Happy (or not) Valentine's Day Haiku
Linda (Kaywood) Bilyeu is a self-published author. Her books are available on Amazon. She writes from the heart—there is no other way.
Happy (or not) Valentine's Day!
The color is red
which accentuates the heart
beating as if one
The question is asked
Will you be my Valentine
Now and forever
Kisses are so sweet
Lift her right off of her feet
they are a real treat
Chocolate is yum
Can you please deliver some
or else be a bum
Conversation hearts
Read aloud to each other
Then savor each bite
More Haikus for your Valentine
Love like a fine wine
the knot is made of coarse twine
drink well and be fine
Will you marry me
We wonder what she will say
Maybe go away
Can you give a hug
to a male who likes to bug
while wearing a rug
I dreamt I loved you
Realized it was a bad dream
you are a nightmare
Cupid you are not
Life is blissful and so nice
Since you took a hike
Love forever lost
My heart forever so sad
for the love we had
The Valentine's Day Song
© 2012 Linda Bilyeu
Comments
Hi.... on February 13, 2019:
here's a funny haiku,
Forget red and blue,
Pizza's the color of love,
And chocolate too.
peachy from Home Sweet Home on February 15, 2015:
Beautiful poem, wish that my valentines day was that fruitful
Barbara Purvis Hunter from Florida on February 14, 2015:
Hi,
And, here I am again enjoying your Valentine Poems---I loved the Valentine Song it is still in my head and probably will be until I go to sleep.
I hope your Valentine Day was wonderful with kisses, candy, hugs, babies all around, your Sweetheart and flowers.
Bobbi Purvis
I am sharing this with Twitter and pin on my repin board.
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 14, 2015:
Happy Valentine's Day Y'all! :)
Dreamer at heart from Northern California on February 14, 2015:
I took very good care of myself this week. Smiles. Yesterday was feeling so alone but today so many lovely Valentine colors, chocolates, poems. Thanks for the beautiful red heart picture on your hub!
Suzie from Carson City on February 14, 2015:
Love is in the air.......but I have a head cold and my breathing if off!! :)
Patricia Scott from North Central Florida on February 14, 2015:
O yes...'or not'....I liked the line 'when you took a hike'....sometimes when all is said and done that makes Valentine's Day better than we can imagine.
Hoping you have had a lovely day. I am being Nini today and enjoying very much. I feel very loved.
Angels are on the way to you today ps
Audrey Hunt from Pahrump NV on February 14, 2015:
Three years ago, I enjoyed this valentines poetry and video so much. I'm still sharing this with others and especially those who don't have the loving arms of a man like yours! God bless him. And you two, dearest Linda.
Love,
Audrey
Kristen Howe from Northeast Ohio on February 14, 2015:
Excellent haiku, Sunshine. It's the hardest form of poetry to do. I've tried them a decade ago and did get one or two published in print. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us.
John Hansen from Gondwana Land on February 14, 2015:
This is a fun hub Sunshine, thanks for sharing.
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 13, 2015:
Happy Valentine's Day 2015!
Dianna Mendez on February 14, 2014:
This is an awesome post. The video is so cute. Sharing and linking!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 14, 2014:
Thank you Pankaj! :)
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 14, 2014:
Happy Valentine's Day Y'all!
Audrey Howitt from California on February 08, 2014:
AWW--spreading that valentine spirit! Lovely Linda!
Mary Craig from New York on February 07, 2014:
Voted up, funny, and awesome. I have to admit "you are a nightmare" had me cracking up.
sujaya venkatesh on February 07, 2014:
stars n the hearts sun
Nithya Venkat from Dubai on February 07, 2014:
Beautiful haiku, came back to read again! Great write. Voted up.
Victoria Lynn from Arkansas, USA on February 06, 2014:
I enjoyed this again! Happy V Day! :-)
Barbara Purvis Hunter from Florida on February 06, 2014:
Hi Sunshine,
I found this Valentine poem of yours and it is beautiful. And I want to share it with our FB Friends.
