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What Is Fate? – a Poem in Response to Brenda’s Prompt

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Rozlin loves to share her work with her readers. she always wanted to start writing. This is her very first attempt on writing something.

Fate - Word Prompt Challenge by Brenda Arledge

The Following is a poem in response to Brenda Arledge’s weekly word prompt. Brenda, needs no introduction. She is a talented writer and a beautiful poet with so many beautiful poems on HubPages and other writing platforms. Every week Brenda gives a word prompt to the hubbers to help creativity. Many hubbers are responding to her word prompts weekly.

I have never ever written anything as a writer, as I am not a writer or a poet, but I want to be a good one. This is for the first time I am writing a poem. I challenged myself at this time. I will participate in Brenda’s word prompt. It is a good way to promote creativity. Thank you, Brenda for the word prompt. You are doing an excellent job.

In the following lines, I have tried to define fate. These are the words going through my mind, which I have tried to express. I hope you like my response, Brenda and all other hubbers. Let me know through your comments about this poem, how much you like it or how can I improve it.

What is Fate? – Poem

Something which is pre-planned for you,

That you never knew about.

Something that is meant for you,

And you never knew about.

We call it, Fate.


Something good that happens to you

And that you never knew about

And when it occurs, you thank The Maker of this unknown fate.


Something bad that comes in your way,

And that you never knew about.

You must accept it anyway, tho you hate,

Then people say that was in your fate.

My Thoughts on Fate

In urdu, fate is called taqdeer or kismet. In hindi, it is called naseeb.

Let us hope for the best fate every day. May the Maker of our fates make beautiful fates of everyone, Ameen!! (so be it)

Impress the Maker of the fate through your good deeds to get a good fate in return.

— Rozlin

© 2021 Rozlin

Comments

Rozlin (author) from UAE on June 03, 2021:

Thanks a lot, John for stopping by and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my very first poem. Stay happy and safe.

John Hansen from Gondwana Land on June 03, 2021:

I am pleased you decided to take the chance and write a poem in response to Brenda’s challenge. I enjoyed your poem, Rozlin, and hope fate shines upon you.

Rozlin (author) from UAE on June 03, 2021:

Hi, Moon. Thanks for by stopping by and commenting. Thanks for the kind words.stay safe and healthy.

Blessings

EK Jadoon from Abbottabad Pakistan on June 03, 2021:

Well written poem, Rozlin. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

stay safe and healthy...

Rozlin (author) from UAE on June 03, 2021:

Hi, Devika. Thanks a lot for your kind response. Your comment is motivation for me to write more such hubs.

Stay safe and happy.

Blessings and love.

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on June 03, 2021:

A wonderful write up from you and taking up this challenge shows me you can share whatever brings light to us. This poem certainly does that for me.

Rozlin (author) from UAE on June 02, 2021:

Hi, Brenda. I'm glad to see your comment. Thank you very much for reviewing my hub. I will improve it. I'm glad you liked my response to word prompt fate. Waiting for your next word prompt now. Stay safe and healthy.

Blessings and love.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on June 02, 2021:

Rozlin

I'm so delighted you decided to join us.

It is always a great feeling to write.

In your poem "What is Fate? you tell us fate is preplanned.

When something good happens we thank our creator & when bad things happen we have no choice but to accept it.

I like your outlook. Good fate for everyone.

Great words. You did a wonderful job with this one, but next time try being a little more descriptive.

Welcome to the world of Poetry.

You are a poet now.

Rozlin (author) from UAE on June 02, 2021:

Jazak Allah, Misbah. May Allah bless you too. Thanks a lot for reviewing my hub. I'm glad you liked my response to Brenda's prompt. Stay safe and happy.

Blessings and smile.

Rozlin (author) from UAE on June 02, 2021:

Thanks a lot, Tobe. I'm glad you liked my response to Brenda's prompt.

Blessings and love

Peace Tobe Dike from Delta State, Nigeria. on June 02, 2021:

I think you did really well in your response. Well done! I loved it.

Misbah Sheikh from The World of Poets on June 02, 2021:

Ameen! Beautifully expressed

Well done, Rozlin. Allah Bless You

Lots of Love!!!

Rozlin (author) from UAE on June 02, 2021:

Thanks a lot, Vidya, for commenting. I am glad you liked my attempt.

Blessings and smile.

VIDYA D SAGAR on June 02, 2021:

A good first attempt Rozlin. When events happen which are beyond our control, we call it fate. Whether it is good or bad we have to accept and do our best. Keep writing, all the best.

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