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Master Thief

Poetry brings Solace,,, wrote a poem to remind myself that Im not alone, and there's more to life than I imagine

jaiasahi23

Master Thief



You're scared and hurt

You had the chance

But you blew it off


Forgotten worth

See how the wheel has turned

The player became the game


Cries converted 'to laugh

Eyes filled with pain

Witness thy scars


You're about to win

You had the chance

But you broke me thereof


© 2018 Jai Hitachiin

Comments

Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on October 05, 2018:

Beautiful and powerful.

The greatest revenge would be to meet your adversary with love and kindness. They would be defenseless.

Great poem with much to think about within these lines.

Much respect,

Sincerely,

Tim

Ioannis Arvanitis from Greece, Almyros on August 02, 2018:

Love is the answer, my beloved Jai, not revenge!

Much Love!

Sean

Rinita Sen on August 02, 2018:

I like how simple yet strong these words flow. "The player became the game" - seems to be the pivot.