Archi

Poetry brings Solace,,, I know about that now. This words contains all the things that I can't afford to utter.

Poetry

You are the poetry,

And I am the poet.

For you only,

The words I created.

Feelings I have for thee,

Can’t afford to utter.

Wrote thy heartily,

Hopefully noticed

© 2018 Jai Hitachiin

Comments

Unknown on May 18, 2018:

check your messenger!!!

Jai Hitachiin (author) on May 14, 2018:

Thank you :) Mr. Glenn , I never knew this poem is good enough

Glenn Stok from Long Island, NY on May 14, 2018:

It’s amazing how much can be said in just a few words. You packed a lot of emotion and feelings into this poem. Well done!

Jai Hitachiin (author) on May 14, 2018:

Awe thank you Ioannis :) what a pleasure

Ioannis Arvanitis from Greece, Almyros on May 14, 2018:

Beautiful, my friend, Jai! Love doesn't need many words to be praised!

I loved it! It reminds me something that I wrote, 34 years back, to my wife, when we were at school! Thank you for that memory!

May Love fills your days!

Sean

Jai Hitachiin (author) on May 13, 2018:

Haha yeah thank you very much...I tried to give prominence of this secret love ;)

Missy Smith from Florida on May 12, 2018:

I like that this poem seems unopened and hides your inner feelings for this person; much like a little keepsake box only you have the key to unlock. :) Nice!