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W.B. Yeats 'When You Are Old'. A Poem Addressed to the Love of His Life?

Updated on August 28, 2017
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Glenis studied for a B. A. (Hons) in English Literature after taking early retirement. She was awarded her Degree at the age of 67

Maud Gonne in Her Younger Days

Maud Gonne, age 23, in 1889 - the year she first met W.B.Yeats
Maud Gonne, age 23, in 1889 - the year she first met W.B.Yeats

The Relationship Between Maud Gonne and W.B.Yeats

The great love of the life of the Irish poet William Butler Yeats was the Irish actress and revolutionary Maud Gonne, equally famous for her intense nationalist politics and her beauty. Maud was a strong influence on Yeats’ poetry. He proposed to her on many occasions but was always met with rejection - she maintained, perhaps as an excuse, that his unrequited love contributed to the effectiveness of his writing. The sentiments expressed in the poem When You Are Old suggest that it was written with her in mind. In 1903 Maud married another man. Yeats eventually married another woman, in 1917. The marriage lasted until his death in 1939.

Life is a long preparation for something that never happens

W.B.Yeats

W.B.Yeats

W.B. Yeats
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'When You Are Old' (1892) by W.B.Yeats

When you are old and grey and full of sleep,

And nodding by the fire, take down this book,

And slowly read, and dream of the soft look

Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;


How many loved your moments of glad grace,

And loved your beauty with love false or true,

But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,

And loved the sorrows of your changing face;


And bending down beside the glowing bars,

Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled

And paced upon the mountains overhead

And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.

Why Analyse a Poem?

You might ask the question Why analyse a poem? Hopefully, you have enjoyed reading the sentiments that it expresses and perhaps it has conjured vivid mental images in your mind. You are satisfied to leave it there. But recognising poetic devices and detecting them in a poem can add to the reader's enjoyment. Furthermore, some poems may seem obtuse at a first reading - a line by line analysis helps to understand the message that the poet is attempting to convey.

There are a number of poetic devices that a poet can draw up and s(he) will redraft many times before s(he) is happy with the final version. A great deal of skill is involved in drafting a successful poem.



An Interpretation of 'When You Are Old' by W.B.Yeats

The poem is directed toward one young person, presumably a woman if read in the light of Yeat's biographical details.(Though a reader could apply the sentiments expressed in the poem to a man). I have made an assumption that Maud Gonne is the person about whom Yeats wrote, as she was his muse.

The speaker in the poem talks about a current situation but also predicts the future.

The first stanza seems to be self-referential in as much as it implies that the poem will be published. The person who is addressed is urged to read it in old age whilst reminiscing about the past and her lost beauty. The punctuation in this stanza, with caesuras in lines 2,3, and 4 slows the pace of the poem, reinforcing the mental imagery created by a tired elderly person by the choice of words sleep, nodding, slowly, dream.

In the first two lines of the second stanza, the speaker continues the theme of reminiscence. The person addressed will remember that in her youth, her days of glad grace, she was loved by many men. She will remember that as her beauty and youth by this point in time have faded into the past, so has their love. In lines three and four, the 'voice' in the poem tells her, one man (implicitly himself) loved her better than anyone else - because his love was about more than her physical attributes, it is for the nature of her soul. Although the lines are ostensibly about what the woman will remember in old age they are actually a declaration of present day love. 'Pilgrim' is an unusual choice of word to describe this woman's soul - a pilgrim is a person on a journey in search of something or somewhere. Historically, a pilgrim made a journey to a Holy shrine.

The third stanza again presents a current situation projected into the woman's old age. She is told that she will remember that she rejected this man who loved her and predicts that the memory will make her a little sad. He evidently will have given up his pursuit of her, left in a state of agitation to pace amongst the mountains overhead and disappear amid a crowd of stars. The lines seem to suggest that, because of her rejection, he will never find peace. One day he will die, become star dust, and she will have lost him forever.

In summary, the poem seems to be both a warning about the future and an appeal to the beloved to reconsider, to see that without him old age will be bleak and full of regret.

Some Poetic Devices to Consider When Reading a Poem

  • Form - the shape and pattern of a poem, created through the related devices of stanza and metre.
  • Line - the basic poetic device that distinguishes poetry from prose
  • Rhyme - a skilled poet can create a musical experience for the reader/listener through the sound patterns that (s)he creates. Rhyme can occur throughout a poem, not simply at the end of a line.
  • Voice - some poems are personal, directly addressed to a specific person, or group, others are public and impersonal
  • Imagery - often used to defamiliarise what we are familiar with.
  • Metaphor, (describing something in terms of something else)
  • Simile (saying something is like something else) are powerful tools that stimulate the readers' imagination
  • Theme - fundamentally, what the poem is about. An idea that the writer runs with through the poem, or to which he returns.
  • Alliteration - the repeated use of a letter or syllable, usually at the start of a word. Note, for example, how frequently the soft sibilant letter s is used in the first stanza of this poem. It slows the pace and emphasises the sad tone of the poem
  • Repetition - in the second stanza of this poem the word loved is used four times.

N.B. Not all poems, particularly modern ones, contain all of the elements mentioned above. I venture to suggest that you will be able to detect most of them in When You Are Old.


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    Glenis Rix 3 weeks ago from UK

    It is a lovely poem. Sadly, I can relate to it.

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    Jo Miller 3 weeks ago from Tennessee

    I know this poem well. My husband taught English for many, many years and he often quotes this one to me.

    Great poem. Great analysis.

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    Glenis Rix 3 weeks ago from UK

    Thanks for visiting, Gypsy Rose

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    Gypsy Rose Lee 3 weeks ago from Riga, Latvia

    Thanks for sharing and the lesson about different ways to look at poetry.

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    Glenis Rix 3 weeks ago from UK

    Thanks for visiting and for your positive feedback, Dora. Have a great day.

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    Dora Isaac Weithers 3 weeks ago from The Caribbean

    "But recognising poetic devices and detecting them in a poem can add to the reader's enjoyment." You proved it. Thanks for sharing the poem and the literary appreciation.

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    Mary Wickison 3 weeks ago from Brazil

    Hi Glenis,

    I am from California where I was born and raised. I married a Brit and live for 20 years in the UK. Not quite an English rose, but thank you.

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    Glenis Rix 3 weeks ago from UK

    Yes, Mary, that is another plausible interpretation. You have demonstrated how we each bring our own terms of reference to what we read and draw differing meanings from the text. Thanks for visiting and commenting. (P.S. I don't know why - I had assumed that you were a British exPat. Perhaps it's because your pic has the characteristics of an English Rose).

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    Mary Wickison 3 weeks ago from Brazil

    I found myself surprised the word 'pilgrim' initially. As you say it is now linked to a holy journey.

    Or John Wayne. LOL

    But, as an American, I link it with someone looking for a better place, such as the pilgrims who went to America.

    So the line.

    But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,

    can be read as that adventurous free spirit.

    I love how you analyze it because I struggle understanding poetry and it explains it for me.

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    Glenis Rix 3 weeks ago from UK

    Yes, Louise. So sad that he spent so long pining for a woman who continually rejected him.

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    Louise Powles 3 weeks ago from Norfolk, England

    I love William Yeats. He was such a talented poet.