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you left me

shaken to the core

with your harsh words

and cold demeanor

I feel sick

with the thunder

that you left behind

it vibrated

through my soul

and left me

lying dead

unraveled

and unwound

Comments

Caroline Marie (author) on January 16, 2020:

Hello Brenda, thank you for your kind words. :)

Hello Rasma, thank you for your kind words. :)

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on December 14, 2019:

Most expressive the emotions shine through

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on December 11, 2019:

I can feel this poem...such strong emotion.

I can feel the harsh words and picture you being taken aback...leaving you sick.

Words do seem like thunder when they are traveling through your body.

Nice write.

Caroline Marie (author) on December 11, 2019:

Hi Demas, thank you for the comment. Everything I write is from past experience. I think that’s how you really get in touch with your soul’s emotion and true essence.

Hi Jason, thank you for your comment and compliments. It is greatly appreciated.

Demas W Jasper from Today's America and The World Beyond on December 10, 2019:

But not "unwounded" obviously. True story, or just a plaintive poem?

Jason Nicolosi from AZ on December 10, 2019:

My heart ached a bit after I read that poem. Amazingly powerful and emotional. A sad poem, yet beautifully written.