Happy (or not) Valentine's Day Haiku
Happy (or not) Valentine's Day!
The color is red
which accentuates the heart
beating as if one
The question is asked
Will you be my Valentine
Now and forever
Kisses are so sweet
Lift her right off of her feet
they are a real treat
Chocolate is yum
Can you please deliver some
or else be a bum
Conversation hearts
Read aloud to each other
Then savor each bite
More Haikus for your Valentine
Love like a fine wine
the knot is made of coarse twine
drink well and be fine
Will you marry me
We wonder what she will say
Maybe go away
Can you give a hug
to a male who likes to bug
while wearing a rug
I dreamt I loved you
Realized it was a bad dream
you are a nightmare
Cupid you are not
Life is blissful and so nice
Since you took a hike
Love forever lost
My heart forever so sad
for the love we had
The Valentine's Day Song
Do you celebrate Valentine's Day?
© 2012 Linda Bilyeu
Comments
here's a funny haiku,
Forget red and blue,
Pizza's the color of love,
And chocolate too.
Beautiful poem, wish that my valentines day was that fruitful
Hi,
And, here I am again enjoying your Valentine Poems---I loved the Valentine Song it is still in my head and probably will be until I go to sleep.
I hope your Valentine Day was wonderful with kisses, candy, hugs, babies all around, your Sweetheart and flowers.
Bobbi Purvis
I am sharing this with Twitter and pin on my repin board.
I took very good care of myself this week. Smiles. Yesterday was feeling so alone but today so many lovely Valentine colors, chocolates, poems. Thanks for the beautiful red heart picture on your hub!
Love is in the air.......but I have a head cold and my breathing if off!! :)
O yes...'or not'....I liked the line 'when you took a hike'....sometimes when all is said and done that makes Valentine's Day better than we can imagine.
Hoping you have had a lovely day. I am being Nini today and enjoying very much. I feel very loved.
Angels are on the way to you today ps
Three years ago, I enjoyed this valentines poetry and video so much. I'm still sharing this with others and especially those who don't have the loving arms of a man like yours! God bless him. And you two, dearest Linda.
Love,
Audrey
Excellent haiku, Sunshine. It's the hardest form of poetry to do. I've tried them a decade ago and did get one or two published in print. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us.
This is a fun hub Sunshine, thanks for sharing.
This is an awesome post. The video is so cute. Sharing and linking!
Happy Valentine's Day!
I like this hub.
Nice written
AWW--spreading that valentine spirit! Lovely Linda!
Voted up, funny, and awesome. I have to admit "you are a nightmare" had me cracking up.
stars n the hearts sun
Beautiful haiku, came back to read again! Great write. Voted up.
I enjoyed this again! Happy V Day! :-)
Hi Sunshine,
I found this Valentine poem of yours and it is beautiful. And I want to share it with our FB Friends.
Bobbi Hunter
Love this! Sending you some yummy chocolates...'Am no bum, alright! :) Awesome read. Sharing the goodness my sunshine!
Love from the sky~
Such a happy feeling I get when I read this haiku about Valentine's Day. Everyday should be like a celebration of love, then we all will get along better no matter what the weather!
As Charlie Sheen says, this article is "WNINNIG!"
You've imrpsesed us all with that posting!
I like this much Sunshine. I am glad is appeared this morning. What a sentiment to carry while heading for that day of work. That coffee along that early AM drive will have company remembering these thoughts you shared.
tim
lol..ummm...i voted that VD is a 'massacre'...soooo....take it from there...lol..
Great haikus, my friend!
sharing on..
Awooow....its brilliant. Loved reading it sure. Shared and voted up interesting. God bless !
Awesome, fantastic and beautiful. Enjoyed reading. Voted up.
I'm back again to indulge myself - love your poem and passed it around :)
Thanks again for the link to my hub. Happy Valentine's Day, you Sweetheart you!
Linda,
Great job here! Excellent Haiku for Valentines Day! I enjoyed it very much!
Very adorable haiku poem and video too. Reminds me of my younger years. I still don't know who my secret admirer was in 1979!
Hi, this is my favorite!
I dreamt I loved you,
Realized it was a bad dream
you are a nightmare!
Haha!, absolutely brilliant! Happy Valentines day!
Linda, I don't know how I missed this one but I did. Definitely a different take on Valentine's Day but a most entertaining one. I haven't decided if I really enjoy haiku because I always finding myself counting syllables and not focusing on the meaning. Must be the analytical (or anal) side of me. Still, I got a few chuckles from your wonder haiku so it was worth it. Thanks for sharing!
