There is something
In the twilight
Can feel it
It wraps around
That you cannot
You have to
Because it will
Take you places
That you haven't been
Into a deeper place
Closer to connection
It will bring a
Smile to your face
And you will
Caroline Marie (author) on September 01, 2019:
Thank you Brenda. :)
Thanks you Ruby. :)
Thank you Mark. :)
Mark Tulin from Ventura, California on August 04, 2019:
You did twilight justice with your poem, Caroline
Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on August 02, 2019:
Twilight is a beautiful time of day. You captured it perfectly with your poetry!
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on August 01, 2019:
I so enjoyed stopping by to read your work.
Your poem speaks volume. It is good to feel everything around you.
Caroline Marie (author) on August 01, 2019:
Thank you Ioannis:)
Thank you Gypsy :)
Thank you Alexander :)
Thank you Erik. I really don’t know the style of poetry. I try to just free verse. Thank you for the kind words. :)
Ioannis Arvanitis from Greece, Almyros on August 01, 2019:
Amazing poem! Thank you for this beauty! Eyes which can see this way are the eyes of a Beautiful Soul!
Words create worlds!
Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on August 01, 2019:
Wonderful verse. Enjoyed it.
Alexander James Guckenberger from Maryland, United States of America on August 01, 2019:
It is a wonderful time.
Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on August 01, 2019:
Marvelous. I really like the style - what is it called? I like poetry that transports me. And this evening I will remember this.