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She Doesn't Know She's Beautiful

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Chloe has a Bachelors degree in Creative Writing. Her favorite genre is teen fiction and she hopes to one day write a best-selling novel.

She doesn't know she's beautiful
It's in the way she walks, she talks
The way she moves when she thinks no one is looking
The way she tilts her head when she laughs
She doesn't know she's beautiful

But this beauty isn't just about physical appearance
It's about her soul
She has such a gentle heart
Caring for everyone around her
And this is what creates that beauty

She doesn't know she's beautiful
And I'm not the only one who sees
There are few among us who recognize it
Staring amazed as she passes
Not knowing what makes us stare

She's an amazing girl
With a heart more pure than you can know
But it's difficult when all you see is the outside shell
Hiding nearly everything she is
Covering up the beauty

You're Beautiful!!!
I want to scream, to shout
To make her understand
But she doesn't know she's beautiful
She doesn't know she's wonderful

She thinks beauty lies in clothing, makeup, jewelry
She thinks it lies in her appearance
She doesn't realize how wrong she is
She doesn't realize that true beauty
Comes from within

She doesn't know she's beautiful
She doesn't know that some would give the world
To see her smile just for them
To see her open up and let the beauty free
To see her comfortable with all that she is

Wait for the one who can see you for that beauty
Wait for the one who can see past the mask
Past the clothing, and makeup, and stuff
That fill up your life
And fill up your heart

Because no matter what
You're beautiful
I mean it with all my heart
You're more beautiful than you imagine
And knowing it's the hardest part

© 2010 Chloe

Comments

Nurtjahja J from Malang on November 12, 2016:

Nice

Donna Willoughby on November 11, 2016:

I love this poem. It touches the heart because I believe everyone knows or is the girl who doesn't really know she is beautiful.

simone93 on March 16, 2013:

Beautiful Thank you for sharing

parashuram pawar on March 12, 2013:

its really nice poem..

kathryn1000 from London on December 23, 2012:

A beautiful poem

Sreejith V on December 02, 2012:

beautiful poem

Roven on November 10, 2012:

I have a beautiful daughter..But I always remind her you beauty is complete when you are beautiful from within..She would say ok mum I know ok.

Tijani Achamlal from Morocco on November 01, 2012:

Very beautiful piece of writing.Everything God created by saying:Be ,and then be it.But man was created directly by God s hand,which means he is the most beautiful creature and it s an honor for us to be special and loved so much by God.So,that Girl is beautiful by nature and her characters makes her looking more beautiful.The real beauty is the only the skin deep.I voted up.

hi friend from India on October 22, 2012:

Very nice poem

Mike Robbers from London on October 21, 2012:

Nice poem :) Your repeated verse is a good touch. Great sentiment.

Chloe (author) from Minnesota on August 11, 2012:

Sure you can quote it. I feel honored. I just ask that you make sure to attribute it to me.

Mr Love Doctor from Puerto Rico on August 11, 2012:

Gosh, what a lovely poem. Could I quote at least part of it in my novel "Burnt Sienna?" It's about a lady who was burned by her ex and then learns to love again when she meets a man on a tropical island. You can check it out on my list of Hubs to get a feel for it before you give me your answer. But I think you will see it's perfect.

zoe on August 05, 2012:

I don't like it I love it

fjohn from india on July 15, 2012:

this beautiful poem is beautifully written!!!! its just beautiful i said.

Sima Ballinger from Michigan on July 12, 2012:

I like your quote, and so...."what if he calls you 'hot', 'pretty', and 'beautiful'? Nice poem!

Chloe (author) from Minnesota on July 12, 2012:

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Goku on July 12, 2012:

its wonderful poem .. just awesome

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on July 06, 2012:

I bet you're beautiful too, nochance. It takes beauty of soul to recognize beauty in someone else. Linking this to my list of favorites on "They're The Marrying Kind." Thanks for sharing.l

smga22 from Dhaka, Bangladesh on July 06, 2012:

Beautiful Hub. Looking forward to get more from you.

Pushpa on July 04, 2012:

It is a wonderful poem wen people believe this they wil becom an orginal human being

Lisa Chronister from Florida on June 25, 2012:

This is such an awesome poem. Your words are truly beautiful! I voted up.

Chloe (author) from Minnesota on June 24, 2012:

Thanks Julia. I'm really glad to hear that. Glad you liked the poem. :)

Julia on June 24, 2012:

I bookmarked this on my iPhone. I love this. Every time I get upset I refer to this, beauty does come from within.

Miche Wro on May 17, 2012:

I really and I do mean really love this poem.

Muveri on April 11, 2012:

Its beautiful,I agree that beauty comes from within, if only everybody saw it that way.

Jimmac1959 from Levittown, Pennsylvania on April 09, 2012:

i really loved that !!!!!!!!

Brandi Goodman from Holland, MI on April 07, 2012:

Very nice poem. This reminded me of the song "She Don't Know She's Beautiful" by Sammy Kershaw. It's country, don't know if you've heard of it or not but it's a good song about the same thing you're talking about.

This is the chorus:

She don't know she's beautiful (never crossed her mind)

She don't know she's beautiful (no she's not that kind)

She don't know she's beautiful

Though time and time I've told her so

Tara Sellers on September 13, 2011:

This is such a wonerfully BEAUTIFUL poem!!! A lot of people could learn something from this...I bow to you...lovely work of art!

Richard83 from West Virginia on May 31, 2011:

Great poetry. As a poet myself, I can see and hear the words clearly. A very unique writing you have here. You have a gift and a kind heart, which is what I take out of the words that you have written. Truly beautiful, inside to out. Great piece.

simone93 on May 16, 2011:

Love this poem....I needed it today

michael ely from Scotland on February 25, 2011:

Hi nochance. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's very good.

Michael.

Danny Lee Graham from Zephyr ,Texas , near Brownwood ,Texas on August 07, 2010:

The most beautiful poem I have read in quite some time !

I am a simple man I think , plain and even homely ( with a face for radio ), you even made me feel better about me , thank you.

William Kovacic from Pleasant Gap, PA on July 14, 2010:

You did an excellent job of describing your thoughts. That last quote really sums it up. Thanks!

james jenkins jr from deep in thought on June 25, 2010:

I'd have to say this hub is beautiful.

ezhuthukari from Kerala on June 22, 2010:

So true! Nice poem:-)

pinkhawk from Pearl of the Orient on June 09, 2010:

indeed I agree 100%!...great I've found the real beauty thru these words! thank you very much ma'am! ^.^...

dracaslair on June 08, 2010:

this is a true poem thou.some women don't think they are buetifull

Chloe (author) from Minnesota on June 08, 2010:

Thank you everyone. I'm glad you liked it.

epigramman on June 08, 2010:

..and if beauty is your main objective in writing then you have certainly achieved your goal!

This is a gift as a writer who have so generously shared with us - and that in itself is a beautiful thing!

epigramman on June 08, 2010:

...but I do!!!

raphael12345 on June 08, 2010:

a true work of art

billyaustindillon on June 07, 2010:

From the heart and soul - beautiful indeed :)

Dave Mathews from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA on June 07, 2010:

Thank you for this beautiful poem.

Mentalist acer from A Voice in your Mind! on June 07, 2010:

This is a beautifully intimate poem and I enjoyed the sentiment...kindly yours nochance

Bory on June 06, 2010:

This is a very sweet poem. You are very fortunate.