Watchful Eyes
The Inside
The Haunted House
Creaky Stairs
Dust Settling
Watchful Eyes
Comments
Joni Hooks (author) from Fort Worth, Texas on August 31, 2018:
thanks!
Mark Tulin from Ventura, California on August 31, 2018:
Nice
Joni Hooks (author) from Fort Worth, Texas on August 29, 2018:
It is very short, haha. There was a poetry contest I was going to enter, but never did. The poem had to be 6 words or less. I wasn't too sure about what I had written. I did not know if it was strong enough to be entered.
Liz Westwood from UK on August 29, 2018:
This the shortest hub I have ever read, but effective in conveying an atmosphere.
Joni Hooks (author) from Fort Worth, Texas on August 29, 2018:
Thank you!!!
Rinita Sen on August 29, 2018:
Scary to the core in such few words. Well done!