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The Mystifying Journey~ Using Sir John's method

Chrish is a poetry writer who loves to paint, nature and dog lover, who write for herself and happy to share it with you.

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" Life is mystifying journey in a

Misunderstood perception."

I thank you so much to Sir John Hansen for sharing his method with us. Absolutely one of my favorite poet! Though this article isn't a poem but anyway let's bring it on (wink)


Life - can be attaching your purpose in life into a goal,

which will not serve you a long term happiness,

not even if you've achieved it,

and in that very moment you'll miss on all

the life happenings around you,

You'll miss the main purpose of

Your life, of witnessing the world in its great

Wonderful scenarios.

It is a mystifying journey- yet, you take your daily

Life at the mercy of other people, at the mercy

Of your past, at the mercy of circumstances.

Then you painted the world on a canvas

In a misunderstood- life, living the present in

The prison of the past, stuck in an overwhelmed

Miserable emotions, then we end up being a

Problem maker instead of becoming a problem

Solver.

Our emotions is hardwired into a negative mindset

And is controlled by our limited beliefs, earthly circumstances

And the people's public opinion and judgements, that as if,

if we don't please them they will execute us to misery

And sufferings.

Only letting go of the past will set you free

From the pain of before, leave all the extra useless baggage

Behind; the cruel, the painful, the unjust, et cetera

The

Perception-- you hold that keeps you pulling from living

The present, Get out of it.

Command yourself what to do next, the one that will absolutely

Serve you good, if you're writing your life story don't play as a victim

Of an earthly circumstances, don't let those people in the past

And on the present win in your own life story.

It's yours, so wrote it in a good and triumphant one.



Comments

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 16, 2021:

An awesome day to you Ms Devika!!!!!

My heart is over joyed, your efforts truly is appreciated. I'm sending lots of love hugs and kisses!!! I'm wondering when are we going to meet everyone in here so we really can give hugs and kisses and lots of love right ? Haha hopefully wink wink

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 16, 2021:

A Wonderful day to you Misbah my dear!!!!! My heart is very glad I touched your beautiful heart (wink) my beautiful sister. I'm sending lots of love a bunge of kisses a big hugs. Take good care always wink wink

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 16, 2021:

Absolutely an Awesome day to you Ms Dora (wink) I thank you a lot for your great comment. And I'm so very happy it make sense! I'm sending lots of love and kisses.

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 16, 2021:

A beautiful day to you Ms Lorna!!!!!!!!

I'm so very happy you enjoyed it. wink wink wink..... As always take good care. I'm sending lots of love hugs and kisses!

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 16, 2021:

Awesome to see you again Sir John!

(Wink) I thank you so very much for the prompt!!! And my heart is happy to know you found it interesting! wink wink. Much love, hope all is well.

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 16, 2021:

Ms Ann, my heart melts ....

I thank you so much for your generosity!!! I'm sending lots of love hugs and kisses. (wink)

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on April 16, 2021:

A wonderful write up here. A challenge you surely made up to in your own words.

Misbah from The Planet Earth on April 16, 2021:

Chrish, I enjoyed reading it. John is an inspiration to many here including me. These lines touched my heart:

"Our emotions are hardwired into a negative mindset

And is controlled by our limited beliefs, earthly circumstances

And the people's public opinion and judgments, that as if,

if we don't please them they will execute us to misery

And sufferings.

Only letting go of the past will set you free

From the pain of before, leave all the extra useless baggage

Behind; the cruel, the painful, the unjust, et cetera

the perception-- you hold that keeps you pulling from living

The present, Get out of it."

Thanks for sharing it my beautiful sister

Blessings and Love

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on April 16, 2021:

I agree that this is some form of poetry. The message encourages us to find and surrender to our individual purpose which is the best guide for our jouney. Without our sense of purpose, people and things can drive us into destructive detours. Very good work!

Lorna Lamon on April 16, 2021:

I enjoyed this look at life's journey Chrish which certainly made me think. I believe each one of us has a purpose and meaning, however, it's up to us to bring it to life. I agree we should always live life in the present, learn from the past and look forward to the future. I like the positive note you ended on.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on April 16, 2021:

Chrish, I am glad I inspired you to write this with my sentence prompt. I found it an interesting and enjoyable read.

Ann Carr from SW England on April 16, 2021:

I would say this was a poem, as to me it's free verse. You have created a rhythm which creates its own drama and changes of pace.

Either way, it's thought-provoking and upbeat, encouraging us to live our own lives as we would like, despite circumstance or others interfering and thinking they know better.

Live each day as if it's your first and your last!

Ann

Chrish Canosa (author) from Manila Philippines on April 16, 2021:

Awesome wonder Sir Ravi! I also don't know where this article belong. I couldn't find " life lessons " in the subcategory, or does it even exist? We'll see, Hahaha. Anyways I thank you a lot for stopping by!!! I'm glad the article make sense (wink)

Ravi Rajan from Mumbai on April 16, 2021:

A little different Chrish.I really don't know if I can classify this work into a poem or a prose. But it really does not matter as the content you have written about life really makes sense. Life is nothing from the vagaries of fate that blow from the windmills of the gods.Thanks for sharing.

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