Shaken to the Core
you left me
shaken to the core
with your harsh words
and cold demeanor
I feel sick
with the thunder
that you left behind
it vibrated
through my soul
and left me
lying dead
unraveled
and unwound
Comments
AUTHORHello Brenda, thank you for your kind words. :)
Hello Rasma, thank you for your kind words. :)
Most expressive the emotions shine through
I can feel this poem...such strong emotion.
I can feel the harsh words and picture you being taken aback...leaving you sick.
Words do seem like thunder when they are traveling through your body.
Nice write.
- AUTHOR
Hi Demas, thank you for the comment. Everything I write is from past experience. I think that’s how you really get in touch with your soul’s emotion and true essence.
Hi Jason, thank you for your comment and compliments. It is greatly appreciated.
But not "unwounded" obviously. True story, or just a plaintive poem?
My heart ached a bit after I read that poem. Amazingly powerful and emotional. A sad poem, yet beautifully written.
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