Too complicated to explain
On the clouds, Under the rain
Ocean drows the pain
Come on toward the aim
Other deep wound's sprain
Mistakes tell the story again
Pale heart complete the end in vain
Latter breath against the gain
Inevitable destiny walk on this chain
Carry on the dream will be attain
And the soul will ingrain
The hope in the fountain
End chapter . so complain
Dead heart in the dark drain
Sanaa Najim (author) from Morocco on September 09, 2018:
Hi creative Mark Tulin :
I am so happy to hear that from geat writer like you .
Thank you very much .
Mark Tulin from Ventura, California on August 31, 2018:
Nice rhythm. Yes, life is too complicated to explain. Worry about those who try to simplify it with dogma.
Sanaa Najim (author) from Morocco on July 15, 2018:
Thank you very much dear Tim for your appreciation . I am really happy and proud to hear that from you . I promise I will continue the creation of great and various poems.
Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on July 10, 2018:
Superb poem. Keep up the great work. I'm glad I had an opportunity to read this. I love this line"
"There is always something which is too hard and complicated to explain." Indeed, as humans we probably would not like it any other way. We would get bored with the easy and simple.
Enity your work shows brilliance.