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Unfair Speed

Agnes Laurens is a writer, wife, and mother of three daughters.

It was unfair

How you took care

The things you ask

Are a big task

Nothing can be done

The next day, it won't be gone

Things need a lot of time

Such as a poem of rhyme

Space is what you need

Per nothing in speed

Thinking about issues

Sometimes with tissues

When someone wants it fast

To me, it is no blast

I'm just nobody on earth

But I'm all it worth

© 2021 Agnes Laurens

Comments

Agnes Laurens (author) from The Netherlands on June 21, 2021:

Thanks. Yes, things and situations may change in a blink of a moment. But also people you are with.

Agnes Laurens (author) from The Netherlands on June 21, 2021:

Thanks, Pamela. You're welcome.

Agnes Laurens (author) from The Netherlands on June 21, 2021:

I love your comment. Very nice words. Thanks.

Agnes Laurens (author) from The Netherlands on June 21, 2021:

Thank you very much.

Agnes Laurens (author) from The Netherlands on June 21, 2021:

Ah thanks, Vidya. I am glad you enjoyed it very much.

Agnes Laurens (author) from The Netherlands on June 21, 2021:

Thanks very much, John! I appreciate it very much.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on June 19, 2021:

I agree. You can’t rush things, especially rhyme in a poem. Short and sweet. Nice work, Agnes.

VIDYA D SAGAR on June 19, 2021:

Nice rhyme and good message in the poem Agnes. I enjoyed reading it.

Patricia Scott from North Central Florida on June 19, 2021:

Thank you for sharing...succinct and to the point. Angels are headed your way this morning.

Misbah Sheikh from The World of Poets on June 19, 2021:

Lovely poem, Agnes. I like it whole but I love the following lines from your poem.

"Thinking about issues

Sometimes with tissues"

Many Blessings to you :)

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on June 19, 2021:

This is a good poem, Agnes. I like the message in the poem.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on June 18, 2021:

Sometimes somone is worth the wait, but don't act to hastily...for life can change in the blink of a moment.

Good write .

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