The Inside

The Haunted House

Creaky Stairs

Dust Settling

Watchful Eyes

Comments

Joni Hooks (author) from Fort Worth, Texas on August 31, 2018:

thanks!

Mark Tulin from Ventura, California on August 31, 2018:

Nice

Joni Hooks (author) from Fort Worth, Texas on August 29, 2018:

It is very short, haha. There was a poetry contest I was going to enter, but never did. The poem had to be 6 words or less. I wasn't too sure about what I had written. I did not know if it was strong enough to be entered.

Liz Westwood from UK on August 29, 2018:

This the shortest hub I have ever read, but effective in conveying an atmosphere.

Joni Hooks (author) from Fort Worth, Texas on August 29, 2018:

Thank you!!!

Rinita Sen on August 29, 2018:

Scary to the core in such few words. Well done!