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Eye for an Eye

Need no further elocution, bliss was when,
twin flames were in synchronization.

Sparkling pearls have lost their luster,
Since we stopped witnessing their expressive gesture.

An eye for an eye and turning a blind eye,
has caved in, once beautiful sketches, that rocked our psyche.

© 2018 Hari Prasad S


SS on February 26, 2019:

One more beautiful poem Hari ji with meaning. Amazing !!!

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on September 19, 2018:

Thanks Li :-)

- hari

Li-Jen Hew on May 09, 2018:

Hey Hari. I like how your poem flows and the choice of words. :)

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on May 03, 2018:

Thanks devika. I cherish your appreciation always.

- hari

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on May 03, 2018:

Meaningful and beautiful.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on May 02, 2018:

Eric, i am humbled by your fantastic words of appreciation. Lol.

- hari

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on May 02, 2018:

Frank thank you for being a great follower and being a greater reader. I will try to add another pair of lines, though i felt i have run out of juice for this topic. i think i can make it a little snappy. :-) will try friend.

- hari

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on May 02, 2018:

You are the master in this style. Each line creating a new space in my brain. A hundred thought to think in so few words. Thank you.

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on May 02, 2018:

I like your choice of word usage.. elocution.. in stead of expressive speech.. just make this far more dramatic and really lends to this short verse.. awesome my friend

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