Whispers of Thunder, Creative Writing

Updated on February 6, 2019
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“Sound of Silence”, by Simon and Garfunkel, has the same rhythm and beat as my Song Lyrics below, “Whispers of Thunder”. Enjoy!

Whispers of Thunder

Purple Lightening
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Sound of Silence - Instrumentals Only - Simon and Garfunkel

His thunderous Voice reaches the furthest of heights, and the lowest of depths imaginable, but so as not to cause us major heart-attacks or strokes, He speaks with each one of us, softly and tenderly, in whispers.

Whispers of Thunder

God Whispers Into My Heart

Holy Spirit, my sweet guide

Within my heart He does abide

Holding that sneaky darkness at bay

While His light shines throughout my day

And His power, that is rooted in my soul

Does console

Inside whispers of thunder

He softens pain that does abound

Pardon sins that had me drowned

Then demons run with no delay

They dare not provoke His wrath in this way

I do thank Him for strength from temptations of the night

I am revived

By whispers of thunder

Yet, my mind often breaks His law

Temptation scourges restlessly

Stealing comfort without mercy;

Stealing treasures beyond costly;

Stirrings of the flesh that distract faithfulness,

I confess

Testing whispers of thunder

“Child” says He, “You can still hear

Whispers of My thunder near;

Sin will not change my love for you;

I am here to escort you through”

And His voice, pure golden lightning rods

Quake the whispers of thunder

To Him belongs my whole soul

My cup overflows with my bowl

And my heart sings out in freedom

As I watch on for His Kingdom

And The Lord says “The joy of this Splendor is here presently within you

In transparent view

Known in Whispers of thunder”

This thrill of awe consumes my inner-core as the Perfect Peace of His Holy Spirit breathes His Wholeness into me!

Whispers of Thunder

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Whispers of Thunder

Lightening Rod
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Sound of Silence - Vocals - Simon and Garfunkel

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      • Rhyme Vine Poetry profile imageAUTHOR


        13 months ago from Uninhabited Regions

        Dream On,

        My day is already starting out wonderfully in the reading of your inspiring comments to me!

        Thank you!



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        DREAM ON 

        13 months ago

        I am convinced you can make anything rhyme. What a wonderful gift you have. Explore and enjoy. May your day be filled with happiness that starts way down inside and just keeps bubbling out.

      • Rhyme Vine Poetry profile imageAUTHOR


        15 months ago from Uninhabited Regions


        Thank you! You are so kind.


        Tamara xxx

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        William Kovacic 

        15 months ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

        Well, you did it again, Tamara. Beautifully done - just what I've come to expect from you. Thanks for this one.

      • Rhyme Vine Poetry profile imageAUTHOR


        15 months ago from Uninhabited Regions


        Thank you so much; I knew words could not adequately describe The Divine, but I figured that the use of contrast, “whisper/thunder “ would help describe His Omnipotence just a tiny bit :-)

        Tamara xxx

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        Dora Weithers 

        15 months ago from The Caribbean

        I love the image of whispering thunder to represent the Holy Spirit. He whispers softly and gently; but with an effect as powerful as the thunder. Well done!

      • Rhyme Vine Poetry profile imageAUTHOR


        15 months ago from Uninhabited Regions


        I am obliged. Thank you so much!

        Tamara xxx

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        Kashif Ali Abbas 

        15 months ago from Pakistan

        The very rhythm is so smooth. Creative and reads awesome

        wonderful choice of words

      • Rhyme Vine Poetry profile imageAUTHOR


        15 months ago from Uninhabited Regions

        Thank you, Flourish :-) lol.. I just tapped my head, and it sounded hollow; it even echoed. I hope that’s a good sign. ha

        Tamara xxx

      • FlourishAnyway profile image


        15 months ago from USA

        Who knows quite how you come up with these creative lyrics!


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