Bobbi Hunter
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 06, 2014:
Thank you CrisSp for the chocolates. They sure are divine! :)
CrisSp from Sky Is The Limit Adventure on February 06, 2014:
Love this! Sending you some yummy chocolates...'Am no bum, alright! :) Awesome read. Sharing the goodness my sunshine!
Love from the sky~
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 06, 2014:
I agree Christina! :)
Christina M. Castro from Baltimore,MD USA on January 18, 2014:
Such a happy feeling I get when I read this haiku about Valentine's Day. Everyday should be like a celebration of love, then we all will get along better no matter what the weather!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on January 15, 2014:
Thanks Y'all and Happy soon to be Valentine's Day!
Keyon on July 30, 2013:
As Charlie Sheen says, this article is "WNINNIG!"
Linda on July 26, 2013:
You've imrpsesed us all with that posting!
Tim Mitchell from Escondido, CA on February 15, 2013:
I like this much Sunshine. I am glad is appeared this morning. What a sentiment to carry while heading for that day of work. That coffee along that early AM drive will have company remembering these thoughts you shared.
tim
Karen Silverman on February 15, 2013:
lol..ummm...i voted that VD is a 'massacre'...soooo....take it from there...lol..
Great haikus, my friend!
sharing on..
deergha from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!! on February 14, 2013:
Awooow....its brilliant. Loved reading it sure. Shared and voted up interesting. God bless !
Nithya Venkat from Dubai on February 14, 2013:
Awesome, fantastic and beautiful. Enjoyed reading. Voted up.
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 14, 2013:
Thank you and Happy Valentine's Day Audrey!!
Audrey Hunt from Pahrump NV on February 14, 2013:
I'm back again to indulge myself - love your poem and passed it around :)
Thanks again for the link to my hub. Happy Valentine's Day, you Sweetheart you!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 13, 2013:
Happy Valentine's Day!!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on July 17, 2012:
Everyday is V Day to me Josh, so Happy Valentines Day!:)
Thanks for your comment.
Joshua Zerbini from Pennsylvania on July 17, 2012:
Linda,
Great job here! Excellent Haiku for Valentines Day! I enjoyed it very much!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 14, 2012:
Hi Nell, that haiku was a fun one to create. It was actually for a friend of mine who recently broke up with her boyfriend. She printed it out and has it on her fridge to make her smile:)
Hi CMcastro, Who knows maybe your secret admirer will look you up one day! Happy Valentine's Day.
Christina M. Castro from Baltimore,MD USA on February 14, 2012:
Very adorable haiku poem and video too. Reminds me of my younger years. I still don't know who my secret admirer was in 1979!
Nell Rose from England on February 14, 2012:
Hi, this is my favorite!
I dreamt I loved you,
Realized it was a bad dream
you are a nightmare!
Haha!, absolutely brilliant! Happy Valentines day!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 14, 2012:
Hello mpoche, I'm glad you were able to select a favorite.
Hi Poetic Fool, I'm happy you found it and what perfect timing on Valentine's Day!:)
Thank you for your comments and Happy Valentine's Day!
Poetic Fool on February 14, 2012:
Linda, I don't know how I missed this one but I did. Definitely a different take on Valentine's Day but a most entertaining one. I haven't decided if I really enjoy haiku because I always finding myself counting syllables and not focusing on the meaning. Must be the analytical (or anal) side of me. Still, I got a few chuckles from your wonder haiku so it was worth it. Thanks for sharing!
Michal from Miami, Florida on February 14, 2012:
Cupid you are not!
Life is blissful and so nice,
Since you took a hike!
This is my favorite- I think we have all been there once or twice!!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 14, 2012:
That's a fab phrase for Halloween! I use it also!:)
Brenda Trott, M.Ed from Houston, TX on February 14, 2012:
I found my new phrase for Halloween, bring me chocolate or be a bum.haiku's are so fun..thanks for sharing..I'm tweeting this:)
savanahl on February 14, 2012:
Very cute. I love it!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 14, 2012:
Happy Valentines Day SUE PR and to you also Alocsin! Wishing you both a lovely day!:)
Aurelio Locsin from Orange County, CA on February 14, 2012:
Happy Valentine's Day to you too. Voting this Up and Beautiful.
