Negatives
Negatives
Traitor
giving, is easier,
asking, needs lots of valour,
yet make sure, that the taker,
isn’t a traitor.
Greedy
finds, loopholes to deplete ‘n’ flee,
a vice, an adamant stain,
gulps every sense of shame,
occupied in schemes insane.
Egoist
always high in "I’m"
loves to be held at helm.
© 2018 Hari Prasad S
Comments
AUTHORThanks Harish Bro once again. Yes. these traits are extremely dangerous and all should know and understand such people so that they can be away from them.
- Hari
Hari bhai , three negative personalities have been aptly portrayed by you. I, especially, like the depiction of an egoist.
- AUTHOR
Yes Harish Bhai. Ego is a huge anamoly in character others are dangerous habits.
Thanks for visiting.
- hari
Great and effective desription of three negatives ! Hari bhai. Out of these three, egoism is something one should get rid of by all means.
- AUTHOR
Excellent comment sir. Thanks for being appreciative to my poem.
- hari
Greed and treason and being not
righteous are very slanderous.
Be on right path to generate!
Great philosophy
- AUTHOR
Thanks nellieanna for a visit and appreciating.
- hari
Negatives, indeed. True, all.
- AUTHOR
Thank you so much Frank for your appreciation.
- hari
this was so amazing my friend..clever
- AUTHOR
Devika thank you so much for your appreciation. :-)
I am very happy you enjoyed it like I did writing it.
- hari
Your expressions are amazing! Just loved reading another one of your best works.
- AUTHOR
:-) thanks chitrangadaji.
- hari
Brilliant and beautifully expressed!
Thanks for sharing!
- AUTHOR
Thanks usha madam for appreciating. :-)
- hari
Very aptly put.
- AUTHOR
Thank you Larry for a visit and appreciating.
- hari
Interesting thoughts.
- AUTHOR
Eric, thank you much for your lovely appreciation note.
- hari
WOW this is great. So many words left out that need not be left in. Moving for sure.
- AUTHOR
Thanks dear manatita. :-)
- hari
Brilliant pieces. So real! So life-like!
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