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Warmth

warmth-of-hands

Warmth

I’ve brewed my emotion into the seven seas,
for my beloved, traveling far from me,
I wish for the warmth of those hands,
which i am getting from my morning tea.

© 2018 Hari Prasad S

Comments

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on September 19, 2019:

Thanks shaloo :-)

Shaloo Walia from India on September 19, 2019:

Simple and sweet but with deep emotions!

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on March 24, 2019:

Thanks Tamara :-)

BBYCGN from Uninhabited Regions on March 23, 2019:

This is so sweet! I love this!

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on February 19, 2019:

Thanks Tamara :-)

- hari

BBYCGN from Uninhabited Regions on February 19, 2019:

I adore this short n’ sweet, rhythmically enchanting poem!

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on January 08, 2019:

Thank you so much devika :-)

- hari

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on January 08, 2019:

Great emotions here. Simply beautiful.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on December 07, 2018:

Thanks Louise for your appreciation note :-)

- hari

Louise Powles from Norfolk, England on December 07, 2018:

That's a lovely short poem. I enjoyed reading that. Thankyou for sharing your poetry with us.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on December 06, 2018:

Hi Li. I like your comment, you have perfectly analysed. Thanks.

-- hari

Li-Jen Hew on December 06, 2018:

Hey Hari.

Within a short poem, I can feel the persona's love for his loved one. It shows the deepness of the love with brewed, seven seas and daily tea. :)

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on December 06, 2018:

I am short of words too for your praise, chitrangada ji. Thanks for your comments. :-)

- hari

Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on December 06, 2018:

Such deep thoughts, in so few words. That’s what a good poem is.

Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on December 03, 2018:

Thanks Jason. :-)

- hari

Jason Behm from Cebu, Philippines on December 03, 2018:

Short yet overflowing with emotions!!! Nice poem Hari!

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on November 30, 2018:

Thanks mark. :-)

- hari

Mark Tulin from Ventura, California on November 30, 2018:

Nice little poem with an ironic twist at the end.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on November 28, 2018:

Vishnu sir what a beautiful comment. Thank you so much.

- hari

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on November 28, 2018:

That's fun isn't it Eric ?

Thanks for the appreciation. :-)

- hari

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on November 28, 2018:

My boy and I play; "warmest/coldest hands" each day. I am happy they are not so far away.

I really like all your short poems. Thank you.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on November 28, 2018:

Thanks Sunita ji for your encouragement and appreciation :-)

- hari

Sunita Mishra on November 28, 2018:

Beautiful write up

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on November 28, 2018:

Thank you so much Rinita for your visit and appreciation. :-)

- hari

Rinita Sen on November 28, 2018:

I simply love this. So much warmth in this short verse. Lovely!

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on November 28, 2018:

That's so true. Jodah. Thanks for the encouraging comments. :-)

- Hari

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on November 28, 2018:

I like the imagery here in this short poem, Hari. a lot of things can give us warmth one way or another.