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Strolling Through Autumn Leaves

Lorna is a published writer with a particular interest in narrative poetry, which she finds therapeutic.

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A morning sky tinged with blue black clouds and a promise of rain

My footsteps quicken as I reach the park and there you were

Like burnished copper on a carpet of green, you cover the ground

Waiting patiently to be lifted and swirled


Bright golden drifts invite me to play

As I scatter you afar, you rustle, creating your own music

Swirls of colour kissing droplets of rain

As a gentle breeze lifts you in nature’s dance


Others join you in a swirling golden mass

As the naked branches fail to keep their falling leaves

Caught up in nature’s dance, my cares fade away

Like autumn leaves

© 2019 Lorna Lamon

Comments

Lorna Lamon (author) on April 10, 2020:

I have always enjoyed this time of year Peggy and I still like to scatter the leaves. The colours are indeed beautiful. Lovely to see you and I hope you enjoy your Easter break, if a little different this year.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on April 10, 2020:

I loved this! It made me think of the glorious fall colors that we used to enjoy in the midwest when we lived there. There is a little color here in the fall in Houston, but nothing to compare with other parts of the country where there are more deciduous types of trees that bear those amazing colors for a time.

Lorna Lamon (author) on January 08, 2020:

I love Autumn Denise and in particular walking through the leaves. So glad you enjoyed the poem and thank you for your generous comments.

Denise McGill from Fresno CA on January 07, 2020:

That is so lovely, the Autumn dance. You truly have a way with picture words.

Blessings,

Denise

Lorna Lamon (author) on November 17, 2019:

So glad you enjoyed the poem Ben. Thank you for visiting and for your kind comments.

Ben Reed from Redcar on November 17, 2019:

A perfect description of a walk through Autumn leaves. Thank you for sharing.

Lorna Lamon (author) on November 09, 2019:

I love this time of year Verlie and all the colours it creates. Thank you for visiting and for your kind comments.

Verlie Burroughs from Canada on November 08, 2019:

Lorna, You've captured the fall nicely. I've been enjoying the change in season too. The leaf colours have been dazzling

Lorna Lamon (author) on September 28, 2019:

Thank you for visiting Haleema - it's also my favourite time of year.

Rêveuse Consciente from Pakistan on September 28, 2019:

Very well described and perfect personification.

I liked it also because I am a mad lover of autumn.

Thanks for sharing!!!

Lorna Lamon (author) on August 27, 2019:

Thanks for visiting and for your kind comments Angela.

AngelaJJ on August 27, 2019:

So beautifully expressed...I could feel myself being in that park :)

Lorna Lamon on August 08, 2019:

Thank you for your kind comments Sherin - I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Sherin Skaria from Kerala,India on August 07, 2019:

This is a beautiful poem describing nature in it's glory!

Lorna Lamon (author) on August 04, 2019:

Thank you for your kind comments Adnan. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Adnan from Earth, Universe on August 03, 2019:

I simply loved the personification that was blended in this beautiful poem ....your words really played with my mind , ensuing a splash of autumnal colours....Thank you for sharing , Lorna !

Lorna Lamon (author) on August 03, 2019:

I think it's the simple things in life that give us the most pleasure Dream On.

DREAM ON on August 02, 2019:

It is also nice to see how many different color leaves there are and how high you can make that pile. Knowing that so many people feel the same way makes it a good day.

Lorna Lamon (author) on August 01, 2019:

Glad you enjoyed the poem Dream On and I hope you do dance around in the leaves. I still jump into puddles which is another thing I enjoy doing. The Fall is our Autumn and I remember when I lived in America I found it to be a lovely way of describing this time of year. Enjoy your day.

DREAM ON on August 01, 2019:

Growing up I always said Fall instead of Autumn. I am not sure if it is the same time? I love those leaves. I could dance around in them. Rustle them with my feet. Dive in them as a kid. Maybe even do it now when no one is looking. I can't wait. I guess I am going to have to. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem. I live for good memories that stay alive and well. Have a happy day.

Lorna Lamon (author) on July 30, 2019:

I always think of autumn as a refreshing break after the hot summer months. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem Lora and thank you for your kind comments.

Lora Hollings on July 29, 2019:

Can't wait for autumn. I'm so tired of the endless hot summer and your poem, Lorna, is like stepping into a much more beautiful and inviting world! Your words bring vivid imagery to what I love most about fall. A wonderful poem that pays tribute to a season filled with such color and beckons us to stop and be caught up in such enrapture. Thanks for sharing.

Lorna Lamon (author) on July 29, 2019:

Thank you for your kind comments Nithya. I love the beauty of autumn and glad you enjoyed the poem.

Nithya Venkat from Dubai on July 29, 2019:

You have beautifully expressed autumn in your poem. I enjoyed reading it. Autumn is my favorite season, and I love the burst of colors that appear magically from nowhere.

Lorna Lamon (author) on July 28, 2019:

Hi Brenda, Autumn holds such special memories for me and I look forward to it every year. So glad you enjoyed the poem.

Lorna Lamon (author) on July 28, 2019:

I feel that autumn has a special beauty and I look forward to it every year. Glad you enjoyed the poem.

Lorna Lamon (author) on July 28, 2019:

Hi Hilary, So glad you enjoyed the poem and thank you for visiting.

Lorna Lamon (author) on July 28, 2019:

Hi Ann, I always look forward to Autumn - I love the smells and cooler air. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and it brought back happy memories. Thank you for commenting.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on July 27, 2019:

Awe .it is amazing, the swirls of those leaves, but I am not quite ready for the seasons to change.

Good write.

Liz Westwood from UK on July 27, 2019:

This evokes strong autumnal images. The season will soon be upon us as the days start to draw in.

Hilary Hsieh from Georgia on July 27, 2019:

Beautiful poem! I enjoyed all of the picturesque imagery.

Ann Carr from SW England on July 27, 2019:

Absolutely beautiful! I loved kicking piles of dead leaves when I was a child - they rustled and flew around and I found it delightful! You brought that all back.

Autumn has such lovely colours; it's my second favourite season, next to Spring.

You have a way with words.

Ann