Turning Towards Blue

Hey, I am Nishika. I'm a budding writer and enthusiastically explore different areas. I always try to keep myself motivated and enjoy life.

TURNING TOWARDS BLUE

The feel of falling down;

All day long made me frown,

Caught up in the middle of a road;

With memories which now were a load,

Too appalled to shout;

A cry of hate blatantly loud,

I called in the silence to play;

Seeking help to lead the right way,

Walking among the pales and browns;

Trying to lose the infliction somewhere in crowds,

But I tried hard to completely let go,

Never turning towards the blue again I vowed.

© 2018 Brights and Blues by Nishika Chhabra

Comments

Mohit Sonal on October 29, 2019:

Caught up in the middle of a road

With memories which now were a load,

This is a masterpiece

Brights and Blues by Nishika Chhabra (author) from India on July 06, 2018:

Thankyou so much Peggy ma'am for your review. I will be looking for for more such reviews and guidance.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on July 06, 2018:

Loss is inevitable as we go through life. Some memories are worth forgetting and others are definitely worth remembering and cherishing. Your poetry deals with feeling "blue" in an interesting manner.

Brights and Blues by Nishika Chhabra (author) from India on July 06, 2018:

Thank you so much Linda ma'am.

I always look forward for your guidance.

Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on July 06, 2018:

This is an interesting and effective description of a struggle. I love the imagery of "I called in the silence to play".

Himani on March 20, 2018:

Excellent