Negatives
Negatives
Traitor
giving, is easier,
asking, needs lots of valour,
yet make sure, that the taker,
isn’t a traitor.
Greedy
finds, loopholes to deplete ‘n’ flee,
a vice, an adamant stain,
gulps every sense of shame,
occupied in schemes insane.
Egoist
always high in "I’m"
loves to be held at helm.
© 2018 Hari Prasad S
Comments
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 16, 2018:
Thanks Harish Bro once again. Yes. these traits are extremely dangerous and all should know and understand such people so that they can be away from them.
- Hari
Harish Mamgain from New Delhi , India on February 15, 2018:
Hari bhai , three negative personalities have been aptly portrayed by you. I, especially, like the depiction of an egoist.
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 15, 2018:
Yes Harish Bhai. Ego is a huge anamoly in character others are dangerous habits.
Thanks for visiting.
- hari
Harish Mamgain from New Delhi , India on February 15, 2018:
Great and effective desription of three negatives ! Hari bhai. Out of these three, egoism is something one should get rid of by all means.
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 07, 2018:
Excellent comment sir. Thanks for being appreciative to my poem.
- hari
Vishnu on February 07, 2018:
Greed and treason and being not
righteous are very slanderous.
Be on right path to generate!
Great philosophy
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 06, 2018:
Thanks nellieanna for a visit and appreciating.
- hari
Nellieanna Hay on February 06, 2018:
Negatives, indeed. True, all.
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 01, 2018:
Thank you so much Frank for your appreciation.
- hari
Frank Atanacio from Shelton on February 01, 2018:
this was so amazing my friend..clever
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 29, 2018:
Devika thank you so much for your appreciation. :-)
I am very happy you enjoyed it like I did writing it.
- hari
Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on January 29, 2018:
Your expressions are amazing! Just loved reading another one of your best works.
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 29, 2018:
:-) thanks chitrangadaji.
- hari
Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on January 29, 2018:
Brilliant and beautifully expressed!
Thanks for sharing!
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 28, 2018:
Thanks usha madam for appreciating. :-)
- hari
Usha R on January 28, 2018:
Very aptly put.
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 27, 2018:
Thank you Larry for a visit and appreciating.
- hari
Larry Rankin from Oklahoma on January 27, 2018:
Interesting thoughts.
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 27, 2018:
Eric, thank you much for your lovely appreciation note.
- hari
Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on January 27, 2018:
WOW this is great. So many words left out that need not be left in. Moving for sure.
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 27, 2018:
Thanks dear manatita. :-)
- hari
manatita44 from london on January 27, 2018:
Brilliant pieces. So real! So life-like!