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Insomniac: The Stars are Falling Tonight

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The Stars are Falling Tonight

And I am looking for someone from faraway
A distant love I am hoping to forget
But in the vastness of the night
He always come like the warm rays of sunrise

The unwelcomed but a wanted visitor of my phantasm
Something I wanted to takeaway but I wish to stay
Something that fuel my hallucinations
Something like... You?

While I stand here alone in this lonely balcony
Looking into the nothingness and to the sky
I smile, the stars are falling tonight
And my heart yearns for him

My delusional mind is winding his name
While his face had been the wraith of my life
It's hard to find you
It's hard to forget you

The stars are falling tonight
And into the deep skies
I wanted to bury my feelings
As my tired heart wanted to rest.

© 2019 Crezyl

Comments

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 19, 2019:

Audrey I am glad to read your comments. Thank you so much for appreciating it.❤

Audrey Hunt from Idyllwild Ca. on December 18, 2019:

My favorite thing to do is to gaze at the starry sky. It does something for me. I talk to my beautiful son and I like to think that he is one of the stars and he hears my voice.

Thank you for such lovely poetry.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 18, 2019:

Thank you for reading my poem Purvi ♥ I am very happy now.

Purvi from India on December 18, 2019:

Great !

I also like to see falling stars.

Nice poem.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 17, 2019:

Thank you my supportive tita ❤

rebecca perra maglasang on December 17, 2019:

wow...u're amazing!

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 16, 2019:

Ms Dora, thank you for your warm comment. It makes my heart happy. Thank you for reading it ❤

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on December 16, 2019:

"Unwelcome but wanted." I can relate. I appreciate your ability to reach deep down into feelings and express them so clearly.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 15, 2019:

Manatita thank you for your positive comment, you're making me really happy. Don't worry, I will try to do that. But give me some time because that is very new to me. I am glad to know the facts that you have shared. God bless you Manatita. Thank you always ❤

manatita44 from london on December 15, 2019:

Another amazing and exquisite piece. Great ending!

Can you do regular Sonnets? Do a piece for me, or better still, make it creative or do both. Address it to God but dedicate it to me.

Let me give you some clues: We mystics like 'light' and 'nature. Abstracts like lustre, beauty, effulgence, rays, or more concrete like, horizons, butterflies, rainbows, moon and stars. Sun, twinkle.

We draw on the virgin dawn and like superlatives like, 'epitome of beauty and 'pinnacle of delight' and so forth.

I write about heavenly Love but sometimes visualise feminine beauty and take from it. So you can visualise a man but make it heavenly. Much Love.

P.S Delete the other comment.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 14, 2019:

Jason! Glad to hear something from you. Thank your for sharing part of your life, I'll keep it to my heart. I am still wishing in the stars, I don't want to but I just do and I can't stop myself from doing it xD stars are beautiful and everything in the sky, it's enchanting me. God bless Jason ❤

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 14, 2019:

Hahaha, thank you Eric! ❤

Jason Nicolosi from AZ on December 14, 2019:

Crezyl, when we were kids my friends and I would lay out in the open fields at night waiting for shooting stars to go by. We usually would see one about every hour. Every time we would see a shooting star we would make a wish. I always hoped that my wishes would come true, and in a way some did. I always wished I would fall in-love with a beautiful woman, have a cool dog and a big house. All of those wishes came true. So who knows. Keep wishing and keep reaching for those stars and maybe your dreams will come true one day.

Beautiful poem and great writing style. I truly enjoyed reading it.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 14, 2019:

Rosina thank you so much for reading and appreciating my workXD. I will note it ❤

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on December 14, 2019:

I have trouble with poetry so I came back to read again. Maybe I got more.

Rosina S Khan on December 14, 2019:

Crezyl, words you use in the poem like hallucination and delusional mind simply baffle me. I like your skills in poetry. And like John said, yes you have the perfect image for your every poem.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 14, 2019:

Gosh Eric you just never knew how much I love that song and tears in heaven too. Thank you so much for reading my works, I am truly happy. Hearts! ❤

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on December 14, 2019:

Just me I reckon but this first chilled me so I relaxed and reread and warmth. That is a special gift you have.

I went to https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lKQiLzrcyrQ&li...

Wonderful piece, and I thank you.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 14, 2019:

John thank you so much! Hahahaha, my images matters on my feelings. But John, until now I wish on the stars and believe in it somehow, it's quite funny but I do. I love to look at the stars in the night and so as the moon and the ocean of clouds, I'm so in love with it John. ❤

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on December 14, 2019:

Crezyl, the images you use always fit your poem perfectly and are really a wonderful accompaniment. Of course, I love your beautiful poem as well. We were always told to wish upon a falling star and that it would come true as long as you didn't tell anyone. I hope yours comes true.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 13, 2019:

Clive! Of course it can be for you. This poem is for the people who felt that way. Now, if you have that feeling, of course it's for you.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 13, 2019:

When I was young, I always wish on the stars and I believed in it Brenda. But when I grew up, Science had told me something else but I don't like to remind myself about that knowledge. Stars are great the way I believed it. Thank you so much for your warm comment Brenda ❤

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 13, 2019:

Ruby thank you so much for your invested feelings, I truly appreciated it ❤

Clive Williams from Jamaica on December 13, 2019:

This is beautiful. I thought this poem was for me.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on December 13, 2019:

Crezyl,

Your tired heart didnt get to rest again. It is so hard to bury those feelings when no matter what we do those thoughts pop up into our weary minds.

They say though that one can make a wish upon a falling star.

Nice write...I enjoyed it.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on December 13, 2019:

Beautiful! I can share the feelings of a lost love.