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When the Water Touched the Sky

Candy has a goddess energy that fires up life and waters the heart. She values and respects her being and is mesmerized by love.

Falling in love is a blueprint of un-simple reverie.

WHEN THE WATER TOUCHED THE SKY


Enthralled by the lion’s roars,

The water forthwith rose.

Its first glimpse of the skies,

En-kindled fountains so high.


Is there limit, is there a line?

Won’t you go down for a while?

You’re different, let’s dine.

Can you really be mine?


Your showers were beautiful,

Touch of rain into the pool.

And we were one at last,

A beat skipped my heart.


But what was the matter?

I heard gentle sobs and cries.

I thought the sky touched the water,

And the water touched the sky?


-End

whenthewatertouchedthesky

Yet you shouldn't fear love as it protects you from all harm.

— Candy Cuanan

whenthewatertouchedthesky

Falling in love is a blueprint of un-simple reverie.

— Candy Cuanan

© 2019 Candy Cuanan

Comments

Shalini Jadhvani from India on December 17, 2019:

Indeed, a beautiful poem Candy. It's so deep and is one of those poems that will remain in the mind forever. Keep going.

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on August 26, 2019:

Hi Muhammad, glad you love it. Thanks.

Muhammad Abdullah on August 26, 2019:

I really love this poem.

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on March 24, 2019:

Thank you Md Adnan! I'm glad it touched your heart. My pleasure to share my poem and quotes with you all. Cheers!

Velcro on March 22, 2019:

Just like "the water touched the sky", your verse touched my heart ...Thanks for sharing such a beautiful piece and such meaningful quotes!!

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on February 22, 2019:

Dear John, thank you for your comment. It is indeed a gentle verse of love...

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on February 22, 2019:

Hi Dora! I'm happy with your description, it's beautiful. It's my pleasure to share my work with you. Thanks for commenting.

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on February 21, 2019:

Your title holds great appeal, and your poem follows through adequately. Thanks for sharing.

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on February 21, 2019:

Thank you Nithya. Life is beautiful.

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on February 21, 2019:

How are you Tamara? Thanks for the nice words, appreciate it.

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on February 21, 2019:

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Rose. Thanks a lot for dropping by.

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on February 21, 2019:

Beautiful poetry. Enjoyed.

BBYCGN from Uninhabited Regions on February 21, 2019:

This is beautiful and so wonderful!

Nithya Venkat from Dubai on February 21, 2019:

Beautifully written.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on February 21, 2019:

A very well-written and gentle verse of love.

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on February 21, 2019:

Thanks for reading, Amani.

Amani Utembu from Nairobi -Kenya on February 20, 2019:

Great job.

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on February 20, 2019:

Hi Deborah. Thank you. Just like falling in love, it's always beautiful, even when it hurts. ;)

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on February 20, 2019:

Thank you Clive, I appreciate it.

Deborah Demander Reno from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD on February 20, 2019:

That was beautiful.

Namaste

Clive Williams from Jamaica on February 20, 2019:

very nice

Candy Cuanan (author) from Davao City, Philippines on February 11, 2019:

Thank you, Cornelius. I liked your description. That was exactly how I want people to feel about it and its message.

Cornelius Nolitta from Roma, Italia on February 08, 2019:

very tender, I like it!