You Make Me Feel Alive

Updated on December 6, 2017

I was there

between people running from pillar to post,

lost in useless thoughts...

I felt like I was walking on a deserted road,


I knew nobody would hear me even if I scream

even if I whisper...

For all I felt was everything falling apart

and falling behind.

With no emotion,

I only felt a tinge a pain,

a pain to tell me that I was alive..

I kept wandering around,

among people like I was invisible.

I woke up suddenly,

feeling restless with my heartbeat running fast.

Surely, dreams are the only thing that make me feel alive,

alive on my own...


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    • Ankita B profile image

      Ankita 3 months ago

      Thank you for the appreciation.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 3 months ago from New Delhi, India

      Beautiful expressions! Well done.

      Loved the title of your poem. Thanks for sharing this.

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      Ankita 4 months ago

      Thank you Frank

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      femi 4 months ago from Nigeria

      Heart wrenching and sad

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      Frank Atanacio 4 months ago from Shelton

      wow this was very good.. I enjoyed ur poem