The Roaring Fog, A Poem
Mark Tulin is an international author, humorist, poet, and short-story writer who lives by California's central coast.
The Ocean Fog as Meditation
I see the fog as a soothing mist that comforts as well as quiets the soul. It flows over, envelops, and dims our overactive mind, so we can contemplate nature.
I hope this poem inspires peace. It is intended to be a meditative poem and speaks to how the power of nature enables us to be in the present moment.
Enjoy "The Roaring Fog" and my YouTube video poem.
Poem: The Roaring Fog
I see my reflection
gazing into the heart
of the roaring fog
as I stand on the shore
I sail with mind’s eye
floating like a nymph
a beautiful deity
in the seagull sky
I hear the boat’s
numbing foghorn
that guides me gently
place to place
I watch the mist cross the sea
covering beaches
carrying dreams
to the mountaintops
I embrace this spirit
that drifts and flows
into its perfect murkiness
of freedom’s escape
A photographic memory
a surreal reality
that evaporates
in our imagination.
Comments
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 21, 2020:
Thanks, Li-Jen
Li-Jen Hew on September 21, 2020:
Hi Mark, it is indeed a meditative poem. Your poem creates this picture of a boat floating and rocking gently on the sea with fog all around. The description of the fog's direction is peaceful and my favourite lines are "perfect murkiness of freedom’s escape" and "surreal reality that evaporates in our imagination." Thanks for sharing.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 17, 2020:
Much thanks, Christopher. I’m glad you liked the poem.
poetfreed(ckhanson81) on September 17, 2020:
Very Beautiful expression and creative thoughtfulness in terms of your poetry. I wish you the best always. It is a pleasure to know of you and your poetry. yours sincerely, Christopher.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 16, 2020:
You’re welcome, Prithviraj
Prithviraj Shirole from India on September 15, 2020:
The charming poem, Mark. I was visualizing the scenarios while reading it. Thanks for the serene therapy.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 07, 2020:
Thanks, Shauna.It is one of nature’s pleasures.
Shauna L Bowling from Central Florida on September 07, 2020:
Mark, this is a very soothing piece. The video and your voice behind it leave the reader with a sense of calm. I'll think of this poem each time I experience fog from now on. You've given it a pleasant light.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 05, 2020:
I like your description, Maya.
Maya Ellenson from Hobe Sound, Florida on September 05, 2020:
Profoundly mediative poem, Mark, imbued with palpable serenity!
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 05, 2020:
Thanks, Marlene. I’m glad I gave you a verbal snapshot.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 05, 2020:
Much appreciated Laurie, and thanks for following.
Marlene Bertrand from USA on September 04, 2020:
As I read your poem, I could actually visualize every moment. Very soothing, indeed.
Laurie S Novak from Michigan on September 04, 2020:
I love this! I'm glad I stopped by! Very descriptive and realistic.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 04, 2020:
Thank you, Linda
Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on September 04, 2020:
Your poem contains some lovely imagery. I love the photo, too.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 04, 2020:
Thanks, Anya. Interesting perspective of fog in Punjab.
Anya Ali from Rabwah, Pakistan on September 04, 2020:
Nice! I love fog myself - we get plenty of it here in the Punjab in winter. The roads are then closed, though, to prevent accidents, and that's a bother.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 04, 2020:
Thanks, Brenda, It is a beautiful place to stand.
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on September 04, 2020:
Mark,
You have created the perfect picture.
I wish I was standing there now. It seems very peaceful...i can see the mist.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 04, 2020:
Thanks, Lorna. I think most of us need some peace right now.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 04, 2020:
Thanks, Ankita for your visit and comment.
Lorna Lamon on September 04, 2020:
You have created a sense of peace and serenity in this gentle poem Mark.
Ankita B on September 03, 2020:
A very serene poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Mark Tulin (author) from Ventura, California on September 03, 2020:
You’re welcome, John.
John Hansen from Queensland Australia on September 03, 2020:
A very meditative and relaxing poem, Mark. Thank you for sharing.