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There is Something at Twilight


There is something

In the twilight

A magic

An energy

The birds

Can feel it

It wraps around

All creation


So vividly

That you cannot

Let go

You have to

Hold on

Because it will

Take you places

That you haven't been

A journey

Into a deeper place

Inside yourself

Closer to connection

It will bring a

Smile to your face

And you will

Finally feel

At home


Caroline Marie (author) on September 01, 2019:

Thank you Brenda. :)

Thanks you Ruby. :)

Thank you Mark. :)

Mark Tulin from Palm Springs, California on August 04, 2019:

You did twilight justice with your poem, Caroline

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on August 02, 2019:

Twilight is a beautiful time of day. You captured it perfectly with your poetry!

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on August 01, 2019:


I so enjoyed stopping by to read your work.

Your poem speaks volume. It is good to feel everything around you.

Great write.

Caroline Marie (author) on August 01, 2019:

Thank you Ioannis:)

Thank you Gypsy :)

Thank you Alexander :)

Thank you Erik. I really don’t know the style of poetry. I try to just free verse. Thank you for the kind words. :)

Ioannis Arvanitis from Greece, Almyros on August 01, 2019:

Amazing poem! Thank you for this beauty! Eyes which can see this way are the eyes of a Beautiful Soul!

Words create worlds!


Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on August 01, 2019:

Wonderful verse. Enjoyed it.

Alexander James Guckenberger from Maryland, United States of America on August 01, 2019:

It is a wonderful time.

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on August 01, 2019:

Marvelous. I really like the style - what is it called? I like poetry that transports me. And this evening I will remember this.

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