Insomniac: When in the Night I Remember You
When in the night I remember you
When in the night I remember you
The ghost of my past
The spirit of my future...
When in the night I remember you
My favorite nightmare
The beautiful destroyer
The blanket of my shivering soul
When in the night I remember you
Alone in my room
Dark and lonely
Listening to the same music
Holding the same picture
My mind still remember you
And it's hurting me badly
When in the night I remember you
I am crying with my pillow
Stuck in this old memory
My heart felt so heavy.
Questions & Answers
© 2019 Crezyl Joy Villa Sabrido
Comments
AUTHORGood luck to our silly mind Brenda. It's a memory that makes us cry but the one that we don't want to forget
Night time is always the hardest time.
I think its the quietness.. the time when we are finally all alone when our minds cannot help but remember.
Great write.
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Hi Linda! Thank you for positive comment. It'll be stored in my heart ❤
I love the way in which you've expressed your feelings in this poem. Thank you for sharing your creativity, Crezyl.
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Thank you William! ❤
Very beautiful and emotional, Crezyl. Thank you for sharing.
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Hello Manatita, I am very happy that you like my poem.
Of course, I'd love to give you my permission ❤❤
Perhaps I'm there. Bleeding tears on my soul for God ... making the same mistake. But you express this so much better than I.
With your permission, I'll like to read this one in London for you
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I guess I am Bill. Hahahaha. Anyways thank for reading it❤❤
You are a person of considerable depth. Well done!
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Devika, these words are strangling me every now and then. It should be written or else I can't sleep
You express deep emotions and great meaning here. Impressive!
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John! You've been there always ❤ hahahaha. Thank for your words, I never knew that, until you said it❤
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You have made me happy by your words Liz! Thank you so much❤
Crezyl, you have the ability to capture so much feeling in your poetry. That is a talent. Well done.
This poem encapsulates a lot of raw feeling. You have expressed it well through your choice of words.
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