Still Waters Will Forever Run Deep
Finding my inspiration through the voice of music and poetry. Being creative and finding ways in making life easier and smarter for others.
Still waters run deep
You know it
You feel it
You don’t talk about it
You can’t even sleep
To keeps these feelings deep within
Subjecting the hurt to flourish
You let go of enrichment
Rejecting it to nourish
The emotionless course
Or turn of event
Can cause a rebellion
No room for remorse
Trust in your judgement
Your lessons were learnt,
To repeat it once more
Only you will know
How it feels
To get your hands burnt
Still waters will forever run deep
Destiny is in your hands
Your judgement will tell you
Exactly where it lands
Trust your judgement
Here we are always second guessing ourselves and feel we in it alone, we can all relate in some way even if we think we in too deep, there’s always a way out. Allow your body and mind to flourish from deep within.
© 2020 Mitara N
Comments
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on April 01, 2020:
Hi Rajan,
Thank you for your always appreciated comment.
Take care and be safe
Rajan Singh Jolly from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar, INDIA. on April 01, 2020:
Certainly food for thought in this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on April 01, 2020:
Hi Laurinzo
Thank you for your always appreciated comments.
Take care and be safe.
Laurinzoscott from Kanab, Utah on March 31, 2020:
Absolutely beautiful...you write a. Important message
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 31, 2020:
Hi Tim
Thank you for your valuable and wonderful comment, always appreciated and well received.
Take care and be safe.
Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on March 31, 2020:
Exquisite! Thoughtful and motivating.
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 31, 2020:
Hi Nell
Thank you for your always appreciated comment
Take care and be safe
Nell Rose from England on March 30, 2020:
A very inspiring poem, and something we can all relate too.
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 30, 2020:
Hi Kari,
Thank you for your inspiring and well received comment.
Your comments are always appreciated.
Ba safe
Kari Poulsen from Ohio on March 29, 2020:
I found your poem uplifting. Very nicely written, I think.
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 29, 2020:
Hi Brenda,
Thank you for your always appreciated comments,
Overthinking is something we all tend to be doing in these trying times.
Here's to hope and positivity
Stay safe
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 29, 2020:
Hi Ruby, your words are always appreciated and considered wisdom.
Stay safe
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 29, 2020:
Hi Paula, thank you for your always appreciated comments.
Stay safe
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on March 28, 2020:
I hate it when I have sleepless nights overthinking about something.
Nice write
Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on March 28, 2020:
Your poetry message is loud and clear. We control our deed's or misdeeds. It's in our hand's.
Suzie from Carson City on March 28, 2020:
Mitara…...Profound, so true and healing. Your words are well-received.
Thank you for this share. Stay well. Peace, Paula
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 28, 2020:
Hi Liz
I as well believe they are the deepest thinkers
Always appreciate your comments
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 28, 2020:
Thanks Aishatu, appreciate your comment
Liz Westwood from UK on March 28, 2020:
Often the quieter people in a room are overlooked. But they are usually the deeper thinkers who spend more time in thought than speaking.
Anya Ali from Rabwah, Pakistan on March 27, 2020:
Nice!
Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 27, 2020:
Lol.... Kyler
I think you process it much faster, and I admire that you speak it out.
I think the way you have adjusted with different takes all that has happened in your journey, your actions of making a significant difference speaks to it.
Don't change who you are, for anyone
Kyler J Falk from California on March 27, 2020:
This reminds me of my biggest issue, my big mouth! Hahahaha!
Growing up in a prominent Italian family you start to hear things all the time like, "The loudest man in the room is the weakest" and here I am always being the loudest man in the room. My favorite is, "Silence is more powerful than any spoken word."
The wisdom in this poem reminds me I need to stop, think, and recalculate; to speak less and act more.
Thank you for sharing, Mitara!