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Darell is a registered electrical engineer, has a passion for writing and serving the Lord


First try.

Nose dive. Torn Down.

Fell to the ground!

Will you pull the string

and try to reach the peak?

Stunned for a moment,

fell short. Carried by the wind.

My dearest kite,

will not take flight.

Love and misfortune,

Tail. Front.

Left or right.

Everything is unbalanced.

Is it worth the chance?

Unsteady kite,

confused heart.

Let go. Set free.

© 2018 DaTa Projects


DaTa Projects (author) from Philippines on October 06, 2018:

Thank you Kshipra. Your works are great too :)

Kshipra Pal on October 06, 2018:

Wow... your language is beautiful Data! Also, I am looking forward to your future works !

DaTa Projects (author) from Philippines on October 05, 2018:

I will post the english version soon :)

DaTa Projects (author) from Philippines on October 05, 2018:

Hi Kshipra. Thank you for the appreciation. I came from philippines, and filipino is our languange. Saranggola is kite in english. I wrote this for a friend having a problem in his relationship

Kshipra Pal on October 05, 2018:

Hi DaTa... I appreciate that you wrote it in your own language. Much respect!!! It sounds beautiful, which language is it ? Also what is this beautiful poem about ? Would love to know from you

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