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Still Waters Will Forever Run Deep

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Finding my inspiration through the voice of music and poetry. Being creative and finding ways in making life easier and smarter for others.

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Still waters run deep

You know it

You feel it

You don’t talk about it

You can’t even sleep


To keeps these feelings deep within

Subjecting the hurt to flourish

You let go of enrichment

Rejecting it to nourish


The emotionless course

Or turn of event

Can cause a rebellion

No room for remorse


Trust in your judgement

Your lessons were learnt,

To repeat it once more

Only you will know

How it feels

To get your hands burnt


Still waters will forever run deep

Destiny is in your hands

Your judgement will tell you

Exactly where it lands

Trust your judgement

Here we are always second guessing ourselves and feel we in it alone, we can all relate in some way even if we think we in too deep, there’s always a way out. Allow your body and mind to flourish from deep within.

© 2020 Mitara N

Comments

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on April 01, 2020:

Hi Rajan,

Thank you for your always appreciated comment.

Take care and be safe

Rajan Singh Jolly from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar, INDIA. on April 01, 2020:

Certainly food for thought in this poem. Thanks for sharing.

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on April 01, 2020:

Hi Laurinzo

Thank you for your always appreciated comments.

Take care and be safe.

Laurinzoscott from Kanab, Utah on March 31, 2020:

Absolutely beautiful...you write a. Important message

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 31, 2020:

Hi Tim

Thank you for your valuable and wonderful comment, always appreciated and well received.

Take care and be safe.

Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on March 31, 2020:

Exquisite! Thoughtful and motivating.

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 31, 2020:

Hi Nell

Thank you for your always appreciated comment

Take care and be safe

Nell Rose from England on March 30, 2020:

A very inspiring poem, and something we can all relate too.

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 30, 2020:

Hi Kari,

Thank you for your inspiring and well received comment.

Your comments are always appreciated.

Ba safe

Kari Poulsen from Ohio on March 29, 2020:

I found your poem uplifting. Very nicely written, I think.

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 29, 2020:

Hi Brenda,

Thank you for your always appreciated comments,

Overthinking is something we all tend to be doing in these trying times.

Here's to hope and positivity

Stay safe

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 29, 2020:

Hi Ruby, your words are always appreciated and considered wisdom.

Stay safe

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 29, 2020:

Hi Paula, thank you for your always appreciated comments.

Stay safe

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on March 28, 2020:

I hate it when I have sleepless nights overthinking about something.

Nice write

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on March 28, 2020:

Your poetry message is loud and clear. We control our deed's or misdeeds. It's in our hand's.

Suzie from Carson City on March 28, 2020:

Mitara…...Profound, so true and healing. Your words are well-received.

Thank you for this share. Stay well. Peace, Paula

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 28, 2020:

Hi Liz

I as well believe they are the deepest thinkers

Always appreciate your comments

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 28, 2020:

Thanks Aishatu, appreciate your comment

Liz Westwood from UK on March 28, 2020:

Often the quieter people in a room are overlooked. But they are usually the deeper thinkers who spend more time in thought than speaking.

Anya Ali from Rabwah, Pakistan on March 27, 2020:

Nice!

Mitara N (author) from South Africa on March 27, 2020:

Lol.... Kyler

I think you process it much faster, and I admire that you speak it out.

I think the way you have adjusted with different takes all that has happened in your journey, your actions of making a significant difference speaks to it.

Don't change who you are, for anyone

Kyler J Falk from Corona, CA on March 27, 2020:

This reminds me of my biggest issue, my big mouth! Hahahaha!

Growing up in a prominent Italian family you start to hear things all the time like, "The loudest man in the room is the weakest" and here I am always being the loudest man in the room. My favorite is, "Silence is more powerful than any spoken word."

The wisdom in this poem reminds me I need to stop, think, and recalculate; to speak less and act more.

Thank you for sharing, Mitara!