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Fallen

fallen so bad

In the heart of darkness

abandoned by Guardian angel

now standing alone

in the heart of darkness

tale of truth flowing inside

that cant be understood

in the heart of darkness

trapped by demons

on the path of regrets

save us Almighty


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© 2018 tayyabanaeem1996

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Miebakagh Fiberesima from Port Harcourt, Rivers State, NIGERIA. on September 08, 2018:

Hi, tayyabanaeem1996, I appreciated your remark. Thank you.

tayyabanaeem1996 (author) on September 08, 2018:

i meant angel. sometimes angels are busy fighting their own battles. its doesnt means that they abandoned us but yet its just feel like they left u

Miebakagh Fiberesima from Port Harcourt, Rivers State, NIGERIA. on September 07, 2018:

Hi, tayyabaaeem, this poem is highly spiritual. However, I found a lacuna in line 3 "abandoned by Guardian angel." My question is this: can an angel ever leave a person? Or do you mean a partner leaves his/her lover? Thank you.

uzma on August 21, 2018:

lovely poem. I love the words

Tehreem on August 18, 2018:

tale of truth flowing inside

that cant be understood

in the heart of darkness