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For You...

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Shall I compare you to a star in the sky?

Another star shines away

I must find the real way

that's why I write to you today

And I will write every day

In the illusion world and mystery

Are you imaginary ?

I am tired by searching in the dictionary

To use the best vocabulary

It starts to snow

And you come so slow

Of course I know

I must fight the blow

You are the shadow of my light

I would like to see you alight

to see together the Twilight

And Watch stars at night

I thought it was easy

Was it all just in my fantasy?

My heart can't delete your Noisy

Proud. I never be antsy

Under the sea I am breathing

I am resisting

I am waiting

Just for you...


Comments

Sanaa Najim (author) from Morocco on July 30, 2018:

Thank you very much Mrs Shyron and Mrs Audrey for your appreciation . I am really glad to hear that words from great writers like you .

Audrey Hunt from Idyllwild Ca. on July 16, 2018:

I'm so drawn to each line of your poem. Your words flow freely as I compare my life with your message. Thank you and thanks for the follow. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Shyron E Shenko from Texas on July 15, 2018:

Sanaa, thank you, I felt as though this was written just for me and I appreciate it. Thank you for the following.

Blessings always.

Sanaa Najim (author) from Morocco on July 07, 2018:

Thank you very much Mr Tim for your nice words and your encouragement . I am so glad to hear that from a great writer like you .

Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on July 07, 2018:

Hi, creative Entity,

I like your free flowing rhythmic approach in this piece. It almost has a bluesy feel. I enjoyed the sharp contrast you brought up by "breathing under water" and resistance."

Excellent work.

Thank you.

Sincerely,

Tim

Sanaa Najim (author) from Morocco on July 05, 2018:

Thank you very much for your comment Dear Oumayma

Oumayma on July 05, 2018:

I like your style