SUE PR on February 14, 2012:
REALLY CUTE ANOTHER THUMBS UP DEAR, I LOVE TO READ YOUR HUUBS WHEN I GET A CHANCE,, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO YOU AND DAVE,
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 13, 2012:
@ytsenoh, Thank you for stopping by!
@jeff, I agree! Yo Tammy follow Jeff's instructions!!:)
@paula, thank you my fabulous friend!:))
@audrey, Happy Valentine's Day!!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 13, 2012:
@vinaya, that's one of my favorite's also!
@tammy, I wish I could help you with that dilemna, but I don't think I have any words of wisdom for that. Thanks for sharing though! :)
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 13, 2012:
@jon I am looking forward to your valentine's hub! Be sure and share it!:)
Audrey Howitt from California on February 13, 2012:
Very cute! Happy Valentine's Day!!
Suzie from Carson City on February 13, 2012:
Absolutely fantastic Valentine hub! As new as Haiku is to me, I know this one ROCKS! You have a gift, my friend.....and you share it so well!
Jeff from Where ever the road takes me.... on February 13, 2012:
Awww....Tammy....kick him to the curb!! How rude of him! Some guys piss me off by how they think of their lady. Burns me up...Sorry, old fashioned. Great hub sunshine! Have a blessed day ladies!
Cathy from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri on February 13, 2012:
How cute. How humorous. Thank you for your words!
Tammy from North Carolina on February 13, 2012:
I have to really think about this one. I turned on the computer this morning and a certain someone didn't sign out of his Craiglist chat room. He was asking his friends in the fitness room how he could trick his fat girlfriend into losing weight because she was too lazy to realize she needs to do it for herself. Someone is going to be in the dog house this Valentine's Day. Cute hub!
Vinaya Ghimire from Nepal on February 13, 2012:
These all are gems. But I choose this one.
Kisses are sweet
Lift her right off of her feet
they are a real treat!
Beautiful haiku.
Jonathan McCloskey from Cinnaminson, New Jersey on February 13, 2012:
This was great, it gives me inspiration for my own Valentine's Day hub.
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 12, 2012:
Thank you for your lovely, heartfelt, sweet, sentimental comments Ardie ~ Homesteadbound ~ Ruchira ~ iamaudraleigh!
Sondra from Neverland on February 12, 2012:
Way cute following love from start to bitter end. Happy V Day SS :)
Cindy Murdoch from Texas on February 12, 2012:
This was adorable. You had me smiling all the way through it!
iamaudraleigh on February 12, 2012:
Nice job...voted up!
Ruchira from United States on February 12, 2012:
Wow...Linda. This was your first Haiku, correct and you nailed it dear!
gotta share is around and let everyone catch the bug of lord valentino :)
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 12, 2012:
Happy 2 days before V Day!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on February 10, 2012:
Spreading the HubLove! Thank you for your comments!:)
Raciniwa ~ SanneL ~ Cogerson ~ Victoria Lynn ~ Rosemay50 ~ drbj ~ FloraBreenRobinson ~ Homesteadbound ~ geegee77 ~ PDXKaraokeguy ~ Sholland 10
Susan Holland from Southwest Missouri on January 24, 2012:
Linking this hub and your Valentine Haiku to my Love Song hub. :-)
Justin W Price from Juneau, Alaska on January 22, 2012:
fun work, Linda!
geegee77 from The Lone Star State!! on January 19, 2012:
I agree you do make these look so easy, & I also agree about the chocolate being vital for survival, loved it Sunshine :) ge
Cindy Murdoch from Texas on January 15, 2012:
Too often with Valentine's on the 14th, and my B-day on the 16th, they are celebrated together. But I know that he loves me anyway. And i love the chocolate!
FloraBreenRobison on January 15, 2012:
One year I actually attended a wedding on Valentine's day. But usually for me it is just another day of the year. I've always been a big fan of chocolate too.
drbj and sherry from south Florida on January 15, 2012:
Hi, Sunshine. Loved your Haiku and the video. And I'm with you all the way on the chocolate.
