Thoughts Within

Updated on October 10, 2017
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Israel is a fan of many types of music and loves to write, not in any particular order and does them usually at the same time.

The consciousness blurs ever so delicately,

Right and wrong become one,

Good and evil intertwine beautifully,

Yet, in the end there is none,

Dark days have come and gone,

they cannot be cast out though,

Praying for a new dawn,

For this is a life of woe,

Chaos reigns beneath the very surface,

A demise is inevitable,

Rain drops fall on the terrace,

Nothing is to settle...

© 2017 Israel Mercado


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      Israel Mercado 8 weeks ago

      Thank you Gypsy!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 8 weeks ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderful poetic thoughts.

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      Israel Mercado 2 months ago

      Thank you for your kind words. They are encouraging.

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      The Stages Of ME 2 months ago


      You are truly a poet your words lavished in pain and beauty. I read a few of your Poems and plan to read more. You have a way with expression that warms the heart and makes the soul want to send a hug to silence the pains that lie within.