Spent no more - LetterPile - Writing and Literature
Updated date:

Spent no more

Spent no more


Deaf, to a deafening inner voice,
those screams persistent,
"For someone else’s race,
don’t you get spent".


The locked dark horse,
at last broke its barrier,
to run its race,
once more.

spent-no-more

© 2020 Hari Prasad S

Comments

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on August 01, 2020:

Most of the situation are not in control, we can only wish for that, but we do run others race. Thank you anupam for the lovely appreciation.

Anupam Mitu from MUMBAI on June 25, 2020:

"someone else's race, don't you get spent"

If we get the answer to this we will be much better.

Nice one Hari :-)

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on April 17, 2020:

Thanks Brenda.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on March 24, 2020:

Tis true. One must follow his own path, not that of someone else.

Nice write.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on March 18, 2020:

That's true. Thanks devika

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on March 10, 2020:

A great part of life is to be free

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on March 07, 2020:

Eiddwen thanks for the visit and appreciation note. :-)

Eiddwen from Wales on March 07, 2020:

A great message in not too many words. Cleverly composed and thank you for sharing.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on March 07, 2020:

Thanks John. You have summarized it perfectly.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on March 07, 2020:

Nice work Hari. we have to break free to run our own race and realize our potential.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on March 06, 2020:

Ruby that true, breaking free is a big battle won. Thanks :-)

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on March 06, 2020:

Locked doors are something we all encounter, breaking free is a victory. I love this, The message is clear.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on March 06, 2020:

Lorna you are perfect in your analysis. Thanks for the appreciation. :-)

Lorna Lamon on March 06, 2020:

Breaking free from the constraints of life is what these words said to me Hari. Full of strength - beautifully written.