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Negatives

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Negatives


Traitor

giving, is easier,

asking, needs lots of valour,

yet make sure, that the taker,

isn’t a traitor.


Greedy

finds, loopholes to deplete ‘n’ flee,

a vice, an adamant stain,

gulps every sense of shame,

occupied in schemes insane.


Egoist

always high in "I’m"

loves to be held at helm.

© 2018 Hari Prasad S

Comments

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 16, 2018:

Thanks Harish Bro once again. Yes. these traits are extremely dangerous and all should know and understand such people so that they can be away from them.

- Hari

Harish Mamgain from New Delhi , India on February 15, 2018:

Hari bhai , three negative personalities have been aptly portrayed by you. I, especially, like the depiction of an egoist.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 15, 2018:

Yes Harish Bhai. Ego is a huge anamoly in character others are dangerous habits.

Thanks for visiting.

- hari

Harish Mamgain from New Delhi , India on February 15, 2018:

Great and effective desription of three negatives ! Hari bhai. Out of these three, egoism is something one should get rid of by all means.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 07, 2018:

Excellent comment sir. Thanks for being appreciative to my poem.

- hari

Vishnu on February 07, 2018:

Greed and treason and being not

righteous are very slanderous.

Be on right path to generate!

Great philosophy

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 06, 2018:

Thanks nellieanna for a visit and appreciating.

- hari

Nellieanna Hay on February 06, 2018:

Negatives, indeed. True, all.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 01, 2018:

Thank you so much Frank for your appreciation.

- hari

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on February 01, 2018:

this was so amazing my friend..clever

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 29, 2018:

Devika thank you so much for your appreciation. :-)

I am very happy you enjoyed it like I did writing it.

- hari

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on January 29, 2018:

Your expressions are amazing! Just loved reading another one of your best works.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 29, 2018:

:-) thanks chitrangadaji.

- hari

Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on January 29, 2018:

Brilliant and beautifully expressed!

Thanks for sharing!

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 28, 2018:

Thanks usha madam for appreciating. :-)

- hari

Usha R on January 28, 2018:

Very aptly put.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 27, 2018:

Thank you Larry for a visit and appreciating.

- hari

Larry Rankin from Oklahoma on January 27, 2018:

Interesting thoughts.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 27, 2018:

Eric, thank you much for your lovely appreciation note.

- hari

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on January 27, 2018:

WOW this is great. So many words left out that need not be left in. Moving for sure.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 27, 2018:

Thanks dear manatita. :-)

- hari

manatita44 from london on January 27, 2018:

Brilliant pieces. So real! So life-like!