September Poem #1

I write, read, crochet, sing, and play musical instruments. A sucker for learning.

An addition of considerable water

can cause a ripple to a vast ocean

So is your shadow

It can wash away a sea of longingness

leaving a clean slate of hope

Pass by any time

Impress a mark so I can reach the shore

and see you

without your shadow

Certain and ready

Comments

Denise Joy Padilla (author) from Philippines on September 18, 2020:

Thank you, Chrish. :)

You too.

Chrish Canosa from Manila Philippines on September 18, 2020:

That was short yet powerful!

I hope you have an awesome Friday;-)

Denise Joy Padilla (author) from Philippines on September 17, 2020:

Hi, Linda!

Thank you for the comment. That's what I really want to achieve in all of my poems. :)

Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on September 17, 2020:

This is a lovely poem. I loved the pictures that it created in my mind.

Denise Joy Padilla (author) from Philippines on September 17, 2020:

Long time, Lorna. :)

Thank you as always.

Lorna Lamon on September 17, 2020:

This is a beautiful poem with an ethereal feel. Loved it.