Negatives

Updated on February 6, 2018

Negatives


Traitor

giving, is easier,

asking, needs lots of valour,

yet make sure, that the taker,

isn’t a traitor.


Greedy

finds, loopholes to deplete ‘n’ flee,

a vice, an adamant stain,

gulps every sense of shame,

occupied in schemes insane.


Egoist

always high in "I’m"

loves to be held at helm.

© 2018 Hari Prasad S

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks Harish Bro once again. Yes. these traits are extremely dangerous and all should know and understand such people so that they can be away from them.

      - Hari

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      Harish Mamgain 4 months ago from New Delhi , India

      Hari bhai , three negative personalities have been aptly portrayed by you. I, especially, like the depiction of an egoist.

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      Yes Harish Bhai. Ego is a huge anamoly in character others are dangerous habits.

      Thanks for visiting.

      - hari

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      Harish Mamgain 4 months ago from New Delhi , India

      Great and effective desription of three negatives ! Hari bhai. Out of these three, egoism is something one should get rid of by all means.

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      Excellent comment sir. Thanks for being appreciative to my poem.

      - hari

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      Vishnu 4 months ago

      Greed and treason and being not

      righteous are very slanderous.

      Be on right path to generate!

      Great philosophy

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks nellieanna for a visit and appreciating.

      - hari

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      Nellieanna Hay 4 months ago

      Negatives, indeed. True, all.

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you so much Frank for your appreciation.

      - hari

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      Frank Atanacio 4 months ago from Shelton

      this was so amazing my friend..clever

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      Devika thank you so much for your appreciation. :-)

      I am very happy you enjoyed it like I did writing it.

      - hari

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      Devika Primić 4 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Your expressions are amazing! Just loved reading another one of your best works.

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      :-) thanks chitrangadaji.

      - hari

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      Chitrangada Sharan 4 months ago from New Delhi, India

      Brilliant and beautifully expressed!

      Thanks for sharing!

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks usha madam for appreciating. :-)

      - hari

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      Usha R 4 months ago

      Very aptly put.

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you Larry for a visit and appreciating.

      - hari

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      Larry Rankin 4 months ago from Oklahoma

      Interesting thoughts.

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      Eric, thank you much for your lovely appreciation note.

      - hari

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      Eric Dierker 4 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      WOW this is great. So many words left out that need not be left in. Moving for sure.

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      Hari Prasad S 4 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks dear manatita. :-)

      - hari

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      manatita44 4 months ago from london

      Brilliant pieces. So real! So life-like!

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