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What I Would Like. A Pre-Valentine Taster. Wednesday's Inspiration 13

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Manatita is an esteemed author living in London, UK. He writes spiritual books, flash fiction and esoteric poetry, his favourite genre.

Wisdom from the Master

A moment of self-giving life,

can conquer the sorrows

Of many long years." - Sri Chinmoy


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What I Would Like. A Free-style Sonnet

I would like to look at You,

The way I look at flowers: pure,

Elegant, more fragrant than a Dior J’adore.


I would like to paint Your smile,

The way Love paints the dawn: lustrous,

Immaculate; blessed with the pinnacle of sweetness.


I would have You light my world,

The way stars glow in darkness,

Beaming with the effulgent kiss of twilight.


I would like to ask the swan,

To salute your charm and gracefulness,

Gliding in tranquility, on a most sacred lake.


I would like to embrace the moon so tenderly,

That we both bask in the Joy of Your candescent lustre.


- Manatita, the Lantern Carrier 27th Jan, 2021

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Wisdom on the Self

"Above all, be true to yourself.

And if you cannot put your Heart in it,

Take yourself out of it." - Author unknown


Valentine's

© 2021 manatita44

Comments

manatita44 (author) from london on February 02, 2021:

Happy Wedding Anniversary!!

So I have to do one for you!! Haha. Thank you so much!!

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on February 02, 2021:

manatita44 Valentine's day is a special day for me being my Wedding anniversary. Your poem is a great touch to that great day.

manatita44 (author) from london on January 28, 2021:

Chuckle. So sweet of you to say this! Thank you! Thank you!

Jason Behm from Cebu, Philippines on January 28, 2021:

I feel like i have been seranaded while reading your poem. I could fall in love in no time. Such a lovely and sweet poem dear.

manatita44 (author) from london on January 28, 2021:

Thank you very much Vidya. Welcome here. Appreciations.

manatita44 (author) from london on January 28, 2021:

Thank you Vidya and welcome here. Appreciated.

VIDYA D SAGAR on January 27, 2021:

A charming and sweet poem Manatita. A beautiful expression of love for a valentine. I enjoyed reading your poem.

manatita44 (author) from london on January 27, 2021:

Indeed, Bliss is there, my Bro. Thank you so much!!

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on January 27, 2021:

Very calming in love my friend. Bliss is there for the taking I think.

manatita44 (author) from london on January 27, 2021:

Thank you, Peggy.

Appreciated very much! Stay blessed.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on January 27, 2021:

Lovely words of love, as always. Wishing you an early Valentine's Day!

manatita44 (author) from london on January 27, 2021:

But you look graceful! Shouldn't he look handsome still? Just a shift in his angle of vision, perhaps. All happens for the best, as there's no alternative. Give him my Love, Doris. Great seeing you! - Manatita

Doris James MizBejabbers from Beautiful South on January 27, 2021:

Beautiful, Manatita. I enjoyed your special poem. Valentine's Day holds a special place for me because that's the day I met my husband. I started a day at a new job on Valentine's Day 1983, and there he was, young and handsome. Here he is today, older, bent from ravages of time, and long haired from pandemic isolation. Who would have guessed we'd end up this way? Maybe next Valentines Day we can rejoice that it's over.

manatita44 (author) from london on January 27, 2021:

I think I've replied to you on Louise slot. Thank you so much!! Peace!

manatita44 (author) from london on January 27, 2021:

Thank you Louise, thank you so much! Appreciated!

Sha, then I'm yours! Although this poem isn't addressed to humans, I was scared to offer it to anyone. Chuckle. Love can mean so many different things! Ok, I'll show up with a bouquet of roses in two weeks. Lol. Thank you so much!!

Louise Powles from Norfolk, England on January 27, 2021:

That's really lovely. I love Valentine's Day.

Shauna L Bowling from Central Florida on January 27, 2021:

Manatita, this is so loving. If I had a valentine I'd want him to be just like you!

manatita44 (author) from london on January 27, 2021:

Chitrangada ji,

Thank you so much, my dear friend. Appreciations!

Bill, chuckle. John has done a most exquisite piece for me. Worth a read too, which you will do anyway. More than grateful for the shout. Peace, Bro

Aww, Rosina, so sweet, so charming. A very touching sentiment! Asamkhya Dhanyvaad!

Rosina S Khan on January 27, 2021:

A terrific sonnet on the occasion of the upcoming Valentine's Day. I find it very elegant and soothing and enjoyed it so much. Thank you for sharing, Manatita.

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on January 27, 2021:

I think we should rename Valentine's Day to Manatita's Day. You are the lantern of love online in my humble opinion, and I am grateful for you in my life.

Blessings always

Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on January 27, 2021:

Nicely expressed, lovely poem—Pure and soulful. That’s what true love is all about. I liked reading it.

Thank you for sharing this.

manatita44 (author) from london on January 27, 2021:

Thanks Bro.

Yes, I was sending some money to Tanzania and just noticed my mails. Thank you so much! Will visit soon.

Dee, chuckle.

Thank you for your confidence. Still, I didn't dare offer it to anyone. You, perhaps, haha. Would love to see yours! Gratitude!

'...and Pamela, this is such a 'sweet' sentiment. Highly appreciated!' Higher blessings!

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on January 27, 2021:

This is such a sweet poem, Manatita. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing another special poem. God bless you.

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on January 27, 2021:

Manitata, I was working on an article for Valentine's, and I shuddered when I saw your title. Then I thought, "Please! Manitata's work is in a class all by itself. No comparison possible." Always excellent!

John Hansen from Gondwana Land on January 27, 2021:

A beautiful poem and wise words for Valentine's Day, bro. Thank you for sharing the love. I have also just published the one you requested of me, also. Peace.

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