Tanka

Author:

This tanka is my original composition when I was still in college.

The lofty clouds bow

The mountain stands and rises

A man of love smiles

While the sun and vales collide

Gaieties surround each life.

Comments

Jimmy Bio Jr (author) from Tabaco City, Albay, Philippines on May 10, 2020:

Thank you for your kind words, Hajarah. I am happy for your remarks about my simple poem.

Hajarah Azwer from Colombo,Sri Lanka on May 10, 2020:

A lovable and peaceful poem!

Jimmy Bio Jr (author) from Tabaco City, Albay, Philippines on May 05, 2020:

Amidst this pandemic we all are looking forward to having peace of mind and heart. Things we usually get when we go out in nature but it seems a little bit difficult nowadays that's why I wrote them. Thanks again, Brenda for the appreciation. I am very happy reading your remarks.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on May 05, 2020:

Such a peaceful feeling.

Nice writing.

Thanks for sharing.

Jimmy Bio Jr (author) from Tabaco City, Albay, Philippines on May 03, 2020:

Thank you so much Ms Lorna for your appreciation.

Lorna Lamon on May 03, 2020:

You have created a very peaceful image within the lines of this lovely poem. The scenery is stunning.

Jimmy Bio Jr (author) from Tabaco City, Albay, Philippines on May 02, 2020:

Tanka is a Japanese word which means short poem, sir Ryan. There's no limit to our imagination if we put our heart in it. Go and enjoy.

RBN Library and Resource Center from Manila, Philippines on May 02, 2020:

What language is the word tanka? How I wish to be in the place you just described, and sit there for a while.