Showstopper
Showstopper
Your expressions are a showstopper,
to conquer their angle, i'll stoop forever.
My heart has lost a beat,
hope that beat is in your heart.
Is that glimpse saying, "You stay !!!"
oh i sigh, i am high.
Hey flower, let me be,
your buzzing bee.
© 2020 Hari Prasad S
Comments
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on August 01, 2020:
Thank you Anupam :-)
Anupam Mitu from MUMBAI on June 25, 2020:
beautiful poem!
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 11, 2020:
Thanks Angela. :-)
AngelaJJ on June 11, 2020:
cute poem :)
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 11, 2020:
Thanks brenda for your appreciation note. :-)
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on June 06, 2020:
To feel that love and hope your glimpse tells the one to stay. Romance in the air.
Nice write.
Shanti on June 02, 2020:
Thanks Hari for the suggestion. I will certainly do that!
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 02, 2020:
Thank you shanti. You must come on board here as well. Hubpages is good platform. :-)
Shanti on June 02, 2020:
I absolutely loved this...so playfully pleasing to the mind. An enjoyable write Hari!
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 01, 2020:
Thanks Linda for the nice appreciation.
Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on June 01, 2020:
This is an enjoyable poem of romance and hopefulness. Thanks for sharing it.
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 01, 2020:
Lorna thank you so much for the lovely comment too. :-)
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 01, 2020:
Eric, it's wonderful to know you read that poem again. I remember you loved it. Well I do walk everyday and yes it did help. :-)
Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 01, 2020:
Thanks Ruby. :-)
Lorna Lamon on June 01, 2020:
Lovely notes of romance in this poem Hari which has a lyrical feel to it.
Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on June 01, 2020:
Wonderful. Really very pleasant and happy. Thank you.
(I read your "Walkers Talk" this morning. I think you must be walking these days - because this is a good write.
Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on June 01, 2020:
So cute and lighthearted, loved it!