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Master Thief

Poetry brings Solace,,, wrote a poem to remind myself that Im not alone, and there's more to life than I imagine


Master Thief

You're scared and hurt

You had the chance

But you blew it off

Forgotten worth

See how the wheel has turned

The player became the game

Cries converted 'to laugh

Eyes filled with pain

Witness thy scars

You're about to win

You had the chance

But you broke me thereof

© 2018 Jai Hitachiin


Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on October 05, 2018:

Beautiful and powerful.

The greatest revenge would be to meet your adversary with love and kindness. They would be defenseless.

Great poem with much to think about within these lines.

Much respect,



Ioannis Arvanitis from Greece, Almyros on August 02, 2018:

Love is the answer, my beloved Jai, not revenge!

Much Love!


Rinita Sen on August 02, 2018:

I like how simple yet strong these words flow. "The player became the game" - seems to be the pivot.

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