A Poetic Story About Ending an Emotional Love Relationship

Updated on November 4, 2018
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Glenn likes to experiment with creative writing and revealing stories that enlighten the reader and create an appreciation of the subject.

Explanation of the Poem That Follows

I tend to become poetic when I experience strong feelings, especially when involved with a romantic relationship. This creative side of me only appears under these conditions.

For the sake of healing, we need to get in touch with the grief of a breakup and we need to understand the painful emotions that follow the loss of someone dear to us. I have found that creative writing can help make sense of the confusing thoughts and hidden feelings that are buried deep inside of us.

I know that in my case I can do this by letting the various thoughts in my mind emerge in a poetic fashion. It helps develop an understanding of what took place and conveys to the reader the essence of the romance and the emotions of the breakup.

The following short poem is a story about breaking up and ending a relationship of a short-lived romance.

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Breaking Up

Synchronicity leaps on the very first day.

Much to discover and thoughts of what may

Be it a friendship or lovers to be

Sure is a mystery for you and me.

Our voices harmonized but never repeated.

Nevertheless we were never conceited.

Three months go by with being ourselves.

More sharing continues and overwhelms.

A puzzling past that is hard to conceive.

The desire for explanation leaves little to believe.

Attempts to clear the confusion lead to dismay.

Saying Goodbye because there's nothing left to say.

The Meaning Behind the Words

“Synchronicity leaps on the very first day.”

The relationship began with the discovery of similar interests, hence the synchronicity.

“Much to discover and thoughts of what may.”

We quickly discovered so may common desires.

“Be it a friendship or lovers to be. Sure is a mystery for you and me.“

It started as a friendship, with confusion if we should keep it that way or move forward to a romantic relationship.

“Our voices harmonized but never repeated.”

We sure loved to sing together.

“Three months go by with being ourselves.”

In the beginning we each accepted one another as they were.

“More sharing continues and overwhelms.”

As more was shared, we both became overwhelmed.

“A puzzling past that is hard to conceive.”

As the past lives emerged, trouble pursued.

“The desire for explanation leaves little to believe.”

Trust and distrust became the norm.

“Attempts to clear the confusion lead to dismay.”

Failure to communicate became more common.

“Saying Goodbye because there's nothing left to say.”

Finally giving up knowing that nothing could be resolved.

© 2016 Glenn Stok

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    • Glenn Stok profile imageAUTHOR

      Glenn Stok 

      6 months ago from Long Island, NY

      Thanks Mark. I’m glad you like the way I wrote this poem with a couplet style.

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      Mark Tulin 

      6 months ago from Santa Barbara, California

      Like the couplet form, you used here in this melancholy poem.

    • Glenn Stok profile imageAUTHOR

      Glenn Stok 

      10 months ago from Long Island, NY

      Thanks Kristen. That’s what I always try to achieve with anything I write.

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      Kristen Howe 

      10 months ago from Northeast Ohio

      Wow Glenn, this is a real moving and profound poem. I loved how you painted a vivid picture with those poetic words. Now I know what you mean to make it meaningful and engaging and educational with your intro too.

    • Glenn Stok profile imageAUTHOR

      Glenn Stok 

      2 years ago from Long Island, NY

      Jean Bakula - Yes, life is complicated. I'm sorry for your lose and I agree that as long as you don't feel ready, it wouldn't be the right time to move on. However, when the time comes and you meet someone new, know in your heart that your deceased husband would have wanted you to be happy.

      As for your son, these things are always difficult and complicated. He is an adult and to some degree you have to let him handle his own affairs himself. I wrote an article about a friend who had another issue with her son. Not the same thing, and by no means as problematic as yours, but he couldn't decide what to do with his life and he is even older than your son. His Mom didn't know how to handle it.

      Complicated? You bet!

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      Jean Bakula 

      2 years ago

      Your relationship poems are very touching. I haven't dated since my husband died 2 1/2 years ago, it was very sudden. Guys try to feel me out to see if I want to date them. I just don't feel ready. My husband was brilliant and I could talk to him for hours. He was devoted, kind, and fun. He always looked at life from a different view than other people.

      I know I have to take the plunge soon or I never will. We had one son, now 28, who is having some issues and is living here with me. So it's not exactly the best arrangement, but he's been falsely accused of a crime and the court system moves slowly. I feel stuck, and like it wouldn't be fair to go out with somebody while this "black cloud" is hanging over me.

      I guess we all date in hope of finding more than just someone to talk to, although I would even settle for that, but would be scared to move on. It's complicated, isn't it?

    • Glenn Stok profile imageAUTHOR

      Glenn Stok 

      2 years ago from Long Island, NY

      FlourishAnyway - You brought up an interesting point Shelly. When we love someone and try to make things work, we struggle to make sense of the confusion that stems from miscommunication.

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      FlourishAnyway 

      2 years ago from USA

      You communicate the bewilderness and confusion of someone who is struggling to make sense of what happened in the relationship.

    • Glenn Stok profile imageAUTHOR

      Glenn Stok 

      2 years ago from Long Island, NY

      Kathleen Cochran - Thank you for those kind thoughts. I think we all could write a novel from the life experiences we have.

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      2 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      This poem is a romance novel in just a few words. I'm sorry for the heartbreak, friend, but I'm glad you redirected your passion into this beautiful poem. Hoping for happiness for you in the days to come.

    • Glenn Stok profile imageAUTHOR

      Glenn Stok 

      2 years ago from Long Island, NY

      Thank you to all of you for your comments. You have all shown a keen perception of the emotions and feelings I tried to convey in my poem. You've shown me that it was a success.

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      Dora Weithers 

      2 years ago from The Caribbean

      You may have described a universal experience throughout the poem. Who cannot relate to the last two lines especially? Well done!

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      James Bowden 

      2 years ago from Long Island, New York

      Glenn:

      A nice short summary in poem form that not only expresses your emotions, but more importantly an affair that at one point in time was meaningful enough for you to reminisce about and convey your feelings in the form of poetry. And often it is relationships, or the loss of a parent or spouse for example that stimulates our other creative side apart from writing fiction or non-fiction for example. Thanks for sharing this.

      Jim

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      John Hansen 

      2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Glenn, it is unfortunate that it often takes hardship or heartbreak to inspire creative writing, especially poetry. This poem displayed your feelings and the relationship and its ending perfectly. Thank you for sharing.

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      Venkatachari M 

      2 years ago from Hyderabad, India

      Very much captivating and factual description of the feelings and relationships.

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