Until the Dawn
Until the dawn
I've cried out my life
I've cried out my soul
I've turned the river pearls into tears true blue
I still haven't cried over you
I dug out a grave
I buried my heart
I solemnly promised the truth to bear
I still didn't hold you near
I stand at the twilight
Watch the sun-moon dance
The rays cleanse my home, long gone
Within my sight, I let you drown
Into the solitary waves of the dawn
That wouldn't come, never around
© 2018 Rinita Sen
Comments
Rinita Sen (author) on June 07, 2018:
Hahaha.. thanks for your revisit, Frank (Some things are cooking inside my head, to be laid out soon)!
Frank Atanacio from Shelton on June 07, 2018:
Nothing new yet with you so I'm checking out this little gem... :) again
Rinita Sen (author) on June 07, 2018:
Thank you Mark, for your visit and appreciation.
Mark Tulin from Palm Springs, California on June 07, 2018:
beautifully written with an emotional punch
Rinita Sen (author) on June 07, 2018:
Thank you manatita for that true observation and connect. Great to see you!
manatita44 from london on June 07, 2018:
Yes, we are mostly like that.
Into the things that seemingly don't matter, until we finally come to the One that does. Exquisite piece.
Rinita Sen (author) on May 29, 2018:
Thank you Verlie, great to be back and network with such talented poets again! Here's to sharing more!
Verlie Burroughs from Canada on May 29, 2018:
What a beautiful heart-breaking poem, these are hard to do. The last verse is poignant.
Rinita Sen (author) on May 28, 2018:
Thank you Vidya for your visit and kind comment.
Vidya Mallar on May 28, 2018:
Nice words dear.. Depth of missing someone dear is evident.. God bless
Rinita Sen (author) on May 24, 2018:
:) :) :)
Frank Atanacio from Shelton on May 24, 2018:
It's like riding a bike.. :)
Rinita Sen (author) on May 24, 2018:
Thank you, Frank! Means a lot as it is my comeback poem. Haven't conjured two rhyming words in 3 years!
Frank Atanacio from Shelton on May 23, 2018:
wow deep drowning words in such a short poem.. awesome..
