I am an new writer who enjoys expressing my thoughts through poetry, travel and well being tips

That late afternoon sunset in the window

Of your hospital room where I held your hand

And told you all those loving words

Thanking you for your love and support

Not knowing if you could hear me

But feeling the incredible strength of your love

A powerful moment of courage took over me

To say all those things that would help let you go

To a better place where all the pain would be gone

So up to that space it beckoned you, the light shone

On that winter night just before it all changed

The family gathered around and you were surrounded by love

We left you in peace to go deep into the night

Heaven gained a beautiful spirited angel

And to have let you go has been so painful

But knowing a Mother’s love is forever

Comforts our hearts and souls as we go on.

Comments

Nella DiCarlo (author) from Guelph, Ontario on April 26, 2020:

Thank you I appreciate it ..

FlourishAnyway from USA on April 26, 2020:

This was touching. I'm so sorry about the loss of your mom.

Nella DiCarlo (author) from Guelph, Ontario on March 10, 2020:

Thank you Mitara

Mitara N from South Africa on March 07, 2020:

So well written and touching

Thank you for sharing

Nella DiCarlo (author) from Guelph, Ontario on February 19, 2020:

Thank you so much Umesh

Umesh Chandra Bhatt from Kharghar, Navi Mumbai, India on February 19, 2020:

Subtle and touching. Good write up. Thanks for sharing.

Nella DiCarlo (author) from Guelph, Ontario on February 19, 2020:

Thank you Victoria. It comforts to share it.

Victoria Hannah from Sydney, Australia on February 13, 2020:

Nella this is beautiful. I have lost both my parents so your words wrung my heart.

Nella DiCarlo (author) from Guelph, Ontario on February 04, 2020:

Thank you Brenda, for the supportive and kind words.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on February 03, 2020:

Heartfelt words. I can relate to this part right now... "powerful moment of courage took over me

To say all those things that would help let you go"

This is so hard but necessary to do. Heartbreaking but watching the suffering is worse.

Good write.

Nella DiCarlo (author) from Guelph, Ontario on February 02, 2020:

Thanks Lorna and Liz , appreciated.

Liz Westwood from UK on February 01, 2020:

This is a moving tribute. Your poem conveys the scene very well.

Lorna Lamon on February 01, 2020:

Such a beautiful and touching tribute Nella, written from the heart. I can relate to the last two lines and this is what keeps us strong as we go on. A wonderful tribute in a lovely poem.