For You...

Updated on July 6, 2018
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Shall I compare you to a star in the sky?

Another star shines away

I must find the real way

that's why I write to you today

And I will write every day

In the illusion world and mystery

Are you imaginary ?

I am tired by searching in the dictionary

To use the best vocabulary

It starts to snow

And you come so slow

Of course I know

I must fight the blow

You are the shadow of my light

I would like to see you alight

to see together the Twilight

And Watch stars at night

I thought it was easy

Was it all just in my fantasy?

My heart can't delete your Noisy

Proud. I never be antsy

Under the sea I am breathing

I am resisting

I am waiting

Just for you...


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      • The ENTITY profile imageAUTHOR

        Sanaa Najim 

        4 months ago from Morocco

        Thank you very much Mrs Shyron and Mrs Audrey for your appreciation . I am really glad to hear that words from great writers like you .

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        Audrey Hunt 

        5 months ago from Idyllwild Ca.

        I'm so drawn to each line of your poem. Your words flow freely as I compare my life with your message. Thank you and thanks for the follow. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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        Shyron E Shenko 

        5 months ago from Texas

        Sanaa, thank you, I felt as though this was written just for me and I appreciate it. Thank you for the following.

        Blessings always.

      • The ENTITY profile imageAUTHOR

        Sanaa Najim 

        5 months ago from Morocco

        Thank you very much Mr Tim for your nice words and your encouragement . I am so glad to hear that from a great writer like you .

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        Tim Truzy 

        5 months ago from U.S.A.

        Hi, creative Entity,

        I like your free flowing rhythmic approach in this piece. It almost has a bluesy feel. I enjoyed the sharp contrast you brought up by "breathing under water" and resistance."

        Excellent work.

        Thank you.

        Sincerely,

        Tim

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        Sanaa Najim 

        5 months ago from Morocco

        Thank you very much for your comment Dear Oumayma

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        Oumayma 

        5 months ago

        I like your style

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