Archi
Poetry brings Solace,,, I know about that now. This words contains all the things that I can't afford to utter.
Poetry
You are the poetry,
And I am the poet.
For you only,
The words I created.
Feelings I have for thee,
Can’t afford to utter.
Wrote thy heartily,
Hopefully noticed
© 2018 Jai Hitachiin
Comments
Unknown on May 18, 2018:
check your messenger!!!
Jai Hitachiin (author) on May 14, 2018:
Thank you :) Mr. Glenn , I never knew this poem is good enough
Glenn Stok from Long Island, NY on May 14, 2018:
It’s amazing how much can be said in just a few words. You packed a lot of emotion and feelings into this poem. Well done!
Jai Hitachiin (author) on May 14, 2018:
Awe thank you Ioannis :) what a pleasure
Ioannis Arvanitis from Greece, Almyros on May 14, 2018:
Beautiful, my friend, Jai! Love doesn't need many words to be praised!
I loved it! It reminds me something that I wrote, 34 years back, to my wife, when we were at school! Thank you for that memory!
May Love fills your days!
Sean
Jai Hitachiin (author) on May 13, 2018:
Haha yeah thank you very much...I tried to give prominence of this secret love ;)
Missy Smith from Florida on May 12, 2018:
I like that this poem seems unopened and hides your inner feelings for this person; much like a little keepsake box only you have the key to unlock. :) Nice!