Mild and Melodious

Updated on March 23, 2018
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Mild and Melodious


The milder one knew it, yet, got lured,
a melodious kind mesmerized her, as assured.

She let it into her nest,
only to find more eggs, after it left.

She could rear only the aggressive.
while the mild, could not survive.

It was too late a realization,
those alive, had grown a passion to sing.

The crow blamed her own fate,
the young cuckoos sung their heart out.


Cuckoo

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      Hari Prasad S 4 days ago from Bangalore

      Thanks tamara. The message is that to survive is important.

      - hari

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      Tamara Yancosky Moore 5 days ago from Uninhabited Regions

      I am reading in-between the lines for the intended meaning, or is the message upon the surface? At any rate, it’s lovely!

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      Hari Prasad S 10 days ago from Bangalore

      Audrey, thank you so much for your appreciation. Loved reading your comments thanks.

      - hari

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      Hari Prasad S 10 days ago from Bangalore

      Audrey, thank you so much for your appreciation. Loved reading your comments thanks.

      - hari

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      Audrey Hunt 10 days ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      Enlightening to read and artistic in writing. Thank you, my friend.

      audrey

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      Hari Prasad S 2 weeks ago from Bangalore

      Thanks larry.

      - hari

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      Larry Rankin 3 weeks ago from Oklahoma

      Great read!

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      Mark Tulin 3 weeks ago from Santa Barbara, California

      I didn't know that. Thanks for the insight.

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      Hari Prasad S 3 weeks ago from Bangalore

      Thanks mark for your visit and appreciation. Cuckoo's are parasitic in nature. They are not taught to rear their own kind.

      - hari

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      Mark Tulin 3 weeks ago from Santa Barbara, California

      Interesting bird combination. Such is life among our feathered friends. Thanks.

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      Hari Prasad S 3 weeks ago from Bangalore

      Thanks harish bro, yes you are absolutely right. The swindlers are everywhere and once a while everyone gets trapped.

      - hari

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      Harish Mamgain 3 weeks ago from New Delhi , India

      Hari bhai, you implicitely connected cuckoos to the present day swindlers. I like the idea of your poem. A nice poem.

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      Hari Prasad S 3 weeks ago from Bangalore

      Thanks devika for visit and lovely comments.

      - hari

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      Devika Primić 3 weeks ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Beautiful words for for nature. You shared about the lovely birds and so true.

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      Hari Prasad S 3 weeks ago from Bangalore

      Thanks eric for appreciating. :-)

      - hari

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      Eric Dierker 3 weeks ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Really cool. Thanks

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      Hari Prasad S 4 weeks ago from Bangalore

      Thanks usha madam for your visit and likong.

      - hari

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      Hari Prasad S 4 weeks ago from Bangalore

      That's the ultimate truth. Thanks for your wise words vishnu sir.

      - hari

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      Vishnu 4 weeks ago

      Whether we are aggressive or mild mannered,we need to survive.Poet has touched life reality beautifully.

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      Usha R 4 weeks ago

      Wow. Beautiful description

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      Hari Prasad S 4 weeks ago from Bangalore

      Hi Charmaine,

      Thanks for your visit.

      Yes, the cuckoos are very active during the summer season in our place.

      This attitude is quite common in many of us humans too :-).

      Thanks,

      Hari

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      Hari Prasad S 4 weeks ago from Bangalore

      Thanks manatita for your visit. Yes. That nature is found in our folks too.

      - hari

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      Threekeys 4 weeks ago from Australia

      I volunteer for s native wildlife organization. Yes, I learnt that the cuckoo bird is a opportunist and a survival strategist.

      Do you know or have any cuckoo's around you hari? You are so smart dont let them fool you.

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      manatita44 4 weeks ago from london

      Deep one and very intriguing. Open to different interpretations.

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      Hari Prasad S 4 weeks ago from Bangalore

      Thanks frank for your appreciation. :-).

      It is so much a nature of many of us humans too.

      - hari

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      Frank Atanacio 4 weeks ago from Shelton

      lol.. I actually enjoyed this so much..

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