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The Hidden Hole

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The Hidden Hole

Twisted bloody knuckles

cracked stained nails grip the walls

with each shallowed breath

closer

she's closer

the stench of the others surrounds her

for she is not the first

a hand picked trophy for his eyes

she has been kept

deep within the earth, she is hidden

hidden in a hole

her escape is her own






Comments

Joni Hooks (author) from Fort Worth, Texas on September 03, 2018:

I totally am!!!

Joni Hooks (author) from Fort Worth, Texas on September 03, 2018:

I am haha! It’s my favorite holiday.

Shannon Henry from Texas on September 03, 2018:

You must be in Halloween mode already!

Joni Hooks (author) from Fort Worth, Texas on September 03, 2018:

Thanks guys! I let my husband read the poem before I posted it and he said it was really creepy haha. I figured why not post it.

Liz Westwood from UK on September 03, 2018:

You convey a creepy atmosphere through this poem.

Rinita Sen on September 03, 2018:

You really have a way with horror pieces. I hope she is able to escape in a part two to this!