Shall I compare you to a star in the sky?
Another star shines away
I must find the real way
that's why I write to you today
And I will write every day
In the illusion world and mystery
Are you imaginary ?
I am tired by searching in the dictionary
To use the best vocabulary
It starts to snow
And you come so slow
Of course I know
I must fight the blow
You are the shadow of my light
I would like to see you alight
to see together the Twilight
And Watch stars at night
I thought it was easy
Was it all just in my fantasy?
My heart can't delete your Noisy
Proud. I never be antsy
Under the sea I am breathing
I am resisting
I am waiting
Just for you...
Sanaa Najim (author) from Morocco on July 30, 2018:
Thank you very much Mrs Shyron and Mrs Audrey for your appreciation . I am really glad to hear that words from great writers like you .
Audrey Hunt from Idyllwild Ca. on July 16, 2018:
I'm so drawn to each line of your poem. Your words flow freely as I compare my life with your message. Thank you and thanks for the follow. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Shyron E Shenko from Texas on July 15, 2018:
Sanaa, thank you, I felt as though this was written just for me and I appreciate it. Thank you for the following.
Sanaa Najim (author) from Morocco on July 07, 2018:
Thank you very much Mr Tim for your nice words and your encouragement . I am so glad to hear that from a great writer like you .
Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on July 07, 2018:
Hi, creative Entity,
I like your free flowing rhythmic approach in this piece. It almost has a bluesy feel. I enjoyed the sharp contrast you brought up by "breathing under water" and resistance."
Sanaa Najim (author) from Morocco on July 05, 2018:
Thank you very much for your comment Dear Oumayma
Oumayma on July 05, 2018:
I like your style