Updated date:

Until the Dawn

Author:

Until the dawn

I've cried out my life
I've cried out my soul
I've turned the river pearls into tears true blue
I still haven't cried over you

I dug out a grave
I buried my heart
I solemnly promised the truth to bear
I still didn't hold you near

I stand at the twilight
Watch the sun-moon dance
The rays cleanse my home, long gone
Within my sight, I let you drown
Into the solitary waves of the dawn
That wouldn't come, never around

© 2018 Rinita Sen

Comments

Rinita Sen (author) on June 07, 2018:

Hahaha.. thanks for your revisit, Frank (Some things are cooking inside my head, to be laid out soon)!

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on June 07, 2018:

Nothing new yet with you so I'm checking out this little gem... :) again

Rinita Sen (author) on June 07, 2018:

Thank you Mark, for your visit and appreciation.

Mark Tulin from Palm Springs, California on June 07, 2018:

beautifully written with an emotional punch

Rinita Sen (author) on June 07, 2018:

Thank you manatita for that true observation and connect. Great to see you!

manatita44 from london on June 07, 2018:

Yes, we are mostly like that.

Into the things that seemingly don't matter, until we finally come to the One that does. Exquisite piece.

Rinita Sen (author) on May 29, 2018:

Thank you Verlie, great to be back and network with such talented poets again! Here's to sharing more!

Verlie Burroughs from Canada on May 29, 2018:

What a beautiful heart-breaking poem, these are hard to do. The last verse is poignant.

Rinita Sen (author) on May 28, 2018:

Thank you Vidya for your visit and kind comment.

Vidya Mallar on May 28, 2018:

Nice words dear.. Depth of missing someone dear is evident.. God bless

Rinita Sen (author) on May 24, 2018:

:) :) :)

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on May 24, 2018:

It's like riding a bike.. :)

Rinita Sen (author) on May 24, 2018:

Thank you, Frank! Means a lot as it is my comeback poem. Haven't conjured two rhyming words in 3 years!

Frank Atanacio from Shelton on May 23, 2018:

wow deep drowning words in such a short poem.. awesome..

Related Articles