Insomniac: When in the Night I Remember You
When in the night I remember you
When in the night I remember you
The ghost of my past
The spirit of my future...
When in the night I remember you
My favorite nightmare
The beautiful destroyer
The blanket of my shivering soul
When in the night I remember you
Alone in my room
Dark and lonely
Listening to the same music
Holding the same picture
My mind still remember you
And it's hurting me badly
When in the night I remember you
I am crying with my pillow
Stuck in this old memory
My heart felt so heavy.
© 2019 Crezyl
Comments
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 11, 2019:
Good luck to our silly mind Brenda. It's a memory that makes us cry but the one that we don't want to forget
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on December 11, 2019:
Night time is always the hardest time.
I think its the quietness.. the time when we are finally all alone when our minds cannot help but remember.
Great write.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 10, 2019:
Hi Linda! Thank you for positive comment. It'll be stored in my heart ❤
Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on December 10, 2019:
I love the way in which you've expressed your feelings in this poem. Thank you for sharing your creativity, Crezyl.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 10, 2019:
Thank you William! ❤
William Kovacic from Pleasant Gap, PA on December 10, 2019:
Very beautiful and emotional, Crezyl. Thank you for sharing.
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 09, 2019:
Hello Manatita, I am very happy that you like my poem.
Of course, I'd love to give you my permission ❤❤
manatita44 from london on December 09, 2019:
Perhaps I'm there. Bleeding tears on my soul for God ... making the same mistake. But you express this so much better than I.
With your permission, I'll like to read this one in London for you
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 09, 2019:
I guess I am Bill. Hahahaha. Anyways thank for reading it❤❤
Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on December 09, 2019:
You are a person of considerable depth. Well done!
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 08, 2019:
Devika, these words are strangling me every now and then. It should be written or else I can't sleep
Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on December 08, 2019:
You express deep emotions and great meaning here. Impressive!
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 07, 2019:
John! You've been there always ❤ hahahaha. Thank for your words, I never knew that, until you said it❤
Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 07, 2019:
You have made me happy by your words Liz! Thank you so much❤
John Hansen from Queensland Australia on December 07, 2019:
Crezyl, you have the ability to capture so much feeling in your poetry. That is a talent. Well done.
Liz Westwood from UK on December 07, 2019:
This poem encapsulates a lot of raw feeling. You have expressed it well through your choice of words.
