When the Water Touched the Sky

Updated on September 5, 2019
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Candy has a goddess energy that fires up life and waters the heart. She values and respects her being and is mesmerized by love.

Falling in love is a blueprint of un-simple reverie.

WHEN THE WATER TOUCHED THE SKY


Enthralled by the lion’s roars,

The water forthwith rose.

Its first glimpse of the skies,

En-kindled fountains so high.


Is there limit, is there a line?

Won’t you go down for a while?

You’re different, let’s dine.

Can you really be mine?


Your showers were beautiful,

Touch of rain into the pool.

And we were one at last,

A beat skipped my heart.


But what was the matter?

I heard gentle sobs and cries.

I thought the sky touched the water,

And the water touched the sky?


-End

Yet you shouldn't fear love as it protects you from all harm.

— Candy Cuanan

Falling in love is a blueprint of un-simple reverie.

— Candy Cuanan

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        Candy Cuanan 

        3 weeks ago from Davao City, Philippines

        Hi Muhammad, glad you love it. Thanks.

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        Muhammad Abdullah 

        3 weeks ago

        I really love this poem.

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        Candy Cuanan 

        5 months ago from Davao City, Philippines

        Thank you Md Adnan! I'm glad it touched your heart. My pleasure to share my poem and quotes with you all. Cheers!

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        Velcro 

        5 months ago

        Just like "the water touched the sky", your verse touched my heart ...Thanks for sharing such a beautiful piece and such meaningful quotes!!

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        Candy Cuanan 

        6 months ago from Davao City, Philippines

        Dear John, thank you for your comment. It is indeed a gentle verse of love...

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        Candy Cuanan 

        6 months ago from Davao City, Philippines

        Hi Dora! I'm happy with your description, it's beautiful. It's my pleasure to share my work with you. Thanks for commenting.

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        Dora Weithers 

        6 months ago from The Caribbean

        Your title holds great appeal, and your poem follows through adequately. Thanks for sharing.

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        Candy Cuanan 

        6 months ago from Davao City, Philippines

        Thank you Nithya. Life is beautiful.

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        Candy Cuanan 

        6 months ago from Davao City, Philippines

        How are you Tamara? Thanks for the nice words, appreciate it.

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        Candy Cuanan 

        6 months ago from Davao City, Philippines

        I'm glad you enjoyed it, Rose. Thanks a lot for dropping by.

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        Gypsy Rose Lee 

        6 months ago from Daytona Beach, Florida

        Beautiful poetry. Enjoyed.

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        Tamara Yancosky 

        6 months ago from Uninhabited Regions

        This is beautiful and so wonderful!

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        Nithya Venkat 

        6 months ago from Dubai

        Beautifully written.

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        John Hansen 

        6 months ago from Queensland Australia

        A very well-written and gentle verse of love.

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        Candy Cuanan 

        6 months ago from Davao City, Philippines

        Thanks for reading, Amani.

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        Amani Utembu 

        6 months ago from Nairobi -Kenya

        Great job.

      • Candy Cuanan profile imageAUTHOR

        Candy Cuanan 

        6 months ago from Davao City, Philippines

        Hi Deborah. Thank you. Just like falling in love, it's always beautiful, even when it hurts. ;)

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        Candy Cuanan 

        6 months ago from Davao City, Philippines

        Thank you Clive, I appreciate it.

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        Deborah Demander 

        6 months ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

        That was beautiful.

        Namaste

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        Clive Williams 

        7 months ago from Jamaica

        very nice

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        Candy Cuanan 

        7 months ago from Davao City, Philippines

        Thank you, Cornelius. I liked your description. That was exactly how I want people to feel about it and its message.

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        Cornelius Nolitta 

        7 months ago from Roma, Italia

        very tender, I like it!

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