She listens to the sound of the rain as it falls
And knows that to her it beckons and calls
The gentle drops turn into a full downpour
That's her cue to head right out the front door
It's dark outside with no one else around
Her bare feet running across the wet ground
Never one to be bashful or afraid to take a chance
She lifts her arms and begins her rain dance
With head held high and eyes closed tight
Her body sways she twists and turns with all her might
She feels that this moment has been preordained
Just for her to be free dancing in the rain
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on October 01, 2019:
I can picture this perfectly. You did a wonderful job.
To be free dancing in the rain is a great feeling.
Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on September 29, 2019:
You showed us, which is more than told us. Beautiful poetry!
Cheryl E Preston (author) from Roanoke on September 27, 2019:
Elijah A Alexander Jr from Washington DC on September 26, 2019:
Very well said, Cheryl, but in my opinion if you make one correction it would perfect the rhythm. If you change "Her body sways she twists and turns with all her might" into "Her body sways, twists and turns with all her might" I think it becomes flawless.
Lorna Lamon on September 26, 2019:
Lovely and I can picture the scene so perfectly.
John Hansen from Gondwana Land on September 26, 2019:
A delightful poem, Cheryl. Oh, how I would love to dance in the rain at the moment. We are experiencing one of the longest droughts in the history of our area. Nice work.
Cheryl E Preston (author) from Roanoke on September 25, 2019:
Thank you Lorna
Lora Hollings on September 25, 2019:
I love this poem, Cheryl! I can see and feel the movement of the dancer in the vivid imagery that your words create. Wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing.