Until the Dawn
Until the dawn
I've cried out my life
I've cried out my soul
I've turned the river pearls into tears true blue
I still haven't cried over you
I dug out a grave
I buried my heart
I solemnly promised the truth to bear
I still didn't hold you near
I stand at the twilight
Watch the sun-moon dance
The rays cleanse my home, long gone
Within my sight, I let you drown
Into the solitary waves of the dawn
That wouldn't come, never around
© 2018 Rinita Sen
Comments
AUTHORHahaha.. thanks for your revisit, Frank (Some things are cooking inside my head, to be laid out soon)!
Nothing new yet with you so I'm checking out this little gem... :) again
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Thank you Mark, for your visit and appreciation.
beautifully written with an emotional punch
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Thank you manatita for that true observation and connect. Great to see you!
Yes, we are mostly like that.
Into the things that seemingly don't matter, until we finally come to the One that does. Exquisite piece.
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Thank you Verlie, great to be back and network with such talented poets again! Here's to sharing more!
What a beautiful heart-breaking poem, these are hard to do. The last verse is poignant.
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Thank you Vidya for your visit and kind comment.
Nice words dear.. Depth of missing someone dear is evident.. God bless
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:) :) :)
It's like riding a bike.. :)
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Thank you, Frank! Means a lot as it is my comeback poem. Haven't conjured two rhyming words in 3 years!
wow deep drowning words in such a short poem.. awesome..
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