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Your kind of poetry which is simply written but hardly understood.

The growth of wisdom is the beginning of everything,
When all seems innocent and at one struck it happened,
As the sun rises up and gave a glimpse of dream,
All it takes is a leap of faith then made a soul wander.

Traveling a thousand miles from the point of twisting hearts,
Where there is brokenness until sorrow fades away,
A threshold to a new hope has opened its way,
And making all things new like a bud about to bloom.

Arrows and swords are the same as before,
Causing a heart to feel the deepest pain,
But a more furnished armor gave its strongest guard,
Protecting the fragile flesh from all the wound attempts.

Along with the long run is the tree’s new born fruits,
With all its sweetest taste, a nostalgic moment to savor,
As mind flash the thoughts from a long long way,
And reminisce what had gone through at the end of each day.

© 2020 Faith Cruz


OLUSEGUN from NIGERIA on March 06, 2020:

Uhm mm.

Faith Cruz (author) from Bulacan, Philippines on January 09, 2020:

Miss Nella Thank you so much! I do appreciate.

Faith Cruz (author) from Bulacan, Philippines on January 09, 2020:

Yes Miss Brenda! That's how we get up from the battles we're facing everyday, we get tougher and wiser. Thank you so much

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on January 09, 2020:

When all seems innocent and one struck our soul does wander.

After feeling a heartbreak we eventually grow to see a new bloom but our heart as gotten tougher.

We feel pain with the next heartbreak but we are much colder, able to handle it a bit better not letting it cut us as deep.

We can remember all those times from the past with bitter sweet memories.

Great write.

Nella DiCarlo from Guelph, Ontario on January 09, 2020:

Beautiful and moving poem

Faith Cruz (author) from Bulacan, Philippines on January 08, 2020:

Hi Miss Lorna! Thank you so much for taking time to read my piece. I really do appreciate it.

Lorna Lamon on January 08, 2020:

An emotional journey with a wonderful outcome Faith. Lovely writing.

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