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Poem: Would Anyone Notice?

I am a writer. My passion is poetry. I feel words connect people together and help us to understand the feelings we share.


Will Anyone Notice?

Like clockwork

a new day begins,

between sunrise and sunset

a beautiful painting adorns the sky,

like a rainbow giving us peace

after a stormy day.

Each day she prays her sacrifices are not in vain

wanting her dash in life to touch a heart or two

making a difference,

for someone along the way.

She hopes her mind replays each moment

stirring feelings of joy

before her journey halts

reminding her of the gifts she shared

giving her life a purpose.

For Like clockwork

a new day will begin

when she is no longer here

wondering if anyone will notice

her time on earth is gone.

"Love Me When I'm Gone" 3 Doors Down



BRENDA ARLEDGE (author) from Washington Court House on October 24, 2019:


It seems i missed your comment. I apologize.

Yes it is a short poem, but it gets the point across.

Thank you for taking the time to read my work.

Fin from Barstow on February 21, 2019:

wow...kind of sudden but easy to relate to