Snow-Blind

Hello, my name is Rose. Sometimes I write things, but inspiration is a bit fickle. Feedback is welcome. Appreciate ya.

I can’t taste the venom

Beneath the honey of your tongue.

Can’t hear the lies;

So sweetly they were sung

I can’t look past your warmth

to see wastelands within;

I worship the sinner,

I cannot hate the sin.

I’ll never see the light again,

for I thought you held the sun.

I can’t know your cruelty,

you've already won.

I’ll never love another

with your fingers on my heart;

I’ll just fall into the abyss

As you tear my world apart

Comments

threekeys on February 10, 2018:

Tense, mature and edgy.

I could see it and feel it.

Shyron E Shenko from Texas on February 10, 2018:

Rose, how tragic to be clutched

by the evil that lies within

Quite different from the way it will begin

But, you must extract yourself from the evil end

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Blessing my friend