Rosemary Sadler from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand on January 15, 2012:
Love all thes Haiku'. I think you covered everything. Lol. My favourite was
I dreamt I loved you,
Realized it was a bad dream
you are a nightmare!
This one brought a giggle from me.
The video was cute
Victoria Lynn from Arkansas, USA on January 15, 2012:
I like how the poem was different! Thumbs up and lots of votes! I may have to include this in a little poetry Valentine's Day hub, if it's okay with you!
UltimateMovieRankings from Virginia on January 15, 2012:
Very nicely done...hard to believe we are only days away from another Valentine's Day. My wife is not much of a chocolate eater...but she loves her some carnations...trying to figure out how many to get her this year. Voted up.
SanneL from Sweden on January 15, 2012:
Sunshine -- You're so sweet! Thank you so much for the link to my hub!
You are the best and so are these haiku's!
Sannel
raciniwa from Talisay City, Cebu on January 14, 2012:
you have created contrasting emotions here Linda, and this is simply awesome...love the color red streaked with white...
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on January 14, 2012:
I totally agree Fennelseed, that one is my favorite also!!! One could never have enough chocolate!:)
Annie Fenn from Australia on January 14, 2012:
Love your loved up (or not) Haiku, Sunshine, especially -
Chocolate is yum
Can you please deliver some?
or else be a bum!!
I speak this language also. No chocolate, no lovin!!!!
Simple. :) :)
Love your words, my votes to you.
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on January 14, 2012:
Thank you for your comments Jackie and Sannel ... always appreciated:)
SanneL from Sweden on January 14, 2012:
So delightful!
I loved this one; "Love forever lost
My heart forever so sad
for the love we had"
So very beautiful!
Voted up. Thank you!
Jackie Lynnley from the beautiful south on January 14, 2012:
So very cute!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on January 14, 2012:
Deborah, Susan, Audrey ... sending you hub hugs and hublove! There's plenty to go around! XO
Audrey Hunt from Pahrump NV on January 14, 2012:
A beautiful and truthful poem and an adorable video! Couldn't ask for anything more. Thanks for the link to my hub. Such a kind and caring thing to do. But then...that is what sunshine is all about. Voted up and across. Thankyou!
vocalcoach~
Susan Holland from Southwest Missouri on January 14, 2012:
Again, LOVE IT!! I agree with Deborah, you do make it look so easy!! Voted up and across! :-)
Deborah Brooks Langford from Brownsville,TX on January 14, 2012:
These poems are so adorable..you make this look so easy...I voted way up..debbie
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on January 14, 2012:
Hub hugs and hublove to you Veronica:)
Veronica Roberts from Ohio, USA on January 13, 2012:
So cute!
I love the bit of rhyme, too! You took it a step further, and nailed it, as always! =]
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on January 13, 2012:
Thank you Tammy! I'm glad you enjoyed the haiku's. We all have different ways of celebrating Valentine's Day...the important thing is to have fun doing what we do:)
Thank you Rebecca! I enjoyed writing the one about chocolate. Chocolate is vital for survival!:)
Rebecca Mealey from Northeastern Georgia, USA on January 13, 2012:
Cute! I like the one about chocolate.
Tammy from North Carolina on January 13, 2012:
Adorable! I had to say that love is a nightmare.. LOL. Thank you so much for the link. You are the best hub writer (and at this moment, the hottest and the best) for this and so much and more. Awesome!
Linda Bilyeu (author) from Orlando, FL on January 13, 2012:
Thank you Haiku Sue!:)
Hi Myth, I thought of a few friends and the poems were written in their honor. I like V-Day but I'm more for showing the love everyday:)
Sending you both some hublove!
mythicalstorm273 on January 13, 2012:
I loved the video! That is so cute :-) The poem is also wonderful! I do not celebrate V-day, but I enjoy all the love and stuff anyways. Your poem was far from the usual V-day item, but I think I enjoyed it more for that specific reason! Great job :-)
Susan Zutautas from Ontario, Canada on January 13, 2012:
Wow wow wow!!!! This is fantastic!!!