Cupid you are not!
Life is blissful and so nice,
Since you took a hike!
This is my favorite- I think we have all been there once or twice!!
I found my new phrase for Halloween, bring me chocolate or be a bum.haiku's are so fun..thanks for sharing..I'm tweeting this:)
Very cute. I love it!
Happy Valentine's Day to you too. Voting this Up and Beautiful.
REALLY CUTE ANOTHER THUMBS UP DEAR, I LOVE TO READ YOUR HUUBS WHEN I GET A CHANCE,, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO YOU AND DAVE,
Very cute! Happy Valentine's Day!!
Absolutely fantastic Valentine hub! As new as Haiku is to me, I know this one ROCKS! You have a gift, my friend.....and you share it so well!
Awww....Tammy....kick him to the curb!! How rude of him! Some guys piss me off by how they think of their lady. Burns me up...Sorry, old fashioned. Great hub sunshine! Have a blessed day ladies!
How cute. How humorous. Thank you for your words!
I have to really think about this one. I turned on the computer this morning and a certain someone didn't sign out of his Craiglist chat room. He was asking his friends in the fitness room how he could trick his fat girlfriend into losing weight because she was too lazy to realize she needs to do it for herself. Someone is going to be in the dog house this Valentine's Day. Cute hub!
These all are gems. But I choose this one.
Kisses are sweet
Lift her right off of her feet
they are a real treat!
Beautiful haiku.
This was great, it gives me inspiration for my own Valentine's Day hub.
Way cute following love from start to bitter end. Happy V Day SS :)
This was adorable. You had me smiling all the way through it!
Nice job...voted up!
Wow...Linda. This was your first Haiku, correct and you nailed it dear!
gotta share is around and let everyone catch the bug of lord valentino :)
Linking this hub and your Valentine Haiku to my Love Song hub. :-)
fun work, Linda!
I agree you do make these look so easy, & I also agree about the chocolate being vital for survival, loved it Sunshine :) ge
Too often with Valentine's on the 14th, and my B-day on the 16th, they are celebrated together. But I know that he loves me anyway. And i love the chocolate!
One year I actually attended a wedding on Valentine's day. But usually for me it is just another day of the year. I've always been a big fan of chocolate too.
Hi, Sunshine. Loved your Haiku and the video. And I'm with you all the way on the chocolate.
Love all thes Haiku'. I think you covered everything. Lol. My favourite was
I dreamt I loved you,
Realized it was a bad dream
you are a nightmare!
This one brought a giggle from me.
The video was cute
I like how the poem was different! Thumbs up and lots of votes! I may have to include this in a little poetry Valentine's Day hub, if it's okay with you!
Very nicely done...hard to believe we are only days away from another Valentine's Day. My wife is not much of a chocolate eater...but she loves her some carnations...trying to figure out how many to get her this year. Voted up.
Sunshine -- You're so sweet! Thank you so much for the link to my hub!
You are the best and so are these haiku's!
Sannel
you have created contrasting emotions here Linda, and this is simply awesome...love the color red streaked with white...
Love your loved up (or not) Haiku, Sunshine, especially -
Chocolate is yum
Can you please deliver some?
or else be a bum!!
I speak this language also. No chocolate, no lovin!!!!
Simple. :) :)
Love your words, my votes to you.
So delightful!
I loved this one; "Love forever lost
My heart forever so sad
for the love we had"
So very beautiful!
Voted up. Thank you!
So very cute!
A beautiful and truthful poem and an adorable video! Couldn't ask for anything more. Thanks for the link to my hub. Such a kind and caring thing to do. But then...that is what sunshine is all about. Voted up and across. Thankyou!
vocalcoach~
Again, LOVE IT!! I agree with Deborah, you do make it look so easy!! Voted up and across! :-)
These poems are so adorable..you make this look so easy...I voted way up..debbie
So cute!
I love the bit of rhyme, too! You took it a step further, and nailed it, as always! =]
Cute! I like the one about chocolate.
Adorable! I had to say that love is a nightmare.. LOL. Thank you so much for the link. You are the best hub writer (and at this moment, the hottest and the best) for this and so much and more. Awesome!
I loved the video! That is so cute :-) The poem is also wonderful! I do not celebrate V-day, but I enjoy all the love and stuff anyways. Your poem was far from the usual V-day item, but I think I enjoyed it more for that specific reason! Great job :-)
Wow wow wow!!!! This is fantastic!!!
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