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Day ends



Day ends

Day ends silently,
The sun setting -
A last blush of colour
Behind a curtain of clouds.

This old house
Settles for the night
Creaking its ancient timbers
Arranging its worn and dusty parts
For the still watches of the night.

On the roof
Rain spatters
Enveloping the night
In the thrumming of its steady beat.

© 2021 Nan Hewitt


Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on February 26, 2021:

You captured the loveliness of a sunset as the night approaches. I could almost hear the rain tapping on the rooftop when reading your poetry.

Ravi Rajan from Mumbai on February 26, 2021:

Nice and very emotive. I loved the vivid picture you were able to paint here with your words. Thanks for sharing.

Nan Hewitt (author) from Albany, Western Australia on February 26, 2021:

Thank you for your reviews. They are very much appreciated.

Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on February 25, 2021:

Beautifully expressed poem, and nice imagery. Thank you for sharing.

Liz Westwood from UK on February 25, 2021:

Beautiful photo matched by an atmospheric and well-worded poem.

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