and they can handle it the best way they can.. then to add another mouth to feed makes this tug at my heart.. A well crafted story ...

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      Sally Gulbrandsen from Norfolk 4 weeks ago

      Having been born in Africa all the questions are familiar to me. The strength of women never ceases to amaze me.

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      Dora Weithers 4 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Caribbean Story Part 1 was previously posted on another page, and following (upward) are the original comments.

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      Dora Weithers 4 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Franks, thanks for your encouraging remark. I really making an effort.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 weeks ago from Shelton

      my goodness this was indeed gripping..

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      Dora Weithers 5 weeks ago from The Caribbean

      Thanks for following, Kari. The story is mostly true. It is based on real people with a few minor misleads here and there for obvious reasons.

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      Kari Poulsen 5 weeks ago from Ohio

      This is an interesting story. Is it based on a real person?